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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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20 Sep 2012 06:35 PM
title explains most of this, it will span 3-5 movies at the most and i'll put the plot of it in pieces, here's the cast and title first.

Title: Mr.Amazing

Cast:
Tommy Richman as Mr.Amazing/Rey Evans
Jay Pharoah as ElectroShock/Jerome Young
Xzibit as Silas G.
Paul Sorvino as Don Joseph Straganelli
Logan Marshall Green as Rocco Straganelli
Joseph Gordon Levitt as Vito Straganelli
Michael Fassbender as Paulie Armstrong
Brandon Routh as Frankie Gatto
Joe Manganiello as Benny Bennett
Ron Perlman as Paulie Nero
KeKe Palmer as Stacey Tenn
Michael B. Jordon as Andre Reign
Columbus Short as Detective Axel Rockwell
Damon Wayans Jr.as Detective Jackson Jones
Josh Hutcherson as The Marksman
James Franco as One-Shot
Simon Yamm as Dr.Nick
Alina Foley as Beth Evans
Johnny Depp as Jack White
Andrew Garfield as Mad Dog
Robert Pattison as Michael Straganelli
Topher Grace as Jimmy Ganfodelli

Cameos:
Method Man as Buster Blade
Stone Cold Steve Austin as Headache
Henry Cavill as Blood Face
Michael Welch as X-Ray
Tom Hardy as Steel Arm
Liam Hemsworth as Johnny Kane
??? as Acid


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20 Sep 2012 06:38 PM
jesus christ jason you're better at this then I give you credit for haha

are you thinking of taking up the movie industry for a living?

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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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20 Sep 2012 06:39 PM
yes.
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20 Sep 2012 06:41 PM
also you have quiet the varied cast there, I must admit. xzibit, joseph gordon levitt, johnny depp, robert pattinson.

this'd be quite interesting

I'll probably read the actual script or whatever when you write it

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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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20 Sep 2012 06:44 PM
thx and ahh pfft always forget something

Bradley Cooper as Dr. Steve Crone
Ed Helms as Dr. Vale
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20 Sep 2012 06:49 PM
"Johnny Depp as Jack White"

THE Jack White, or just a character names Jack White?
Because if it's Jack White I would see this for that alone

Also, who's Tommy Richman?
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20 Sep 2012 06:52 PM
the character is named Jack White.

"Also, who's Tommy Richman?"
Me. Super cereal.
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20 Sep 2012 07:18 PM
Johnny Kane.

Catchy.



-The Saw? Well, The Saw Is Family-
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20 Sep 2012 07:19 PM
"Johnny Kane"
it was originally The Greaser, but i was like twelve when i thought of that name
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20 Sep 2012 07:21 PM
The Greaser.

I like that.

Maybe because I like to think of myself as a greaser, but still .-.



-The Saw? Well, The Saw Is Family-
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20 Sep 2012 07:22 PM
I was going to call him The Greaser Johnny Kane but it seemed a little too long for a name. It's more of a slight alias at this point.
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20 Sep 2012 07:24 PM
You could've done something like

Johnny "The Greaser" Kane



-The Saw? Well, The Saw Is Family-
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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20 Sep 2012 07:25 PM
He's more of thought as a greaser because he wears a leather jacket and has slicked hair, but it's more of a nick name thrown at him by Rocco.
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20 Sep 2012 07:26 PM
How many times am i going to say "more of"
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20 Sep 2012 07:27 PM
No idea, but now he sounds even more like me. Not a greaser but uses the same fashion.

Well how ever this series comes out, I'm sure this guy'll be my favorite character. =x



-The Saw? Well, The Saw Is Family-
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20 Sep 2012 07:48 PM
a piece of the beginning of the first film (i will do most, if not all of this on Friday):

We open to a teenage boy named Rey Evans in a blue hoodie and mask as he lays in the street with three bullets in him. He lies there as a man walks over and aims a gun to his face and he flashes back to the beginning. He has a monologue about his younger life.

"I remember when i thought your parents could protect you from everything, i guess i was wrong" We get the scene of him at seven coming home from school as his father shoots his mother and murders her. He runs out, not seeing his son as Rey cries over his mother's body. "I remember when i thought bad people only existed in dreams. That bad people, were nothing but nightmares i would have before my mother would wake me up for school." We then see him wake up out of a nightmare. He wipes the sweat off his face and looks around. We see him in a foster home as he is 17, he lives there with his little sister Beth, who was too young to remember the shooting.

She asks if he's alright and he just nods. We then cut to him in high school with his friend Jerome as they talk in class, the teacher tells them to be quiet and a guy in the back, named Andre Reign laughs and says a joke about him and the teacher tells him to be quiet. We leave the class as Reign shoves him a little and Rey makes a fist, but Jerome pulls him back and says his time will come.

