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| 29 Sep 2012 06:56 PM |
It's not really done, but..
Roses are red Violets are blue I wish, I could, Spend time with you
The roses are wilted The violets are dead Oh tell me, How many tears I shed.
The garden is dying The flowers are crying Save us Before it all is done
If only, just only, The garden survived Maybe, I would have Lived, and thrived
How many times? How many days? Shall I wait? The time is right.
When will you search? What is in sight? As the darkness Engulfs all the night.
~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦ |
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| 29 Sep 2012 06:58 PM |
Beautiful 0_0
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:03 PM |
also im not emo/goth
okay im actually optimistic a lot it's raining right now where i live so i felt like making some poem
~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦ |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:04 PM |
| ;man i feel ya never no bad time for some poem |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:04 PM |
@anna
you can be an optimistic goth
same with emo as emo simply means emotional |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:04 PM |
I have a strong feeling this is copied.
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:05 PM |
| Would you like me to analyze it, teach? |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:05 PM |
YOU NEED TO MAKE A DEVIANT ART ACC RIGHT NOW, YOUNG LADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Tell it again, Grandpa!
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:05 PM |
0/10000000000000000000000000000000000000000
terrible
give up on your dreams.
-smf |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:06 PM |
I guess it's alright.
"See! I told ya they were a bunch o' wee lasses!" -Demoman. |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:07 PM |
guuuuurrlll, liek srsly. u gotta stop changing ur rhyme scheme. |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:11 PM |
@hai
oh really
please tell me the name of the original poem
there is none you know why because this isn't copied
but i appreciate that you like it so much that you thought it was copied
~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦ |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:17 PM |
My regret, it burns In twists and turns Like a maze Without an end
Unseal me please I'm on my knees I'm fading, gone Put me in ease.
and this is probably the end because i dont want to make a buttlong poem
~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦ |
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:19 PM |
MAKE A DEVIANTART ACC RIGHT NOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Tell it again, Grandpa!
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| 29 Sep 2012 07:20 PM |
^ why
i already have one anyway but i haven't done anything on it lol
~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦ |
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