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Re: I'm making a poem, rate it so far?

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AnnaBananaSplitz is not online. AnnaBananaSplitz
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29 Sep 2012 06:56 PM
It's not really done, but..

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I wish, I could,
Spend time with you

The roses are wilted
The violets are dead
Oh tell me,
How many tears I shed.

The garden is dying
The flowers are crying
Save us
Before it all is done

If only, just only,
The garden survived
Maybe, I would have
Lived, and thrived

How many times?
How many days?
Shall I wait?
The time is right.

When will you search?
What is in sight?
As the darkness
Engulfs all the night.

~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦
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NuclearCheezburger is not online. NuclearCheezburger
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29 Sep 2012 06:58 PM
Beautiful 0_0


~Fun is infinite
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AnnaBananaSplitz is not online. AnnaBananaSplitz
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29 Sep 2012 07:03 PM
also im not emo/goth

okay
im actually optimistic a lot
it's raining right now where i live
so i felt like making some poem

~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦
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Zirconiferous is not online. Zirconiferous
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29 Sep 2012 07:04 PM
;man i feel ya never no bad time for some poem
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MeldosSideburns is not online. MeldosSideburns
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29 Sep 2012 07:04 PM
@anna


you can be an optimistic goth


same with emo as emo simply means emotional
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HaiPeoplezz is not online. HaiPeoplezz
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29 Sep 2012 07:04 PM
I have a strong feeling this is copied.

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Shredasaur is not online. Shredasaur
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29 Sep 2012 07:05 PM
Would you like me to analyze it, teach?
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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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29 Sep 2012 07:05 PM
YOU NEED TO MAKE A DEVIANT ART ACC RIGHT NOW, YOUNG LADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Tell it again, Grandpa!
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firefeind1 is not online. firefeind1
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29 Sep 2012 07:05 PM
0/10000000000000000000000000000000000000000

terrible

give up on your dreams.

-smf
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ShadowMorel is not online. ShadowMorel
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29 Sep 2012 07:06 PM
I guess it's alright.

"See! I told ya they were a bunch o' wee lasses!" -Demoman.
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RoAnt is not online. RoAnt
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29 Sep 2012 07:07 PM
guuuuurrlll, liek srsly.
u gotta stop changing ur rhyme scheme.
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AnnaBananaSplitz is not online. AnnaBananaSplitz
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29 Sep 2012 07:11 PM
@hai

oh really

please tell me the name of the original poem

there is none
you know why
because this isn't copied

but i appreciate that you like it so much that you thought it was copied


~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦
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AnnaBananaSplitz is not online. AnnaBananaSplitz
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29 Sep 2012 07:17 PM
My regret, it burns
In twists and turns
Like a maze
Without an end

Unseal me please
I'm on my knees
I'm fading, gone
Put me in ease.

and this is probably the end because i dont want to make a buttlong poem


~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦
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starlilynight is not online. starlilynight
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29 Sep 2012 07:19 PM
MAKE A DEVIANTART ACC RIGHT NOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Tell it again, Grandpa!
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AnnaBananaSplitz is not online. AnnaBananaSplitz
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29 Sep 2012 07:20 PM
^ why

i already have one anyway
but i haven't done anything on it lol

~Yᴏᴜʀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅʟʏ RT Fʟᴜᴛᴛᴇʀsʜʏ ≧^◡^≦
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