Shaolar
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:05 PM |
**NOTE** The following story is my Virium Corp Application (which has been accepted, pending for others to see my work such as fighters1234), about the new fort "Topixa II".
Please leave feedback ON the forum, not in my inbox! Thank you!
The warriors of Nightfall Clan have always been aware of their surroundings, their friends, and their enemies – but these legendary warriors have always ignored the consequences of advancing in technology, the loss of resources, and the effects it has their way of life. They were too late, though.
A decade ago the people of Nightfall Clan were drilling the earth in search of plasma to fuel their artillery at Fort Topixa, which was nearby the site of the excavation. Little did the people know of what consequences nature has in store for those who seek to harm without healing.
The ground began to tremble, and the people were in shock. The lands were moving, the mountains were crumbling, and Fort Topixa was falling. The state of the Eternal Warrior shattered into pieces upon the path to the gate, the walls of the fort caved in onto the fortress, and fire was set upon the land from lanterns breaking against the ground and sparks ignited imported oil barrels.
In the following days of the earthquake, the land became a warzone for looters, warriors of NFC dispatched to retake the remains of the fort, and to end the chaos that started it all; the drilling of plasma. The council had voted to destroy the entire operation. Later that day the nuclear devastation of Fort Topixa was ordered, and the flash blinded the witnesses of the destruction.
Now, a decade has passed. The Council has decided to rebuild Fort Topixa, and have given it the name “Topixa II”. Recent attacks from rebels who saw the nuclear destruction of the fort as a corrupt act on the government have increased the demand of security at Topixa II.
So, will you join the fight as a patriot of Nightfall Clan? Or will you die as a traitor?
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:06 PM |
| Die as a traitor and win easyily. |
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GGGGG14
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GGGGG14
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:08 PM |
| I don't know if we accept stories, but I will get the supervisors to take a look. |
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Shaolar
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:08 PM |
ya ik ik die as a traitor is a cool ending and leaves you with a recruitment message that is wierd and kind of funny
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Leave feedback about the story, and anything I can improve on. Thank you for reading it! |
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:11 PM |
THERE WAS A GHOST AT TOPIXA
AND HE HAD THE VIP SWORD
SO EVERYONE DIED
EXCEPT FOR THE ADMIN WHO BANNED THE GHOST
THE GHOST WAS BANNED
THE END
Stick with the prod. Prod with the prod. |
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Shaolar
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:14 PM |
@BoostPowah
The word 'spectre' is talking about how Topixa ended, and how it still is in the heart of the people.
If anyone noticed that I didn't write a paragraph about NFC learning from their mistakes about nature and the enviroment, you can guess what the final copy will include (spoiler). |
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:16 PM |
so they can drill for plasma but they only fight with swords logical
shake shake shake senora shake 11 times work work work senora back in 2 my right and bababa daa |
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Shaolar
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:18 PM |
| It's very logical considering that Topixa II will have guns as the technology has advanced, and that swords are the most durable weapons, you don't have to reload a sword because it has no ammunition, and swordfighting is a skill learned and improved overtime - unlike gun fighting, where all you do is avoid being shot, and pointing and clicking. |
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:26 PM |
COVER ME AM RELOADING *cover kills charging swordsmen* problem solved mister
shake shake shake senora shake 11 times work work work senora back in 2 my right and bababa daa |
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xXVegaXx
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:28 PM |
Looks good. But I do not think we accept stories. Also Topixa II is just our work name. We may not use it.
~Kᴀᴛʏ Pᴇʀʀʏ/xXVᴇɢᴀXx, Nғᴄ Wᴀʀʟᴏʀᴅ |
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Shaolar
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| 27 Sep 2012 07:30 PM |
@vega
idk about the last part
but if we don't use topixa we should use something to do with nature
SO WE REPAY THE PLASMA WE STOLE |
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