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| 09 Sep 2012 04:15 PM |
Participants:
1. catzrcute 2. zacaris 3. blanchey 4. l0ldude1 5. alpha8 6. dex10awesome 7. dreadnor 8. Abcatchem 9. rockfun133 10. Rangergirl3373 11. GIGI777 12. Sarhath 13. fathat121 14. redtalon65 15. 1perrytheplatypus
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Judges:
1. CreativeMystery 2. Revolvulation 3. loppolh 4. MarkJarkson/ ArticArrow 5. MrGiraffe1
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Welcome to the first round of CreativeMystery's Story Writing Competition. To start us off let's review some rules.
Rules: -Story must be at least 5 paragraphs long and at most 20. -Story must meet requirements. -Inability to meet demands with rules you have the possibility of disqualifications. -Posted stories must be posted on RP and link must be sent to me in PM.
Now, for the requirements for this round:
Your story must contain a type of war or battle, you can interpret this however you wish. If must have a moral to the story that is clearly pointed out. Finally the main character must be a woman.
NOW....START!
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:17 PM |
| How long do we have per story? Remember that at least most of us are in school now so we won't have much free time... |
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:18 PM |
| I say we give them 2 days? |
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vamking12
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:19 PM |
| I have free time can I make a story. |
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Dreadnor
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:19 PM |
"If must have a moral to the story that is clearly pointed out."
I assume you mean it? |
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:22 PM |
| Um... two days really isn't much time, ESPECIALLY with school. |
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:24 PM |
| I'd say you should give them a week. |
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:34 PM |
| It's all up to Creative who isn't on yet... So yea. Start whipping something up! |
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blanchey
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| 09 Sep 2012 04:37 PM |
| One sec I will grab a page from the book I am starting to write. |
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Sarhath
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:06 PM |
| I say four days. That's plenty of time to get down five paragraphs, and for me I could have around fifty up. If its on a school (AKA monday-thursady or tuesday-friday, give them saturday to do it.) |
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AbCatchem
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:07 PM |
| May we post it on this thread right now? |
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:07 PM |
| You post the link not on here. |
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Sarhath
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:07 PM |
| I've got mine, but do I just post it on a random RP?Sorry, I read the rules, just checking. |
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:08 PM |
| I think Creative meant for you to post it as a thread on its own. |
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:09 PM |
| Ab, did you ALREADY finish yours?!? I am now disappointed in my writing speed. |
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AbCatchem
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:09 PM |
Sillies, this should only take you as much as two hours. ^_^ Now to make the thread. |
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AbCatchem
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:10 PM |
| No, not yet, I do have an incredible pace, but I haven't planned it yet. |
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blanchey
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:14 PM |
Chapter 1 _____The room was bright with red. The floor made of rotten flesh. There is a bed in the center of the room with a little boy around 5 in the bed. He sat up and eyes wide with surprise. He saw people burning in flames screaming in pain. One of them was his father who died eight months ago in his sleep. When they found his body he was covered in blood. _____The kid heard of this place from his dad. The place of h***. He thought his dad was trying to scare him. Now the kid knows it is true. He heard a deep creepy voice saying, "GET OFF THE BED FOR YOUR FIRST TRIAL OR DEATH!" The kid got up and heard the same voice yell, "YOU HAVE FAILED!" A spike came from the wall behind him and impaled him in his head. (My hand write must be big because that was chapter one. :) )
Chapter 2 _____Can't see. The smoke keeps getting in his eyes as he puffs hi smokes. She watches her dad like he did not belong. ____"Natalle! Your friends are here!" Her mother yelled. ____Natalle yelled, "Let them in! I need to get ready!" Natalle ran up her stairs to her room to grab her pink dress she longed to wear. It was sparkly like the night sky. She goes to the bathroom to get her make up on. Herr lips are pinkish, her cheeks are redder, her hair is dirty blonde, her eyes is deep blue, and her skin so perfectly tanned. She was the prettiest girl in school. Everyone liked her. _____ She walks down stairs as the first group of her friends came in. The first was Don. She wore a white dress with some blue make up on her face. she barly noticed it was on. The second was Bob (Say punches Bob in the face if you hate him so far. XD) He is Don's b.oyfriend (I do not know if it would get me banned so I rather not find out.) He wore a leather black jacket with a white shirt underneath ad wore blue jeans and a pair of black shoes. They are both white. _____ Natalle ran up toward Don yelling, "I can't believe you made it!" _____Bob said, "Would of came sooner but Don would not hurry up." _____Don replied angrily, "I could not get ready with my parents yelling at me." _____Bob said, "maybe you should of feed your stupid cat before starting to get ready. _____Don yelled, "I could not get ready with you beating me again!" _____Natelle sighed as this goes on everyday. She still wonders why Don likes Bob. Then Natalle saw more of her friends coming up. Jack wore a tux with a red tie, Ron wore one with a blue tie, Rick wore the same thing with a yellow tie, Ted wore one with a ducky tie (Thumbs up for the show How I Met Your Mother) and John wore a green tie. _____The girls all wore sparkly dress, Jen wore a blue dress, Autumn wore a green dress, and Jackie wore a red dress, As everyone came in Natalle's mom and dad said, "Bye! Be good! Happy sweet 16 Natalle!" Jack came up and k.iss Natalle (Sorry the () is not part of the story it is just to tell you random stuff or tell you that I put some (.) ate places I think would get me banned for saying it.) on her lips. _____Jack said, "HI am having some friends bring the cake and you favorite japaness food." _____Nattalle h.ugged Jack and said, "Thanks. _____At nine ten the food and cake arrived at last and at Ten o clock it was lights out... ___________________________To be continued.________________________________ |
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blanchey
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:15 PM |
| Oops messed up. Suppose to pm the link and make a thread. Doh. |
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:18 PM |
No you are supposed to post the link here, but put the story on a different thread.
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blanchey
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:19 PM |
| Oh. ok so I should make the thread with my story on it and post link here. Got it. |
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blanchey
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:20 PM |
| http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=77830970 |
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| 09 Sep 2012 05:21 PM |
| Artic, did Creative ever tell you how judging is going to work? |
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