gamert7
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| 21 Sep 2012 01:14 AM |
Before i go on, i will show you some feedback i have gotten on let's beef.
Not sure what Sanz is talking about I think this was a serious nice read .. I feel like this could go into 85% of mainstream rap I mean it's better than 2 chains but not touching NAS and Common.
Really should put this to a track. I liked the drop but it would sound better. Keep putting in the work
1.Try to rap with a concept. Basically if your going to create a song, about getting bullied. do not go from getting bullied to rapping about kittens. Or whatever stick to one thing. Make sure it does not lack cohesiveness.
2. Do not write a song, about the same thing over and over again. It makes it look like your not creative, so in return people will not want to here from you.
3. Use extensive, vocabulary. In a song rhyme words like hydraulics. Words, with a alot of syllables, as it shows you have a good vocabulary that way.
4. NEVER rhyme 1 syllable words. You, just look like your dr, suess, that way.
5. A suggestion, is to do multi's if you do not know what multi's are get outta here.
6. Not needed but, try to do rhyming cufflets, lose yourself is a good example, of using this.
7. Do not, rap about how much women you have, or how much, money u got. No need for more Lil wayne's or guicci mane's
8. Keep it real, and do not pretend that you, have swagger because, you rap. You give us a bad name.
Want a indepth explantion. Pm me. |
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racsmnoz
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| 21 Sep 2012 04:37 AM |
These are all true. This guy knows what he is talking about. He is on LetsBeef. Epic website, you audio? |
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altar30
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| 21 Sep 2012 09:20 AM |
I guess those tips are helpful for rappers but let's beef is a rap battle sight and doesn't really have an any Credibility for song making :/
What's your let's beef username or watever? |
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Pennyz
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| 21 Sep 2012 09:20 AM |
When I fiend for a micophone...
But also another thing to add- Make sure your voice isn't flat. I HATE IT!! I HATE IT when a rapper is flat. |
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crayon24
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| 21 Sep 2012 06:23 PM |
and do not say stuff like "yo i spit rhymes like busta rhymes"
that sounds silly |
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| 21 Sep 2012 09:56 PM |
well, I, think, this, is, quite, odd, as, I, have, no, context, to, work, with, to, understand, letsbeef,.
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| 21 Sep 2012 10:02 PM |
then why are you talking about it here
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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link6249
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| 21 Sep 2012 10:28 PM |
| Addd to the list to not post on MT :D |
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Gary141
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| 22 Sep 2012 12:49 AM |
Rules for poetry: None.
If you're following rules to write rhymes, you're doing it wrong.
"4. NEVER rhyme 1 syllable words. You, just look like your dr, suess, that way." Dude, Seuss actually had amazing rhymes. They were silly and fun and that's why they were great. "Oh! The Places You'll Go" is entirely amazing. |
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shonyshon
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LilRac
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| 22 Sep 2012 08:11 AM |
| I will find you on beef. My username is the same as now. |
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| 22 Sep 2012 01:24 PM |
| This is good advice...I'm going to save this on my notepad. |
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shonyshon
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| 22 Sep 2012 01:45 PM |
I made songs like that before reading this
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racsmnoz
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| 22 Sep 2012 07:15 PM |
^Legit
[LilRac & Racsmnoz are the same people] |
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ducky980
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| 22 Sep 2012 07:16 PM |
| gamert is the terrible rapper! I remember now. Your all taking advice from him... Im disappointed in you guys |
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