They leave the school as Stacey, Andre's girlfriend is walking with Rey apologizing for Reign, saying he's just a little more confrontational than others, Andre sees them talking and walks over, pushes him and makes an insult about his mother. Evans than looks up "Is that first grade insult supposed to make me feel bad?" Andre cracks his neck and tells him to back off or "get knocked off..?" Rey then just shakes his head at him and Jerome laughs as they walk off and Stacey tries not to smile.

Rey and Jerome then walk down the street as they talk and see Silas G., leader of The New Kings, leading his boys to a car. The car passes and as Rey awkwardly stares, Silas flips him the finger.
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20 Sep 2012 08:23 PM
a little more of the beginning:

Rey shrugs off Silas and heads back to the foster home where his sister is already home from school and coloring in the other room. She says some people are coming today looking to adopt someone, Beth is curious if they'll be split up. He says once he's 18 they'll live together and she won't be taken away from him, no matter what. They hug and he takes a seat and flashes in and out of the gunshots and the funeral, then finally back to the present.

The phone then rings and he answers where Stacey is calling him, they talk for awhile on the phone until she says Andre is here and quickly, nervously, hangs up. He sits back and we cut into the next day. He walks into the school, a few classes pass by and by lunch Reign is watching him from the corner.

Andre knows about Stacey calling Rey so he runs over to him and yells "Hey punk! You know what i think!?" and he responds "Shhhh...that's the sound of nobody caring what you think." and he tells him to meet him outside. Andre slips out past the guard into the back alley and Evans follows. Jerome sees and joins in. Rey and Andre circle each other and Reign mocks him for being an orphan. Evans mocks him again and says "so...What are you going to do for a face when the baboon wants its ass back?" Andre then swings and Rey falls back and gets beaten down by him.

Rey quickly jabs him in the stomach and tackles him. Stacey yells at them to stop as Rey is punching him in the nose, causing him to bleed. Reign then pushes him off and says after he knocks him out, he'll smack his orphan sister around too, he then kicks Andre right in the ribs, causing him to spit up a little before Rey tosses a brick into his chest. Reign spits blood up on himself and begins to choke. Stacey tries to help him up and Jerome pulls Evans out and they slip back into lunch as the bell rings and guards run to find Andre.
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21 Sep 2012 02:57 PM
3/5 part: Rey and Jerome then take off from the school and Young remarks about Reign breathing like he got a smoker's lung and they hide from guards. Evans then says he's heading out and Jerome asks where he's going, since he can't go home early. He tries to make something up but Jerome says everytime someone tries to call him, there's no reply.

He just says he's always busy and heads off. We do see where he's actually going. Rey walks to the south side of New Haven and meets with Johnny Kane. They walk into an abandoned building where small time drug lord Jimmy Ganfodelli is sitting with his hit man Mad Dog. Jimmy asks if Rey's ready to join his gang and he nods. Mad Dog tosses a gun on the table and they tell him to kill Paulie Nero, a rising crime boss, tomorrow night. He agrees and walks out. Mad Dog says he doesn't like Rey when he's not around and Kane slicks his hair back and asks if Mad Dog can do anything but shoot a gun and run his mouth.

Dog curses at him and Kane flicks his tooth pick, saying he'll give him a nose piercing with the tooth pick. Ganfodelli tells them to calm down, until Nero's dead they won't fight over anything. We cut to Evans walking down the block as a car drives slowly and Silas leans out the window and asks if he's one of Ganfodelli's guidos. Silas laughs and Rey tries to ignore him but two of the guys get out of the car and attack him. He fights back and smacks one with a trash can lid. He then tackles the other into the car door, misses his punch and breaks the glass on his hand.

He takes another swing and the second falls back down. In a last resort he pulls out a loose piece of wood from a window sill near by and slashes one with the sharp end. He runs around the corner and gets home by the time school would be over. He paces back and fourth and looks in the mirror. He takes the gun out and aims it, puts it back and washes his face. Someone knocks on the door, and it's his sister Beth. He invites her in and she asks why his knuckles are bloody. He sees and says he fell down on his way home.

Beth however knows he's lying and asks why he hurts people. He says does what he does so they can afford a life after school. Rey tries to convince her it's only because he needs to take care of her. He says once he has enough money he'll stop doing what he is. She walks out and he looks in the mirror and shakes his head in disappointment of himself.

