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Re: I wrote a song :P

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dale111 is not online. dale111
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22 Sep 2012 01:16 AM
Your words were so hurting
Why would you do this?
You threw me away like I was just nothing,
Nothing to you anyways-
You casted me away with no reasoning
All for you it was just so pleasing
Oh, how I was so afraid-
Oh how I thought we were sisters
But I was mistaken,

I should have seen your dismay.
You locked me away,
From all of humanity
I watch you all for centuries
Ignoring the sun,
surrounded by darkness.
Longed for your face,
Frighten at my presence.
No longer will you rule with your lies and your treason.
For the day I return I shall take back what's rightfully mine.

You ruled the land far too long,
For I have been watching far from above
I've seen through your cruelty
Your everlasting tyranny
Now hand over my crown
Your power means nothing to me
You're a tick on the kingdom
Leeching it's blood without any thought
Soon to be crushed by your prey-
As soon as I rule with my Iron fist
Your world will be engulfed in my everlasting darkness
All to be blamed on you for not stopping me.
Now all you can do is rot away.
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Deviated is not online. Deviated
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22 Sep 2012 01:20 AM
0/100000000000000000

it duznt rhyme
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dale111 is not online. dale111
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22 Sep 2012 01:21 AM
It's a ballad, Your generation might not understand it.
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dale111 is not online. dale111
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22 Sep 2012 01:28 AM
And it does rhyme, it's not solid rhymes though, It more of a rhythm. It's not rap.
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SurfKing12 is not online. SurfKing12
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22 Sep 2012 03:27 AM
That's really nice.
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dale111 is not online. dale111
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23 Sep 2012 10:27 AM
had to do a lot of editing so Roblox would allow it.
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link6249 is not online. link6249
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23 Sep 2012 10:40 AM
my recomendation:

don't post songs on the forums....

With all the ro-rap stuff some one could steal it and use it as his own, or maybe someone from an actual record label.

But besides that, Pretty much good. :P
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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23 Sep 2012 11:57 AM
It wasn't bad.
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Supremmacy is not online. Supremmacy
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23 Sep 2012 12:05 PM
I red the first section, and I have one thing to say: Your an idiot if you choose a person to date that treats you like crap, and stop making love songs. I'd rather have a song that's original, this means not about crime, violence, relationships, or getting baked.
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shonyshon is not online. shonyshon
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23 Sep 2012 01:20 PM
Supremmacy, you don't know how stupid that sounded.
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Supremmacy is not online. Supremmacy
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23 Sep 2012 01:21 PM
Oh, must've not read the whole thing, sisters. Lol sounds like I made an insest joke xD
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shonyshon is not online. shonyshon
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23 Sep 2012 01:31 PM
asdf.
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german291 is not online. german291
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23 Sep 2012 02:45 PM
hey nice song. i was just wondering what was the process you used to write this or did you just write what was on your mind
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lila47 is not online. lila47
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23 Sep 2012 02:47 PM
Oh god this was good

Please stay :>
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johnb is not online. johnb
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23 Sep 2012 03:16 PM
^Authority on text musik.
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2james3 is not online. 2james3
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23 Sep 2012 03:24 PM
Amazing, I love music. You've got alot of creativity in you. http://www.punk-o-matic.net/ this is a great website to post music and stuff, you should use it...
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johnb is not online. johnb
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23 Sep 2012 03:25 PM
^No trojans on that site, it's pretty legit.
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2james3 is not online. 2james3
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23 Sep 2012 03:45 PM
It's Very legit, its a game website, why would it be Trojan or maliwared?
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ferrykeizer is not online. ferrykeizer
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23 Sep 2012 03:45 PM
Fair enough, but a bit predictable lyrics.
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ferrykeizer is not online. ferrykeizer
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23 Sep 2012 03:45 PM
Well enough, but a bit predictable lyrics.
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johnb is not online. johnb
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23 Sep 2012 03:45 PM
Precisely. That's why I said it's legit.
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ferrykeizer is not online. ferrykeizer
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23 Sep 2012 03:47 PM
*Rage*

Damn you Roblox and their double posts! Because you told me that the early one was against the rules, so I changed. >:C
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johnb is not online. johnb
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23 Sep 2012 03:51 PM
How wuz it against the rules, lol?
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ferrykeizer is not online. ferrykeizer
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23 Sep 2012 03:53 PM
That's a mystery for me.
Roblox just hates me, got banned for mentioning babies growing inside women once.
IT'S SUPER NATURAL! >:C
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johnb is not online. johnb
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23 Sep 2012 03:54 PM
They be a bunch of fascists, in my opinion.
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