saintboy
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| 14 Oct 2012 06:20 PM |
[Talk] Take the time to relate to music, to the wonders of what you have and haven't heard. Its an art. And the rich and famous use the hype as a quick scheme just to develop a new price to the name. But when difference comes around its a new face, a new tone, and some like to call it hip hop or a voice to the new era. I Just call it the Sweetest sound.
Watch me work
[Saint] Cultivated warrior, now ready for war When I was young I was troubled.. still thrown out the door I had no peice of mind.. or lead in my life Only lesson I knew, is how to swing when you fight People knew I was violent, but didn't know I was lost So at the same time I was only paying the cost. I know my mom was sickened by my gruesome daze flushed out with anger, filled with top massive rage Don't know what to do, where to go from here ? Should I fail in my life ? or should I switch my gears. Thou turned to god hoping he could take my fears maybe a new road of change would appear Took me time, but now i'm back on the right track f--- the dum s---, i'll leave that for my asz' cr--k Far from the past, keeping my conscience from flashbacks the only way to stop me is take my glory, no abstract.
[Chorus] This is the sweetest sound, .. this is the sweetest sound Victory is coming, we ain't stoppin until they bring us down (x2)
[Saint] Looking for a sunny day. Knowing it was miles away Got to keep it pushing, we will rise until the money's made Whatever fame did to yall, Won't let that sh-- do to me keep it realistic,if I fall they'll all see me weak I ain't havin' none of that i'm shakin ni-----s like a running back got the tactics of a raptor i'll kill any ni----- in my habitat Now I see my (future) only getting brighter, I used to have (2 chainz) a pack of c1gz, (50 cents), and a lighter But now a ni---- on fire all gold attire ima street king with the absolutes of a self-made writer Now tell me I ain't good enough, now tell me I ain't h00d enough only getting hotter, no thoughts of me even coolin' off Always talk behind my back, even when i'm not around so tell me how it taste, when you hear the talent of the sweetest sound.
[Chorus] This is the sweetest sound, .. this is the sweetest sound Victory is coming, we ain't stoppin until they bring us down (x2)
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| 14 Oct 2012 06:24 PM |
| ESPENYOL EXELENTEH! PHONEHO!NO PENDEHO CAN DEFEAT THIS SONG!! |
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saintboy
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| 14 Oct 2012 10:12 PM |
| MAN THIS IS BOSS. I WANT TO COLLABE WITH YALL' |
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saintboy
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| 14 Oct 2012 10:38 PM |
| Thanks bro. & sure just let me know when your ready to make a hit |
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ducky980
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| 14 Oct 2012 10:44 PM |
The song was terrible
I did like the chorus though but your not the person who I would pick to have it |
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saintboy
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ducky980
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| 14 Oct 2012 10:49 PM |
| In other words im saying you suck and should give up ro-rapping forever and do something else with his life like skate boarding because thats what lilwayne did |
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saintboy
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| 14 Oct 2012 10:51 PM |
| ok. I know for a fact I am a better lyricist than you, so why bother argue with a wannabe critic for roblox. |
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ducky980
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| 14 Oct 2012 10:54 PM |
| I'msorry but i'm better than you so go back to your house or street or trashcan or whatever you call it and find better tree bark to write on |
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saintboy
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| 14 Oct 2012 11:00 PM |
| So immature bro. Its one thing to criticize peoples work, but when you try too hard to lower someones self-esteem(which you aren't) that is just pathetic. |
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racsmnoz
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| 15 Oct 2012 04:55 AM |
Nice bars saintboy
Ducky is baws ~Rac |
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saintboy
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| 15 Oct 2012 10:28 AM |
Not very good...
You used punctuation in the middle of a sentence and this is how it should Rhyme.
"TAKING MY SOUL!" "BURN ALL THE COAL"
Not:
"TAKING MY SOUL! THE FIRE! IS BURNING THE COAL"
5/10 |
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saintboy
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saintboy
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| 15 Oct 2012 04:42 PM |
| That just shows the difference between my bars and whatever you just said. Pretty basic |
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CoffeFoam
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:45 PM |
the first verse was eh..i though the second verse was like 10 times better tho. like..it was rllly fkn good bro. i liked the connection of everything in the 2nd verse exept for "Always talk behind my back, even when i'm not around"...
(talking behind someones back means talking about someone when they arn't around so didnt really make sense but i understood what u meant)
overall because u stepped it up in the 2nd verse id give it an 8.5/10. |
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altar30
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:48 PM |
| I actually really like this, your becoming one of my favorite Ro-rappers, keep it up :) |
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saintboy
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:52 PM |
@coffee I can agree with you on that, I felt I did do better in the second verse but got a little lazy with it on my last bar. But appreciate the feedback bro.
@Altar30 Thanks bro, and yea I kind of just started writing down raps I think i'll become better over time. lol |
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CoffeFoam
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:56 PM |
| everyone becomes better over time xD..but ya i agree. rlly good sheet bro |
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lila47
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| 15 Oct 2012 10:05 PM |
I think that the lyrics need to be fixed and that you need to remember the syllable thingy.
and it was a bit to loud :3
7.3/10 |
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saintboy
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| 15 Oct 2012 10:06 PM |
| A bit to loud ? lol but ok |
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CoffeFoam
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| 15 Oct 2012 11:35 PM |
| loud? I didn't know typed words have such a powerful voice. LOL |
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CoffeFoam
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| 15 Oct 2012 11:36 PM |
i still stand with an 8.5
10 being pro stat |
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saintboy
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| 16 Oct 2012 01:11 AM |
| lol idk I guess she felt the power of the song |
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