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| 13 Oct 2012 07:49 PM |
Ok I have an idea. It's a good one
Seamonsters
Set in 1590
There are rumours going around about seamonsters Cthulu, Leviethan, The kraken ect. But you are one of the brave few to see these things for yourself. You joined a ship going out for a cargo run that are going through the monster sightings.
Plot: So the players are all the same ship that gets attacked by these monsters and have to hopelessly fight back aginst them
I'm willing to make alot of changes, because it definetly needs some |
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| 13 Oct 2012 11:08 PM |
That's bad And you should feel bad.
-Comfortably Numb- |
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| 13 Oct 2012 11:10 PM |
| I don't think i've ever seen you compliment anything, and it's just an idea, as I said it needs alot of changes |
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| 13 Oct 2012 11:32 PM |
| I'm thinking of making it 2 parts, first one in the past and the second part modern. |
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| 14 Oct 2012 11:37 PM |
| Why does no one reply to my collabs? |
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banshee7
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| 15 Oct 2012 02:53 AM |
"Ermm... ok? [squid] deamons...."
:3
~The Kinda Quitter ~ |
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EXO
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| 15 Oct 2012 03:05 AM |
@Yog
For most Roblox players, it's quite late. Most players are from the US, probably mostly California (Where Roblox started). So don't expect a lot of guys online right now. A good way to see how many roleplayers are online is to look at the "Games" page. I know it sounds weird, but if there are a lot of people in games, it's likely that there are more roleplayers online.
Anyways, I think it's cool, slightly more original that much of the stuff I post or see. Oh, and the way you've presented it, it lacks flair. You need to add tragedy, heroism, revenge, avarice, or any of those other elements that make a plot something more than ordinary. |
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