We cut to the next day. Saturday. He stands outside Nero's place and looks at the gun over and over. Paulie finally walks out and he sneaks over and slowly aims the gun at him, from a hidden area. His hand shakes wildly and he sweats all over, he flashes back about the murder of his mother right before he pulls the trigger and he drops the gun and runs away. Johnny sits in a car across the street, watching him take off. Mad Dog hops out the car, grabs the gun and aims for Nero, but his car is already gone. He hops back in and Johnny, loudly chewing gum looks in the mirror and says Evans will be taken care of.

Rey then sits on a side walk, in shock of everything and his phone rings. He answers and Jerome asks if he's alright since Friday. He says yeah, he just needed to take care of something. After the quick talk he hangs up and walks his way home, using alleys to avoid main streets. As he walks out the alley it's almost dark so he tries to get back to the foster home.

We cut to Kane calling Jimmy to tell him, Ganfodelli then says says this was all expected and we'll take him down at the first chance. Mad Dog then yells and interrupts saying he'll just go find him and kill him now. Johnny shakes his head and Dog grabs the phone from him. Kane then pushes him off and tells him to get lost before his face is apart of the pavement.

Mad Dog flips and goes off to find Evans. By this time Rey is finally home and the police have arrived. He believes they're here because of the fight or the gun, however there is an even worse fate he didn't anticipate.
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21 Sep 2012 03:32 PM
Sounds good. :D
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21 Sep 2012 03:46 PM
Actually Johnny Kane shouldn't be under cameo.
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21 Sep 2012 05:09 PM
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21 Sep 2012 05:59 PM
^logic
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21 Sep 2012 06:41 PM
4/5: Rey walks into the foster home to be informed by detectives Rockwell and Jones that his little sister Beth was found dead a few minutes ago. Someone had "abused" and killed her, as she was taken on a trip with the younger foster members, she got lost and was kidnapped. Evans then tries not to lose but he just runs from the building as the detectives try to call him back.

A fast forward weeks later as the news has spread and we see Jerome sitting uneasily in class as Stacey and Andre also look displeased whenever Rey's name is called for attendance. Young then after school goes on a search for his lost friend, before he goes out Reign stops him by the door way and quietly, shyly, asks if he knows if Rey is OK. Jerome just says he hopes so.

Young then asks around if anyone has seen him and bumps into Stacey. They talk about saying neither has seen him at all. Jerome eventually walks by Silas' turf where he hangs with his gang The New Kings. As they mock him, Silas remembering Rey being with him of course, another car drives by. A rival gang named The Parkland Boyz throw up gang signs and middle fingers out the window at them, Jerome then slips away and watches them yell at each other. We slowly cut into Rey at an apartment, on one of the top floors hearing the yelling.

He looks out the window and sees this happening. Then the third rival gang from the barrio Tha Desperados drive by and open fire on both. Gun shots ensue and the cars drive off as Silas lets his men do the shooting for him.
Jerome backs away into the apartment complex and Evans sees him on the steps and Young catches a glimpse of him, but Rey slips away again. He locks the door and takes a seat, going into deep thought. He has sounds of gunshots ringing through his head, and finally an idea comes to mind. He looks over to his closet, where he has a blue mask and hoodie. He bought the mask when he was younger and still has it.

He puts both on and looks in the mirror. Rey takes the mask off and makes a phone call. We cut to Dr.Nick, a man who once knew Rey's mother when he was younger. He hasn't seen him since he was a kid and now works at Valeside Industries. Evans and him catch up as he asks for a favor. Information on how to bug a cell phone. Nick questions this highly as his colleagues Dr.Vale and Dr. Crone converse in the back about a new gas called "Adrenaline X" he walks out to hear him clearly, and Rey states he's going to take down the Straganelli family. After some convincing he sends him a bug and instructions in a envelope.

Rey then puts on his mask, hoodie, and takes a wooden baseball bat from a field near by. He sneaks to the compound of the most powerful crime family in the country. The Straganelli family controls 95% of New Haven, minus the areas run by Silas G. and other rivaling gangs. He is currently in a feud with upcoming boss Paulie Nero, moved in from Copper City. This is all stated as Rocco, the underboss and son of the don Joseph speaks about this with their two lieutenants Frankie Gatto and the powerhouse Paulie Armstrong. Small time member and nephew of Joseph, Michael cuts in and talks about Nero and that lost guy from Ganfodelli's crew. Jimmy then walks in with Mad Dog and Kane as he speaks about him disappearing.

Rey listens in from the window. The don also walks in, wearing his usual white suit with red rose. They all nod to the Don as he says he'll be going to sleep soon and wishes for his men to not argue at such time. He also asks where his second son Vito is, and they said he's off somewhere. Gatto mentions Vito disliking the mafia and Michael calls him weak. Jimmy then flips his phone out and says he's making a call about the Evans problem, before he ends up talking to the police.

