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Zedanthar Ul'Tamate: Man in Time CH 8 (FEEDBACK)

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nickle389 is not online. nickle389
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03 Oct 2012 09:19 PM
Please post feedback.

Here are the previous chapters:
Chapter 7: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79312208
Chapter 6: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79287532
Chapter 5: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79286599
Chapter 4: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79283098
Chapter 3: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79264172
Chapter 2: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79209202
Chapter 1: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79203774
Prologue: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=79201919

Chapter 9
War is Over:

Today I wake up to check my schedule. My quarters are being arranged again after the Moen incident. Moen's old room is being completely remodeled after the incident. The room is destroyed. I read in my head.

7:00 Set up patrol.
8:00 High Rank meeting.
9:00 Prepare for battle.
11:00 Arrive at Helghan.
13:00 Meet in war tent for further plans.
14:00 Take action. Storm the gates.
20:00 If battle isn't resolved. Send soldiers to the ships for evac. Leave helghan worse than when we got there.

That ends the schedule. I shut off the tablet and head to the front gates. I have met more soldiers here. The names of soldiers I've met: Tartarus Chi'Zar, stitch, and Azreal Ca'Zot. Leon met Azreal Ca'Zot and decided to share how the empire was going for him. Azreal joined because of Leon.

"Alright men and woman. We are going to set up patrol on the Battlefront in the north. I will bring you there and Captain Tartarus will be supervising you. If you have a problem go to him."

They yell, "YES SIR!!!"

I hop in the passenger seat of a jeep. Tartarus is driving.

He says, "Sir I was quite surprised about the Moen incident."

I say, "It was nothing. Also you don't need to call me sir. Nafaria is a my family and I think we should all be friends."

Tartarus smiles and says, "You're very kind Zedanthar."

We make it to the point of our patrol. We meet up with Charlie squad. We made the name for Charles's squad because of his name. We set up positions at our barricades. Charles quickly meets up with me and we await our return jeep. It comes quickly and we go into the back seat. Me and Charles don't have Honor Guards so we sit in the back by ourselves.

Charles says, "I'm glad to have you as a high rank."

"You know all the others were impressed with me."

"I know but without most of them saying they wanted you to lead you wouldn't be where you are."

"You know Tartarus Chi'Zar?"

"Yes somewhat."

"He is a real model soldier. He shows up on time for everything. He knows when to patrol and I hear he even takes extra hours."

"He sounds really good."

"Leon is pretty good too. He needs to learn to fight better though."

We make it to the HQ and we head to the meeting room. Romuluz begins.

"Alright men. We are hopefully starting our final battle with the Helghast!!! I have invited our insider here to join us. He brought a ship of Helghans here and we "overcame all of them" they don't know he is with us at the moment so lets keep this simple. We call this man Pain. In your case. His name is Lord Pain."

Lord Pain speaks, "I am pleased to say that the Helghast are still rebuilding their fort. Thanks to Zedanthar and Toxic we have kept them busy long enough to create an invasion. They barely manage a production line of assault riffles."

Romuluz says, "We are going to be raiding today and I have selected a few of your patrols to join us. The following patrols are these: Delta Squad (Toxic's squad), Charlie Squad, Dusk Squad (My squad), and the infiltration squad (That is Lord Pain's squad). We have prepared dropships for you in the courtyard. There are a total of 5 members in Dusk, 50 members in infiltration, 15 members in Delta, and 30 members in Charlie. 100 members total facing the Helghast soldiers. May the strongest survive."

We are dismissed and we head to the dropships. Our squads wait for us there. We have a few fighters being piloted by Charlie squad and Infiltration Squad. In an hour. We set up a small base and quickly build it. We meet in the war tent.

Lord Pain announces, "Alright we will be sending an infiltration route straight to their front gates. From there we will be setting charges. Charlie squad you will be taking out the trenches. Delta squad. You'll be taking the supply rought into their base. Dusk squad. I want you people to be about 50 meters behind us sniping people on the wall."

We all agree on this plan. The emperor's ship arrives and he steps out. He will be watching as we take down the Helghast. Soon enough we charge... Then everything turns over for the worse...

End of Chapter 8.
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leon9145 is not online. leon9145
Joined: 01 May 2009
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03 Oct 2012 11:54 PM
I do indeed like this but i was a captain in this point of time .
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nickle389 is not online. nickle389
Joined: 23 Feb 2010
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04 Oct 2012 04:09 PM
Halo was too. And I'm not good at ranks because aparently halo was behind me too. I also have evidence of halo's rank.
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niftyuiouiouio123 is not online. niftyuiouiouio123
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09 Dec 2012 05:55 PM
Include me in the next story!
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