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Re: Long Night in Hell Chapter 2.

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romuluz is not online. romuluz
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30 Sep 2012 01:52 AM
"Long Night in Hell"

Chapter 2, Debrief.

Raze watched carefully as Krypka placed her tac pad on the table, she tapped a few commands on it before a red hologram of the city they were preparing to invade appeared over it, it showed the positions the Razer class cruisers would take during the battle, along with a lot of Nafarian symbols showing troop movements that would take place across the city. Raze carefully studied the battle-plan she had developed. Almost instantly he saw what she was attempting to do. She was attempting to flush them all of the Coalition soldiers into the city center. To trap them in there. It was a very risky plan that could bring the loss of many lives, he didn't agree with the plan. She stood before the large mass of soldiers and looked over the mass of grey armor clad soldiers for a second before begining to speak.

"Greetings, my name is Krypka, I will be leading this mission, as you see behind me we are going to attempt to corral all military resistance in this city to the center, it should not be too hard of a task for a group of... trained, well equipped Nafarians."

She paused for a second to zoom in on the hologram.

"You all will be separated into five units, and will each have a set of streets you are to clear, those units will further be split up into ten squads, we will have a total of fifteen units, and thirty squads, all divied out evenly along the cities edge, you will push through the Coalition's defenses and are to push them towards the city center, DO NOT, pull back under any circumstances, we have air superiority, this city is reported to have absolutely no Anti Air defense of any kind, and their only form of air power is from transport choppers and simple jets, should be easily taken out, the Razer class cruisers will provide heavy air support for us, this should be a quick, six hour invasion, our flag will wave proudly over it within the six hours... Any questions?

Raze took this time to question his superior. He did not agree with her no pull back policy nor her entire strategy, had he been her superior, he would have immedeatly removed her from command due to her plan being reckless in nature. He calculated that even thought this strategy probably would be a success due to technological and gene advantages, that there would still be at least be a 40% casualty rate.

"Ma'm" He began to say. "May I be the first one to ask, what the heck do you think we are to do shall one unit be overrun by the coalition's forces? Are we just going to be their game?"

Krypka chuckled to herself for a second before she answered Raze's question.

"Captain, shall a squad be anhialted the Razer class cruisers overhead will imedeatly bombard the failed squad's street and push the Coalitions forces back from the air."

"Barbaric..." Raze replied under his breath.

"what was that, Captain?" she replied.

"Nothing ma'am."

"Good, any other questions?"

The rest of the room was in utter silence, a few of the soldiers shuffled uneasily in their spaces, others began tinkering with their guns to make last adjustments to sights. There was a long space of silence in the immensely large hangar bay, a few more Nafarian destroyers could be seen passing from the large red shields covering the hangars.

"Good" Krypka finally said after what seemed like an eternity of silence. "All squad situations have been sent to your helmet's Heads up displays, along with which dropship you are assigned to, the Razer class's will be entering the atmosphere in 5, make sure you have everything you need, we will not get re supplied until we have a strong enough foothold in the city."

"Yes ma'am!" The batallion said in unison.

Raze put on his helmet to see who this dreadnought placed him under. He took a second to re read his squad, he noticed he was right under Krypka's. "Joy" he thought to himself as he began to pick up his AR-3. and slid extra ammo clips into his belt. He attached his standard issue Energy sword to his right side. ans shuffled through a few supply crates in search of charges and grenades. He though about grabbing a standard issue Nafarian RL-5 in case they ran into any coalition armor, he then decided that the Rhino's would be able to take care of the Coalition's armor and placed the Rocket back. Krypka walked up behind him as he

was preparing.

"Captain if you don't mind me asking, what the hell is your problem?"

"what do you mean?" Raze replied.

"Questioning me during debriefing?"

"You asked if we had questions, and in my opinion, your, strategy is leading most of us to our deaths, you are no different then the rest of your kind."

"My kind, captain?" She said with a tone of mild amusement. "I am Nafarian pure blood, just like you, we are no different."

"By your kind I mean dreadnoughts, all of you are the same, arrogant, cocky, reckless, you all have no value for the Nafarian life."

She looked slightly offended at Razes comment, she stepped back a little bit as if she were about to walk away but stood where she stopped, smiled and began to speak again.

"And what do you suggest Captain?"

"You leaving" Raze replied coldly.

