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| 12 Oct 2012 08:33 PM |
Alex Tyson the comeback? You aint' even got a back Forget this your speinless Your rhymeless, Fine unless If you dont have a spein Your not worth my time Haters make you famous Well who exactly hates? Other then me, Is this your dream Its a fantasy, Soon youll see I have a question, Before you get your pension Attention? nah, How is it a comeback if you never came back Put your speinless body up on a pity rack Are your rhymes suppose to be inspiring? Cause there requiring, Legit rhymes You whine, I see tears, It would appear none of your songs are real Like a banana Youll get peel'd #Youmad? Your bad, Its just sad Taylor gang? Alex show your fangs Take your time to explain, dang your plain, Do i feel your pain? No, you gotta go, so , Oh you choked Ymcmb? Alex bro your worse then glee Pay the fee, Freaking out till its free Rewind, back in time, before you were fake You fell in to a pit, Still trying to spit? Jump over that candle you lit, fell out the window Three stooges, Your moe, Haters gonna hate till and earthquake strikes us all, Hit the wall I heard you called Gonna end this rap, Your just a waste and trap Blow my cap? im good, Even if you could, And you just stood On the spot till you rot, You are bad a lot, So stop Please before i hit my knee's like the trees your stuck to the ground Get your rhymes from the lost and found, so quit your frown, ill stick around for the crowd |
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altar30
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| 12 Oct 2012 08:39 PM |
| Lol thanks bro, Im waiting for alex tyson's comment XD |
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shonyshon
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| 12 Oct 2012 08:57 PM |
Wasn't good. Alex isn't good, either. Like fighting fire with fire. Or firecrackers with firecrackers. |
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Jared343
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| 12 Oct 2012 09:00 PM |
| Can you say in specific what you dont like |
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Jared343
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| 12 Oct 2012 09:01 PM |
| Nothing in general, I just thought it deserved a 5/10. |
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shonyshon
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| 12 Oct 2012 09:02 PM |
| Well, some parts didn't make sense. Another, It was too simple: no climax. |
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| 12 Oct 2012 09:04 PM |
| Thanks ill improve that next time |
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ducky980
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| 12 Oct 2012 09:48 PM |
mai diz
yoyoyoyoyo u izz dum yoyoyoyoyo i pkay drum yoyoyoyoyo im creative yoyoyoyoyo u r native RACISM TIME DAWG!!! |
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link6249
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