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| 04 Sep 2012 01:57 PM |
One day, I read a story about a newb who ended up being... not a newb XD. I tried to make my own, but sadly failed. SO here I am, trying to make a newb story, hopefully better then last time.
One day, On Mifflin street, Josh was playing computer... "UGH! Falling sand is getting getting kinda boring." Said Josh. "Hey, whats this ad?" The ad said "Build, play, discover! ROBLOX!" "Hey!" Exclaimed Josh, "This looks pretty good!" He clicked on it, and he went to a site. He saw that you could be a 'Guest' and try out the game. "Well, before I make an account," Decided Josh, "I should be a guest and try it out." He found out that you have to click on the game and then click 'Play'. He played around, and found out how to use tools, about game categories, and how to chat using the Pre-Selected chat. "This game isn't bad!" said Josh. He went into a war game, and killed some people. But then, he saw someone say something that almost changed his whole opinion on the game...
Want mo? Please tell me if you do! I hope to continue this. Even if you don't like it >:) |
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hesher
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| 04 Sep 2012 02:44 PM |
| By the way, I'm looking for someone to be in the next chapter (And maybe throughout the book :P) so if you want to be in this book, reply! |
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hesher
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| 05 Sep 2012 12:06 PM |
| Last chance, if you want to be in this book, reply. |
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| 06 Sep 2012 12:55 PM |
Nobody has replied!? Well I shall continue it still!
The player was Cwassy3. She said “Stupid guest! What a NOOB!” Cwassy3 made Josh angry. He said “Ummmm. No.” But Cwassy3 just kept saying “Stupid noob guest!” Josh was furious, and left the game. “Just cause I’m a guest makes me a noob?” He said. He was considering not making an account. “If there are mean people in this game, I don’t want to play!” He shut off his computer and went outside. A couple days later, he thought, “Well… set aside the mean people, the game is really good!” He finally made an account. He wanted to make a simple name, so he made it “Hesher”. He quickly learned more and more about the game. He learned about tix, he learned about groups, and also learned how to send messages. He decided to give payback to Cwassy3. He messaged her saying “I got an account now! Am I still a noob?” But then, Cwassy3 messaged him back…
PLEASE REPLY TELL ME HOW YOU THINK OF IT! |
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| 06 Sep 2012 01:15 PM |
| i like it i want some more |
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| 06 Sep 2012 01:15 PM |
| and i wont be mean il be joshs friend |
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| 06 Sep 2012 02:13 PM |
| Hey this is actually good. You should continue on with this! |
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hesher
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| 06 Sep 2012 04:16 PM |
:D Okay, more volunteers. I'll try to make up a spot for you... for now more! I have tons of material.
Cwassy3’s Message said “I’m sorry I was mean… I was losing the game so I was mad. Want to be friends?” Josh did not know he could be friends with people on the game. He accepted her FR and played with her. Then, Josh saw he got a message from someone called “Builderman”. Josh clicked on it. It told him to watch a video to learn more about the game! He watched it, and learned MORE! Josh was learning so much: about Best Friends, how to use normal chat, parties… and another thing that changed his Roblox experience.
:D This shall be a great story! |
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| 06 Sep 2012 05:20 PM |
If there is another guy in the story ill be him! (nice story bro) |
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| 07 Sep 2012 03:36 PM |
| :3 this may be my only successful thread XP There shall be more soooon! |
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| 08 Sep 2012 02:50 PM |
Okay guys. Next chapter.
Josh had learned about Roblox Sudio. He went into Roblox Studio to tyr it out… but he saw it was WAY too complicated! He looked up about it on Youtube, and found out a couple things about it. He got the brickbattle map, put a gun and a sword on it, and invited Cwassy3 to play. They played a while, but then someone else had entered the game… His name was Oddblooger. He said, “What a stupid game!” Josh was so tired of all the jerks, he said a swear word. “You’ve been reported noob.” Said Oddblooger . Josh didn't know what that meant, but he soon would…
@Youfunnykid, I'll add you in soon enough. |
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| 08 Sep 2012 04:29 PM |
This is pretty good.Can I be in it?
*Star* |
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| 08 Sep 2012 04:32 PM |
| Cool, sounds good. I would like to be featured in this story? Is that ok? |
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| 08 Sep 2012 04:33 PM |
| Oh,and if its not too much,can I not be mean? |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:25 PM |
| darn... i dont wanna be evil |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:27 PM |
| Guys, I might not put you all in, and I might not make you all good... but I will try. |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:27 PM |
| BTW, thx for all the support :3 |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:30 PM |
Still worth it to be part of the story! (NICE!!!) |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:32 PM |
| NP.Like you excellent use of grammar,something not found in most posts here. |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:39 PM |
| wheres the next chapter agghh |
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| 08 Sep 2012 06:40 PM |
| Gonna come out in a few days starguy |
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:27 PM |
Here we go! Next chapter!
The next day, Josh went on to play. But, in horror, found he had been banned. For a second he freaked out. “BANNED?! But I love this game!” Then, he found out that it was only for one day. He told himself he would never say a swear word on roblox again, and went outside to play. He met someone at the park, and asked, “Do you play Roblox?” She said “Ya, my name is Cwassy3”. Josh erupted, “It’s me! Hesher!” They talked about Roblox, and Cwassy3 taught him a bit more about it. She told him about a war group called R.A.T, and Josh said he would look it up tomorrow. But, he didn’t know, he would find even more mean people…
I do NOT think R.A.T is a mean group. I'm just adding suspense :3 I'll add most of you in soon... @Youfunny, I think I can get you in in the chapter after the next. |
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