Johnny and Michael then exchange some dialogue as Mikey mocks his comb and greased hair and Johnny calls him a "low class fruit with a floral shirt" Commenting on his orange floral button up and khaki dress pants. Michael flips at him and Kane mocks his alleged drug habit and says "it's not Christmas but it's snowing under Mikey's nose right now." Straganelli then tries to punch him but Paulie and Frankie pull him back as Rocco looks disgusted at him. Rocco then pushes him out and tells him to come back when "he's done riding the white tiger"

Jimmy then comes back and says he's working on a deal with some guy, but he's wanting heavy pay. Since Ganfodelli is not a made man, due to him selling drugs to kids he only has dirty money, which is not accepted. Mad Dog then says he'll do it for free and Johnny says Dog couldn't find his ass if he was sitting on it, and they argue a little. Kane then says he'll stab his comb into his throat and make him cough up hair grease. Rocco tells them all to shut up so his father can rest.

They finally stop and Jimmy says he'll take off when his phone is done charging. Rey then climbs a terrace to a window, slides it open and plants a bug on the phone, getting out just in time before Jimmy picks it up. He then hops from the window and climbs the wall out. As we get a quick peak at busted cameras he left behind. The next morning we see him giving a monologue at enhancing his body beyond an average human. He works out til exhaustion and states he will always be at 100% for whatever he is needed for. He then looks out the window to see Silas and his gang shoving around a kid who didn't buy an drugs from them.

They say you can't cross their block and not buy so Rey puts his hoodie and mask on, grabs his bat and walks outside. He walks towards the group and someone turns and points him out, he then whips the baseball bat into someone's skull and takes them all on. He busts open and knocks out three and manages to break the knee of another. Silas backs out as he grabs his bat and busts the faces of two others. He then smashes the spine of another who tried to run. Silas G. then draws a gun but he tosses the bat right at his face.

His nose is now busted and Evans tackles him and smashes his head off a brick building. He demands that he stops dealing or he'll come back. Silas mocks him and Rey tosses him into the street and cracks one of his ribs with the bat. He leaves the bodies as on lookers seem surprised, shocked, and somewhat having a feeling of safety.


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22 Sep 2012 11:11 PM
4.5/5(would finish but it's rather late, however i didn't want to leave nothing): We cut back to a scene where Stacey stops Jerome in the hall and asks if he's seen Rey, and he says he doesn't think so, but he can't even imagine what he's doing right now, quick cut into Rey leaving dealers from Ganfodelli's crew laid out in a alley as he runs in and out of apartment complexes.

He stops at a door leading into the street as Mad Dog opens it, heading to his room, he sees the vigilante and tries to throw a punch but Evans tackles him onto the street. He takes a few swings at him with the bat before Dog draws a pistol and opens fire. He evades the shots and makes it back home. He sits down and takes a deep breath. Rey knows he only barely escaped that time, and he decides to check the calls on the bug. A call comes in on Ganfodelli and Straganelli Capo, Paulie Armstrong going to a meeting with a Yakuza from Japan named the Red Dragons. They're doing a deal in a hotel room the next night.

As Rey prepares himself to head there tomorrow, there's a knock on the window. He turns and a man holding a bow and arrow, sporting a domino mask and brown jacket and staring directly at him. He backs away and grabs his bat. The man puts his bow down and tells him to open the window. He does so and the man calls himself "The Marksman" he states he's been watching him take down criminals and refers to him as "blue mask" a few times. Marksman warns him to watch his step around the Straganellis and Evans says he has a personal war in this and Marksman says "don't say i didn't give you the chance to stay alive." Before he leaves Rey asks where he came from and who he is, Marksman states he's a man trying to make a difference, just like him.

He hops off the fire escape and Rey takes his mask, saying to himself New Haven is making more than just him crazy. We cut to Rocco talking to Frankie Gatto about his father retiring and Frankie expresses the old man should go out happy, not with his friends dead, hinting to him wanting the family to calm down on their violence. Paulie then walks in and says he's heading out with Jimmy tomorrow night for the deal, and Mad Dog and Kane will be in the car waiting. Rocco reluctantly nods and Gatto says this is exactly what he's talking about.

We get one scene with the Don Joseph himself at a church at night, stopping the priest from heading home. He asks for his first and last confession. He confesses to one thing, not murder, not death, not corruption, not crime, but never being too close with his son Vito. He wishes he steered Rocco away from the life and Vito wouldn't have to deal with it at all. He asks the priest to forgive him for this, if nothing else. Then the first scene with Vito as Paulie pats him on the back and makes a joke with him, and Kane says it's the first joke Armstrong said where he didn't sound like he was pumped on 'roids.

