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| 30 Sep 2012 08:20 PM |
As the colossal ship slowly rose out of Adon's thin atmosphere, the Orion made the tug boats which were heaving it look like small shrimpy little ants. A behemoth-class super star cruiser could take on a whole fleet alone and still come out triumphant, it was the pride of the Nafarian Star Command. As the Orion reached past the large moon's orbit, the tug boats disconnected their tow cables, and went back to the dry docks. The Orion looked like a large shard of red and dark grey, its engines flared to life and the gargantuan cruiser quickly sped on its course to the main invasion fleet, which was under the command of Supreme Field Marshal Chi'Zar. Tartarus Chi'Zar's personal Raven-class transport was already on its course to his new flag ship.
As Tartarus looked out his view port toward the Orion, his red eyes filled with envy, he stood up, pacing the officer's deck of the craft, waiting impatiently to board his new home. He looked out another viewport and he could his heavily modified Wasp escort, which was armed to the teeth with plasma cannons, pulse rockets, and an anti-air heavy laser turret. The Orion slowly became larger, and larger, as his shuttle crept closer to the ship. The raven finally came to its destination, hangar bay 4, it settled down gently on the shiny new deck. Tartarus stepped out and looked around,it looked just the way he had designed it to be. A lieutenant approached him with a tac pad.
"Hello, lord Chi'Zar, I'm first lieutnant Nuk'Romul. I hope the ship is to your specifications, I've taken the liberty to inspect everything for you, everything is ship-shape. You quarters is this way, my lord." Nuk'Romul motioned at a door across the hangar bay, and Tartarus followed him. They walked down many hallways and up many lifts to a room at the end of a hallway, Tartarus put his hand on the identification scanner and entered, the room was very elaborate and decorative. It was almost too luxurious for Tartarus's taste. He followed the lieutenant to a large round lift, it spiraled upward and came to an abrupt stop. He stepped off the lift and studied his new lustrous command center, it had a large view port and many consoles with Nafarians already hard at work at them, he sat in his command chair for the first time, he peered out, and felt a new sense of power, and unstoppable sense of power. He looked on his own view screen and looked at his directives, straight from the emperor himself. He was to reinforce the fleet already invading a coalition star system, about 4.7 light years away from the Nafaria star system.
Tartarus clicked on his PA system and issued his orders to all of his ships in the fleet. "All ships, set your course for the sol system, we are reinforcing our brothers there. Prepare your crews, we are embarking in T-minus 15 minutes.
He clicked off his microphone, and gazed out upon the stars.
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| 30 Sep 2012 09:24 PM |
| Good, deving lore and writing a book about it now since im evidently a good writer. |
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| 30 Sep 2012 10:01 PM |
| There should be a unknown drop shi in the next one :D |
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| 30 Sep 2012 10:48 PM |
Halo your a really good writer.
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