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Re: OOC; I'm scared to post chapter 1 of a story

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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 12:17 AM
I'm scared to post chapter one of a story I'm writing. What if it's trolled to death??
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BuilderGuy12 is not online. BuilderGuy12
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23 Sep 2012 12:20 AM
drop it and lock it
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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 12:22 AM
I mean, I do want help on it. I know chapter one is friggin' short though... But I guess that works.
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Dreadnor is not online. Dreadnor
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23 Sep 2012 12:32 AM
Just have a thick hide. If they troll it, ignore them. Just listen to the valid criticism. If everyone who posts is trolling, then you might have a problem with your storytelling abilities.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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23 Sep 2012 12:38 AM
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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 01:44 AM
LOL. I posted it, just..Yeah.
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EpicBoyMike is not online. EpicBoyMike
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23 Sep 2012 06:38 AM
Keyra,FEED US THE LINK!
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Leodin is not online. Leodin
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23 Sep 2012 07:55 AM
Careful, I may post Constructive Criticism.

And my Constructive Criticism is very blunt, and to the point.
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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 02:30 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=78692484




I made it so no posts are allowed. LINK HAS BEEN FED.
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AbCatchem is not online. AbCatchem
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23 Sep 2012 02:32 PM
I saw your story earlier, and I liked it.
However, something happened:
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=78696478
Maybe she was Trolling or trying to annoy you or something.
.-.
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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 02:37 PM
I see.....
Well I'm going to act like I'm annoyed though it slightly amuses me that she did that. XD
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hesher is not online. hesher
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23 Sep 2012 02:55 PM
SHe did say credit.
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Leodin is not online. Leodin
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23 Sep 2012 02:57 PM
My first little thing to point out.

"Carley walked beside Shayaa, her best friend. Nothing, NOTHING, could seperate the two. Carley always said, not even a shark could."

That's pretty much saying that a Shark IS either going to seperate them, or attack them.
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hesher is not online. hesher
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23 Sep 2012 03:23 PM
She used foreshadowing. It's a good element to a story.
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Dreadnor is not online. Dreadnor
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23 Sep 2012 03:28 PM
Foreshadowing is best when used with subtlety. Don't make it obvious, but make so you have a slight hint. Like a dash of salt instead of dumping the whole container into your food.
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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 04:06 PM
I did say I can't write.
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Dreadnor is not online. Dreadnor
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23 Sep 2012 04:16 PM
Just plainly saying you can't write isn't an excuse. You either want to improve, or you don't.

Do you have the passion?
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dxhardys12 is not online. dxhardys12
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23 Sep 2012 05:02 PM
ask for constructive criticism, there is bound to be some
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keyra14 is not online. keyra14
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23 Sep 2012 05:12 PM
Half and half, I never really was able to get into details or anything like that so someone would be like they love it a lot.
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hesher is not online. hesher
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11 Oct 2012 06:15 PM
I liked it. You have a good writer in you, keep improving!
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