Paulie flips him off and Johnny laughs. Rocco then walks down the steps and says they'll need to come up with something for Michael next time he stops bye, he's a loose cannon who will hurt himself if no one else. Johnny suggests hanging him in his front lawn and Vito walks away disgusted. Rocco then whispers to Paulie to send Michael on a trip to Grand City, one way ticket. He nods and Joseph comes home. He walks into the dining room and wants to talk to Vito, but can't get the words out.

He then nods off and heads to his bedroom. We cut back to Rey as he hears gunshots ringing in his ears as he sleeps, he awakes out of a nightmare and wipes the sweat off his head. He takes a seat at his desk and opens a drawer containing 200 dollars, the money left he had from working for Jimmy.

He then gets a call from Jerome, he wants to answer but he has cut all ties with anyone he knew. He then tries to get some fresh air and looks out the window. He notices Andre Reign hanging out Silas G. They shake hands and have some laughs as a couple street dealers come over and join the talk. We hear part of their conversation as Silas mentions a hit on some lead members of the Parkland Boyz, the time as 25 minutes before Jimmy's deal. Rey writes this down and Silas says it'll be Andre's initiation.
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23 Sep 2012 03:10 PM
5/5: We cut to Andre walking home as Stacey caught a glimpse of him with Silas and asks what he was doing, Reign pushes her away and tells her to mind her business. Evans then calls Dr.Nick and says he'll meet him soon, and hangs up before he can reply. We go to this meeting as Dr.Vale is convincing Dr.Crone that Adrenaline X is not a dangerous item, but Steven says he'll be a fool if this drug gets out and Dr.Nick uses his recorder to listen in on this. Evans then walks in and Nick pulls him aside. Vale then fires Crone for challenging him in this and they argue about the compound and Crone takes his things and leaves.

Vale then walks out as his shift is over and Nick asks Rey why he's here, Evans questions the compound but he says he'll take care of it. Rey states he needs a new weapon, nothing lethal, but nothing too light. He then shows him a new six shooter gun, that fires taser rounds. Evans says he's taking down both Parkland and The New Kings tonight, Nick asks why he's doing this, Rey says because he's going to stop the criminals in this city, so no one like his sister can ever be hurt again. He takes off and Nick shakes his head.

Later that night the hit is about to happen as ten Parkland Boyz arrive to a meeting they planned as Silas, holding his hurt rib, tells his men to take a spot around the area. G. says anyone, Parkland, Desperado, Cop and especially that "wanna be detective in the blue hoodie" will die in this alley if they interfere. Andre shows up last and Silas tosses him a pistol. They all get ready to attack but as Rey looks over the meeting, he aims his taser and a man in baggy dress pants and a button shirt, tie, and suspenders fires a shotgun through the area.

Bodies hit the concrete and every shoots through the alley. Evans hops down and fires his taser off. Three people collapse from the shock and Andre runs into an abandoned shop. He tries to hide from everyone and Rey recognizes him. A Parkland boy then kicks in and they have a shoot out.

Reign tries to run out of the store but the man shoots an old fire extinguisher by the wall a few times. It explodes and the hot metal rips through Andre's face. Evans tosses a busted chair at the shooter and attacks him. He knocks him out cold and walks out the store to see dead bodies all over. The shotgun man introduces himself as Benny Bennett, the one man army of New Haven, he aims for Silas but is tased by Rey and Silas stumbles off holding his rib. The Marksman then appears and shoots an arrow into G.'s knee and Evans says he's a little late. Marksman states Tha Desperadoes were down town in a riot with other Parkland members. Bennett also crawls out from the scene and a limo arrives and he hops in.

We cut into the limo as Paulie Nero shakes Bennett's hand and says welcome to the family. Benny is slightly confused and Nero says Bennett will be his right hand man, as he needs someone like him in his organization. He then sits a briefcase full of clips of money on the seat and Bennett says they have a deal. He then sets his shotgun aside and says everyone in the alley was his target practice.

Rey then tells The Marksman has to get to the deal between the Red Dragons and the Straganellis. Before he takes off he turns and asks where the police are? Marksman says the police don't come around the south side and they catch Silas crawling off and Marksman grabs him and pulls him back. Evans delivers a hard knee to his skull and knocks him out, the police however will have too much negative publicity if they don't show, but they take their time getting there. Evans then hops between buildings and off of windows until he gets to the hotel.

