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| 08 Oct 2012 12:25 AM |
| Who're the character? I will make the scenario |
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dc131
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| 08 Oct 2012 12:42 AM |
| By the way she put an unnecessary comma between story and right and the fact that she wrote "who're the character" I can already tell this is going to suck. |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:08 AM |
Characters-
Taco
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Title: The Cave Description: The worst short story in the world Written in Tacos P.O.V.
I knew he was there, I could sense his presence. Although he might have been my imagination, the blood I smelt and the sounds of footsteps seemed to real. I soon quickened my pace and clenched the handle of my flashlight tighter. This stupid thing had run out of battery in less than a minute, leaving me all alone in the dark surrounded by the slimy walls of a cave much like labyrinth. I heard the drip of water and a low growl in the darkness. This sent a shiver up my spine, making me move even faster toward, or at least somewhat closer to the exit of this ridiculous thing. But my blood ran completely cold when I felt a long, bony hand slither up my back. I yelped and went into a full-out sprint dropping my flashlight. I whipped my neck behind me and saw my flashlight on the ground, miraculously working. But the light from the flashlight showed the faint outline of something horrid, a-
-Story is discontinued for lack of intrest- |
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Vikie09
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:10 AM |
YOU RIPPED THIS TINY PARAGRAPH OFF FROM SOMEONE'S ACTUALLY GOOD STORY.
GET THE HELL OUT. |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:10 AM |
But Vikie, the story has already been posted.
You're a tad late. |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:11 AM |
But Hai, I just wrote this story right now :|
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:11 AM |
| I want to be a character. Named Delgato McFluffykins o3o Can you do that? |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:11 AM |
| BUT FLUFFY YOU ARE A DISGRACE AND YOU NEED TO GET BACK IN YOUR BABY NEST. |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:11 AM |
| -tear- I missed the chance :,c |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:12 AM |
I can't write another story. I'm too depressed now because of hai's previous comment |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:16 AM |
| THAT'S IT. I WILL NOT TOLERATE THIS GIRL'S FOOLISHNESS ANY LONGER. I AM MAD THAT I EVEN CREATED YOU. NOW GET BACK IN HERE. MY BABY NEST HAS PLENTY OF ROOM. I WILL TRAP YOU BACK IN HERE FOREVER. |
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skyarex
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:17 PM |
You seem to have a thing for missing out words in order to make a sentence make sense.
~ The writer of off topic and the brains behind the business ~ |
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| 08 Oct 2012 01:31 PM |
| lol that would never be my point of view |
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| 08 Oct 2012 05:44 PM |
Alright, I'm writing another story. Who wants to be a character? |
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| 08 Oct 2012 05:47 PM |
I drew you, I want pay.
In other words, put me in. |
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