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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1627
25 Sep 2012 10:59 PM
(ICESHACK3000)
Fact is you need help writing those rhymes
Your not an MC if someone else made those lines
Blasting in your boom box verbal violence lyrical stylist
In a time were young rapper are known as childish
It's the confidence I'm convinced that I will one day blow
Writing rhymes with my lyrical pen led
Bombing rappers like a nuclear warhead
It would only make sense if you give up
You can't run the race the pace is to fast you just won't last
Even on full blast you dash
 Hoping for the best but expecting the worst
There's a limit to everything and you just crossed the line
And thats a mountain you'll soon regret you ever climbed
Because now your in the rap game
The place where people will kick you when your down
Chew you up then spit you out
No matter how much you shout I doubt you'll get help
So just remember this one thing
It's not about the salary being payed hourly
Realizing reality knowing your credit is really yours
Unlike a copy cat yeah I'd like to see you copy that
Not making raps for feedback and to see how they react
Just relax so be you don't change and stay true

(ICESHACK3000)
Your just a star in the making
 patiently waiting to get to the top
Don't get your hopes up
It's harder than it seems to catch your dreams
until you take your self to the extreme
You don't require the skills for your fame desire
It's not as easy as you think
I took a chance with my cleaver rap hook
The difference is I'm real, not like a story book
And there's all these people trying to convince me
That I'm running on empty
But I've been inspired rewired rehired
So now I'm teaming up with one of the bests
Showing my name now that I'm back
Writing on this page
I then let him take the stage...

(JaylenJohnson2)
Ok now pull up your pants please don't sag
Don't even use the word swag
Don't be retarded and be with a pixel
Make your flow blow like a whistle
Don't get mad don't blow up like a missle
Don't be stupid, please don't show out
Show the people what you're about
Be so popular don't be lame
Shows fakes that you got game
Be so wild don't be tame
After A while you'll be glad you came
Make life different don't make it stay the same
So for now just be real
Make your flow as hard as steel
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ELMachoLoco is not online. ELMachoLoco
Joined: 08 Dec 2008
Total Posts: 228
25 Sep 2012 11:04 PM
This is legit. Need a bit of work, but overall, its legit.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1627
25 Sep 2012 11:12 PM
UGM Thanks!
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EpicTurtleOfRoblox is not online. EpicTurtleOfRoblox
Joined: 29 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 12
26 Sep 2012 07:03 AM
Wow.Nice song ICESHACK.Btw,Im in your group.
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drake17dude is not online. drake17dude
Joined: 27 Oct 2011
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26 Sep 2012 07:30 AM
killed it
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dballz12 is not online. dballz12
Joined: 08 Jan 2012
Total Posts: 2
26 Sep 2012 08:38 AM
Yeah it was nice bruh -Chief keef- keep it 3hunna mayne
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Finalsnaap is not online. Finalsnaap
Joined: 26 May 2012
Total Posts: 88
26 Sep 2012 08:43 AM
Nice bro
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
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26 Sep 2012 09:03 AM
Thanks guy!
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DestinytheHarpy is not online. DestinytheHarpy
Joined: 10 Jun 2012
Total Posts: 32
26 Sep 2012 11:22 AM
nice nice
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jaylenjohnson2 is not online. jaylenjohnson2
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26 Sep 2012 03:43 PM
I thought I kinda did bad on my verse :c
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ducky980 is not online. ducky980
Joined: 01 Sep 2012
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26 Sep 2012 03:55 PM
what are you talking about? ice did much much worse
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Hawkbreath7 is not online. Hawkbreath7
Joined: 07 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 17
26 Sep 2012 04:19 PM
"You can't run the race the pace is to fast you just won't last" is from is from Points of Authority, right?
It's a good song though!
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JuicySavi is not online. JuicySavi
Joined: 04 Apr 2012
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26 Sep 2012 04:36 PM
LUV IT SO TRUE!!! hehe you should record yourself singing it and put it on youtube >.<
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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26 Sep 2012 05:20 PM
Thanks everyone I'm glad you guys all liked my song! Jaylen your verse was awesome! Ducky is a trolling kid who only respects the famous like you.
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CeCe1225 is not online. CeCe1225
Joined: 03 Sep 2011
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26 Sep 2012 05:43 PM
I L<3VE IT!!! You should really put it on youtube.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1627
26 Sep 2012 06:21 PM
Im probably not going to do youtube work until I get some studio time. Im currently just writing songs.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1627
26 Sep 2012 08:05 PM
Song just broke 275! My other songs got 1.400 and 4.400 hoping this one starts to boost! D:
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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26 Sep 2012 08:06 PM
*Hopeing
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
Total Posts: 77
26 Sep 2012 08:43 PM
True song. But nothing I would listen to again if it was a actual song. Ice you have talent. But you kinda waisted your verse with some of the things you were saying. Just think the audience doesn't want to know what they have to do they want to know what goes on in your life. Its not a lecture its a rap. If they wanted that then they would more into battling rapping. Nice job though Ice. Jaylen nice effort too.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
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26 Sep 2012 09:30 PM
I think you kinda missed the whole theme of this song. "realizing reality" yeah there is a reason why I chose that as the name. The song is about realizing in reality it's harder to be a rapper than on roblox. That's why it's me and jaylen lecturing the new people on what to do. And if I write about what goes on in my life that completely changes the theme. Glad you liked it though.
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saintboy is not online. saintboy
Joined: 05 Apr 2008
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26 Sep 2012 09:40 PM
No I didn't. I said nothing about you being off topic or saying something that didn't fit the theme. I'm jut saying your wordplay in this song and what you chose to write in your verse was a bit weak and doesn't really excite the audience. All i'm saying is you should take in consideration of what your viewers want to hear from you as well. Ex: maybe talk about your childhood & how you had to push yourself in life to "realize reality" or something like that. But enough of that. Goodjob man just thought I could help u out with a view tips. & also about "Realizing Reality" theme... well jaylen what you said with your verse, it didn't really fit the song.
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MADUBERHAXORNOVA is not online. MADUBERHAXORNOVA
Joined: 08 Mar 2012
Total Posts: 3
26 Sep 2012 09:58 PM
That songs ight need some more work,But nice job
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 1627
26 Sep 2012 11:15 PM
Well thanks anyway! I respect your opinion.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
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27 Sep 2012 06:55 PM
500 views! WOO!
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EpicTurtleOfRoblox is not online. EpicTurtleOfRoblox
Joined: 29 Jun 2011
Total Posts: 12
28 Sep 2012 06:45 AM
Lol.You should make it to a real song.Like with music and all.
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