He swings a rope with a rock to it, onto the balcony. He pulls himself up, tosses the rock and hides in the bathroom. Three of the Red Dragons then walk in and one hides in the corner. Paulie and Jimmy then arrive as Kane and Mad Dog wait in the car. They put down bags, one with money, one with diamonds. They talk about the exchange and Rey checks his two remaining taser rounds in his gun. He holds his bat in one hand, the gun in the other.

The hidden Dragon then emerges with a knife and tosses it at Jimmy but he throws the bag in the way. Rey appears and tases Paulie and one of the dragons. He grabs his bat and beats one bloody, and the third Dragon gets his arm broken by him. He then beats Jimmy senseless on the ground. He tosses him into the kitchen and smacks him with the side of a knife and holds it to his throat.

Ganfodelli yells at him to stop "OK YOU GOT ME! WHO ARE YOU WANT DO YOU WANT!?" He hold the knife closer and says "Justice, for the ones you hurt the most." He doesn't understand what he means and Evans asks if he remembers a little girl who died, a little girl named Beth. Jimmy says he has nothing to do with any girl dying and Paulie stumbles back over and grabs the bat. He smacks the bat onto his back and Evans falls down. He tosses him all around and cracks his head off the drywall.

He then swings at his face ruthlessly and Jimmy lays there beaten badly. Evans tackles Paulie down and puts his taser back into his jacket. He continues to fight the man but Paulie jabs his ribs hard and tosses him out the window. He falls four stories and lands on his side, a few feet from the pool. Armstrong then breaks the bat and tosses it at him. They grab the two bags and he carries Jimmy out. We cut to Johnny and Mad Dog arguing over, basically nothing and the two hop into the car and drive off.

Rey then lays there a busted, broken, bloody mess on the hard ground. He pulls out a tissue and wipes up the blood left on the ground and manages to crawl away the Red Dragons come to consciousness. The Marksman watches him limp off from a tree and we open to him later that night in the shower as a large amount of blood drips from his head. He bandages himself up and cleans his wounds. He tries to sleep on the couch but his landlord knocks on the door and asks if he's alright, since he comes home at such late times.

He says yes and tries to sleep. He has a nightmare of Andre being ripped apart by the exploding metal and wakes up in a cold sweat to see police outside, crime scene tape all around the massacre as he listens in and hears Silas has been arrested. He tries to relax but can't handle the stress. The phone then rings, he finally answers and it's Jerome. They have a brief talk about things and says he'll talk with him soon, before he hangs up Young mentions that Stacey wanted to talk to him, he says that won't happen anytime soon, hangs up and that's that.

We cut to Rocco Straganelli being told about the hooded vigilante by Paulie as Jimmy lays bandaged and bruised on the couch. Mad Dog then walks in, he collapses and they hold him up. He has two arrows in his shoulder and says he was jumped after the deal went wrong, on his way home. They take the arrows out and he says some guy named The Marksman did it, he states Johnny abandoned him as they were attacked after they dropped off Jimmy and Paul. The Don Joseph is sitting in the corner and stands up. He says if they were more careful things like this wouldn't happen. He throws his hat down in an upset manner and says even when he wants to retire his men are useless. Rocco sips his drink and turns to Gatto, he says "That settles it then, get me One-Shot."

A scene in a bar occurs when a man in a black hoodie and baggy jeans is in a game of darts, he tosses one dart into the board and it splits apart. He goes board by board and they all split apart with one hit. His iPhone gets a text from Rocco and turns to the bartender and He asks for his money and the thugs tell him to get out. He walks a few feet, turns and pulls out a pen. A big guy steps forward and says he'll take him on. He clicks the pen and tosses it directly into his heart. He collapses the everyone holds him up and the killer says "One-Shot" he walks out and we cut to Nero in rage as One-Shot killed a man in his bar. Bennett says that he sounds like a hell of a darts player and is ordered to kill One-Shot.

We open to Rey considering dropping the vigilante job and gets a flashback of his little sister, he then says to himself, the job isn't done. He grabs a new bat and new mask as he goes out, The Marksman sees him and asks him to join in taking down Ganfodelli's drug operation. They trip to a corner of the city, seven neighborhoods are controlled by his dealers as houses are beaten up and the citizens are drugged and weak, he explains this is why Jimmy isn't an official member. Marksman tells him this war goes beyond his own pain and affects everyone here.

Rey then agrees to join him and Marksman asks his name, he says he doesn't have one anymore. He only nods and we get a montage of them taking down drug dealers and street gangs. The cops always arrive late, but the thugs are always beaten down and tied up anyhow. After the montage they arrive at a party for the new police Lt. Jack White. He promises to keep this city safe, and restore it's glory. He introduces two new Detectives from Grand City, Axel Rockwell and Jackson Jones. Rey recalls meeting them and Jack White states they worked a case here crossing cities, but they are now official NHPD officers.