Krypka looked utterly amused "well, once the invasion of this city is complete, you will have your wish..." She walked off to the Albatross they would soon be sharing. The PA system turned on for another announcement, "30 seconds before entry into the atmosphere, warriors of Nafaria! Make our emperor proud!" A large collection of soldiers yelling "For Nafaria!" soon filled the large hangar bay, Raze looked out the hangar bay doors as the large Razer class cruiser began to enter the atmosphere. As it began to enter a big ball of fire began to engulf the ship, the shields protecting the ship began to flicker to a faint red, it became more opaque as the ship continued to descend, the flames continued to flicker against the shield, like water would against a glass window. He continued to watch until the flames died away to reveal a blue sky, he saw an Aktun class in the distance finishing off one of the Coalition's cruisers that has retreated back into the planet during the initial fighting between the two fleets above the planet. The PA system turned on. "All units we have entered atmosphere, and are currently in position with the other two Razer's! All Albatross's, 3 minutes until lift off!" Raze walked towards the black Albatross he was assigned to, he saw Major Marcus wave at him from his Albatross. He valued Marcus as a soldier, he was going to suggest his promotion to Officer to Nafarian High Comm once they were done here. He climbed into the Albatross and was greeted by fellow soldiers he knew well. The Albatross was a larger dropship, could hold 18 soldiers, 14 in the open canopy and 4 in the officer's canopy right behind the cockpit, it was a favorite among Nafarian pilots. Krypka was standing in the officers deck as Raze took his seat, the Pilot shouted back into the troops bay.

"Ma'am, we are about to take off, you might want to take you're seat."

"I am fine." Krypka replied.

The Albatross began to take off followed by its escort of 3 Nafarian wasps. as the Albatross began to to exit the Hanagar, Raze took this time to look out the Albatross's window to take a look at the large city they were tasked with taking. He saw the initial fighting taking place from drop units, along with dogfights between Coalition jets and Nafarian Hornets and wasps. Beyond the Nafarian front line, Raze saw Coalition soldiers still completing the evacuation of the city, in a way, Raze was slightly amused with how slow this coalition was, they should have had this city evacuated the second the Coalition fleet fell in to the Nafarian fleet in orbit. He turned his attention to the sky, he watched the Coalition's more outdated jets try to outmaneuver the more advanced Nafarian fighters. He watched as Coalition jets turned into fireballs as Nafarian fighters hit them with the air-air heavy lasers. He the began to feel more confident about the dreadnoughts plans, he began to look at the soldiers in the outer canopy, he began to feel the common blood-lust many Nafarian soldiers felt before battle. He looked at Krypka as she tapped a few final commands into her tac pad, Raze was set for anything, he was set to take on this whole planet... Little did he know, that everything was about to break loose.
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30 Sep 2012 01:52 AM
Apparently roblox dosen't like some random vvord in here, vvasnt hell, that vvill explain my "Test" Post.
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vvat

shake shake shake senora shake 11 times work work work senora back in 2 my right and bababa daa
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30 Sep 2012 01:54 AM
Nice publish it on the amazon store :3
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romuluz is not online. romuluz
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30 Sep 2012 01:55 AM
Thanks, and I probably vvill post an unfiltered, un cut version there in the future, be sure to read the old chapters if you havent already.
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30 Sep 2012 02:05 AM
Whoop Whoop, bring on Chaptah 3 pls
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romuluz is not online. romuluz
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30 Sep 2012 02:05 AM
I already have it outlined.
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30 Sep 2012 02:11 AM
Fantastic piece of writing, A few errors in grammar, but it was a very good read. Keep it up Romuluz!
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romuluz is not online. romuluz
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30 Sep 2012 02:13 AM
Thanks, action begins in the next chapter.
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romoluz is not online. romoluz
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30 Sep 2012 02:30 AM
Heh through the filter I got banned, VVTF?! Oh vvell. putting this on the top of my forums.
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Mrhockeysniper27 is not online. Mrhockeysniper27
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30 Sep 2012 07:41 AM
You should compile the whole story and make it into a book.
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30 Sep 2012 07:47 AM
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30 Sep 2012 07:48 AM
Nice story, however, I see a few grammar mistakes. Other than that, it's still a great story.
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30 Sep 2012 07:56 AM
Perfect... This should be a good story.
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30 Sep 2012 07:58 AM
tl;dr. But it looks cool.
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Rockonfreaks is not online. Rockonfreaks
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30 Sep 2012 11:12 AM
Amazing, PM me when chapter 3 is out.
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romoluz is not online. romoluz
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30 Sep 2012 12:53 PM
Thanks, and Ill fix all grammatical errors both in the un condensed un cut version and the compilation.

~VVished alt vvas as epic as main.
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30 Sep 2012 01:13 PM
Bump. need feedback.
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30 Sep 2012 01:59 PM
Love it, can't wait for the action to start!
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romoluz is not online. romoluz
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30 Sep 2012 03:18 PM
Thanks, I have outlined the third chapter already.
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romoluz is not online. romoluz
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30 Sep 2012 03:21 PM
So um, Im goign to bump this shiz.
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romoluz is not online. romoluz
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30 Sep 2012 03:51 PM
Bump.
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nickle389 is not online. nickle389
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30 Sep 2012 03:51 PM
This is a nice story... Its good on toast.
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romoluz is not online. romoluz
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30 Sep 2012 03:52 PM
^Heh, thanks.
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30 Sep 2012 04:01 PM
I like it.
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