sugar73
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:46 PM |
Called Nuclear Winter. It will be a short bittersweet story about six survivors traveling through the postapocolyptic continent of North America. Dicuss. |
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katuu
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sugar73
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:47 PM |
Nice grammar. Have you ever wrriten a story?(A good one?) No you haven't. So shut up and get out. |
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Milbert23
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:48 PM |
but then
they realized
they were the mutants!!!!!! |
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katuu
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:48 PM |
ha you got so mad that's a sign of failure |
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:48 PM |
| then they eat each other in a restaurant for the irony |
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sugar73
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:49 PM |
| No it doesn't anger me that you fail to comprehend a complex storyline, it angers me that you have a low intellect in every application and cannot process details. |
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katuu
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:53 PM |
"No it doesn't anger me that you fail to comprehend a complex storyline,"
i don't fail to comprehend a complex storyline, i'm just saying that it's most likely been done and that the odds are you will fail
", it angers me that you have a low intellect"
assumptions are never good
"Have you ever wrriten a story?(A good one?) No you haven't."
you don't know that, really assumptions
"So shut up and get out."
no thank you |
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alnick
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:53 PM |
>complex storyline
you described it in one sentence
it is not complex |
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sugar73
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:55 PM |
Thanks for breaking up my writing, but I think I can read just fine. I can tell you have a low intellect because of your horrible lack of grammar. Maybe if you grew up a little bit you could understand what grammar is.
Anyway I'm going to do some reasearch on nuclear warheads and then I'll start writing. |
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katuu
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| 15 Oct 2012 09:57 PM |
"I can tell you have a low intellect because of your horrible lack of grammar."
use of grammar ≠ intellect
"Maybe if you grew up a little bit you could understand what grammar is."
what makes you assume i don't know what grammar is why do you keep going back to grammar |
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