They watch over and leave as they split up and Mad Dog who watches over The Marksman fires shots at him. They have a chase on the rooftops and Marksman arrows two of his men and aims for Mad Dog, he turns and says "Marked for Death eh?" He hears a clicking and sees One-Shot aiming a rifle at him. They both shoot and the bullet rips directly through the arrow and into his chest. He flies back and blood spills wildly. One-Shot laughs and takes off.

We get a scene of Rey being given new technology by Dr.Nick, a forensic flash light, smoke pellets, an automatic 9MM taser gun aswell. He thanks him and says thanks for Dr.Nick the city will be just that much more safer, Nick then whispers to Rey about a corrupt work going on at Valeside Industries, he says Dr.Vale is being very wreckless in his work and he'll keep him updated.

He then hands him a police radio and as it turns on he gets a shots fired reports. He puts his mask on and heads out. Rockwell and Jones investigate it as they find The Marksman's dead body. Two injured thugs are in the ambulance and Rey watches over. Rockwell says he heard reports of a man who called himself a Protector of New Haven, used arrows and fought crime. Jackson says it looks like he needed protection this time. Evans hops off the roof ontot he scene and they aim their guns at him.

He tells them to put their guns down, Axel says he heard reports of the second vigilante to wearing blue clothes. He draws his flashlight and aims it around the area. They calm a little and he says the shooter was on the roof. He thinks there's two people missing, counting bullets in the wall. He tells them to investigate every known hitman in the city and Rockwell says they're not partners,, he replies "I never said we were." He then disappears as they hear a noise behind them and see he's gone.

A note is left behind that says "I'll be in touch." We cut to Rocco celebrating from the death of Marksman as Joseph sits displeased in the room. They celebrate and Mad Dog lists Kane, Nero, and Bennett next. They plan to cut a deal selling the diamonds to Nero, but it'll be a set up, and with Bennett first. Evans hears this on the bug as Jimmy explains it to his boys on the phone. They call Bennett and says this will be their version of a truce.

We cut to the deal as Bennett arrives and Jimmy sets a briefcase down. Mad Dog and two dealers hide in the shadows of the park they're dealing in. Benny says he has the money in the car, Jimmy says "Rule number one, never tell them where the money is." He flips the case open and grabs a pistol from it, He fires into his shoulder and Benny ducks a few and grips a shotgun he hid under the bench. He opens fire and Two of the men run forward. One by one he shotguns them both down. One-Shot aims for him from the roof but Evans grabs him and the two fight it out.

Benny then mocks Jimmy saying "Come out and play little Jimmy, it'll be alright, Papa's here"Mad Dog then tackles him, He tries to punch him but he breaks his hand on a statue as he swung. Bennett breaks his nose and slams him onto a bench. We cut back to One-Shot being beaten with a bat by Evans he hangs over the ledge and he says this is for the Marksman, he drops him onto a car below. He doesn't die due to the height but he's out cold for the most part.

He then runs to the fight as Jimmy tackles Benny. He fires but misses and runs out of ammo. Mad Dog then swings a knife at him but Benny draws a blade and slowly sticks it into his heart. Rey then whips his bat into Jimmy's skull and tases Bennett down. Ganfodelli chop blocks his knee and runs to a car. He busts the window out and speeds down the block, just as a few seconds off Evans takes Benny's car and rams it into his. He hits him so hard the car flips a few times before landing upside down.

He hops out and Jimmy, bleeding head to toe crawls from the wreck and Evans pulls him over, his knee is busted and the gear went into his stomach. He holds him close and asks why he had Beth Evans killed, he takes off the mask and asks why. Jimmy says he was only supposed to kill Rey, not the sister. He never knew about the murder, they just assumed after the report Rey would end himself. Evans drops him and looks at the blood all over his hands. He puts his mask back on and sneaks away as Benny steals the diamonds. Ganfodelli then coughs up blood screaming about his sister deserved it in a last insult before he passes out and dies.

Police sirens go off as Jones and Rockwell drive down and Evans sits at home staring into the mirror. The money for rent is left on the landlord's desk and he has none left. He believes he failed Beth, as he became what he hated the most, he became what took her away from him, A killer. He then draws a knife from his desk and takes a seat. He puts the blade around his throat and sheds one tear, he puts the blade down and sighs. Rey tells himself, the job still isn't done.

We get a scene of One-Shot getting back to the Straganelli estate, saying Jimmy and Mad Dog are dead. Rocco tosses a glass at the wall in anger. We then cut to Dr.Vale finally giving up on the compound and having people carry the crates of the tanks to a dock warehouse. Rocco hears this, and since their big drug money maker is dead, he puts out a word one the street, 500,000 to whoever can bring a crate back.

