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| 19 Sep 2012 04:18 PM |
There are may things in Life, That I don't know if there right, But Im trailing in the night, And I ended up in this big fight.
I was hanging with my Bros , After Shooting up some Ho's Yeah we were in some trouble, LIke Tom brady in the huddle,
We found that we got them called on us, And then we all tried to cover up, But All of them got By With a Slap on a Wrist, But My Fate was seald with a kiss, Because I was the only one Without an Alibi,
And Now I'm here just sitting in jail, 'Cause I couldn't make Bail, And Now I cant Even Catch some Tail,
And now I'm sitting with a bunch of men, Yeah were sleeping three to a bed, I barley Have any room for my Head,
And Now I'm With out the rest of my crew And Now I'm Preeching To Young Kids Like you About The Realities of being in a g@ng It'll get you killed bro and thats the truth |
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| 19 Sep 2012 04:19 PM |
| In the third verse "Them" is reffering to Cops. |
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| 19 Sep 2012 04:27 PM |
| Okay. So what. Its your Opnion. Key word in that Sentance? OPNION. |
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| 19 Sep 2012 04:29 PM |
| Me? I am just having a creative out post. |
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| 19 Sep 2012 05:33 PM |
Your bumps despise me,
So does your obnoxious list of words. |
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| 19 Sep 2012 05:36 PM |
| Because you suck and have no talent. |
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| 19 Sep 2012 05:38 PM |
| Trying to Trol or are Trying to start a flame war. |
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| 19 Sep 2012 05:41 PM |
| Trying to make you leave because no one likes you. |
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RagEgnite
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| 19 Sep 2012 05:42 PM |
| If I had a nickle for everytime I saw a negative opinion on a Ro-Rap thread... |
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| 19 Sep 2012 06:05 PM |
"If I had a nickle for everytime I saw a negative opinion on a Ro-Rap thread..."
If I had a Nickle for every (Actual) Bad rap.......... ....Bill Gates would seem Poor compared to me... |
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| 19 Sep 2012 08:49 PM |
| I'm Sorry. I guess you didn't care. So why did you post? |
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altar30
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| 19 Sep 2012 08:53 PM |
| The song sucked but cmon music dudes. Instead of saying HES retarded or HE should go die, can you guys like tell him what you dont like about the song. Constructive Criticism will help him get better O_O |
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| 19 Sep 2012 08:54 PM |
| Thanks Alatar. What do you think I should do to improve it? |
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altar30
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| 19 Sep 2012 08:59 PM |
I rememer a time where songs actually got feedback, now everyone thinks its about money and swag -_-
Anyways the song could have some more meaning and better lead ins to the rhymes, it kinda sounds forced. Also you can try on getting a better vocabulary to describe certain aspects. Other than that it was pretty good. 7.5/10 |
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| 19 Sep 2012 09:01 PM |
| Thanks Alatar I'll work on it. This is also only my first draft of it. |
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