We get a montage of all kinds of people, a former wrestler, A poor Dr.Crone, a thug, a thug, a broke dentist, a injured steel worker, anyone who was poor enough and arrived quickly. Rey hears this through the window and runs to the docks. Jerome Young who was sitting at home looks out his window to see him, he decides to follow Evans as he had suspicions on him being the vigilante. Rey sneaks in and people draw guns and start firing through the warehouse. One crate explodes and a man is covered in the gas. It leaks through out the whole room.

One man is sprayed in the eyes, one around the head, another around a gunshot wound as he was hit in the head. Everyone pushes their way out as Rey himself is infected too. Jerome snuck into to see where he was and ended up being infected after someone pushed him into an electrical box. They all cough badly and Evans fights his way out. He walks onto the dock and blacks out.

Hours later he wakes up. Rey looks around, surprised to be alive. He just wants to head home, however when he runs he goes faster than a sports car. He stops and looks around, his hearing is incredibly improved, his scars are gone and feels powerful. His hearing leads him to a woman being mugged where he punches the criminal, and he flies fifteen feet back and into a brickwall. He can't believe his strength. The lady whispers to herself "wow that was amazing..." He then nods and runs off at an insanely fast rate as she waves and says "Thanks Mr.Amazing!"

He heads home and we get this uplifting moment, however everyone else was infected too. We see a superstrong man, a man with a shape shifting Steel Arm, A guy who sees in all X-Ray, A thug who recovers from the headshot in seconds and is not almost invincible to pain. Then we see Dr.Crone as his upper half burns away from the gas, he screams for help but suddenly, he can read minds. We then see Jerome trying to get home as he has awaken and suddenly he shocks a light on. He now has the powers of electricity at his hand.

We see Rey get back to Valeside as he tells Dr.Nick this and Nick explains the compound that was supposed to be nothing more than a new medicine, he also displays new equipment. A bullet/stab proof vest and jacket. He also gives him a pair of gloves and a belt to store small weapons. Rey then asks for a mask,blue with an "A" on it. Jerome then walks in and he asks how he got here, he says he used a weird electrical ability to leap across from buildings without hurting himself. he saw Rey and walked in.

Dr.Nick then says it looks like you have a team of two now. Young nods and says "Call me ElectroShock." Evans then laughs and says it sounds like the name of a broke lightbulb company. He states he came in followed him, suddenly wants to be a vigilante and that's his name, Nick cuts him off and says "No, you're not vigilantes, you're heroes." Amazing asks if he's sure he wants to do this, and Young reveals when he was a kid his father went to jail for something he didn't do, and he doesn't want any more young kids to be without a father when they grow up. They nod in relation of missing a parent or two. He then questions how he knew he was the vigilante, and Jerome said it seemed too obvious, you disappear when he appears.

We then cut to a man who can receive no damage to his body, he quickly rushes out and robs a bank single handed. Bullets pierce his body but his body goes back into place right after. He grabs a guards gun and someone fires at his head. He bleeds down and laughs. He grabs a few bags of money and rushes out.

Mr.Amazing and ElectroShock (now given a green domino mask and jacket similar to Amazing's) watching the TV seeing this, the robber also watches as they call him a "Blood Faced Bandit" he says "Blood Face...I like that..." Amazing then says "The job really isn't over." Also we see Rocco sitting in sever disappointment of the backfiring and says he wants to be alone. One-Shot says he'll stop whoever he needs too but he yells for him to leave, Joseph then steps in and says he may be old and retiring but he's still the damn don.

That night Mr.Amazing has done forensic tracking to find the thief. He leads back to an old office building where he hides at. ElectroShock talks to Stacey on the phone saying he found Rey and makes up an excuse for him and says he has to go. He heads out late and Mr.Amazing sneaks in and finds the robber counting his money. He kicks his chair away when they come face to face and says "Well, looks like it's classic Hero vs villain" they fight it out, crashing through walls, tables, doors, and chairs until they both beat each other senseless and Shock looks for the building, saying he wishes Amazing waited for him.

As they fight he tackles Blood Face through the window and he grabs a fire escape balcony. He rests as he hears the thud of him crashing. He looks over and the body is gone and nothing but a blood trail remains. ElectroShock finally finds him and they both look down on the alley and have stares of slight fear on their faces, being unable to defeat him. The police radio ElectroShock carries then goes on and reports maniacs running through the streets with strange powers and Amazing says "It's going to be a long night."

Cliffhanger end of first film.
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