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| 03 Sep 2012 05:04 AM |
This trailer took about 3 days to sucessfully make, and some public domain music also. Again special thanks to all those I credit in the description of the video on Youtube and Please Rate, Comment, Subscribe, and of course Play!
http://www.roblox.com/TMF-Headquarters-place?id=18559021 |
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| 03 Sep 2012 08:46 AM |
| Thank you for your kind review, sir. |
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Olympus23
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:52 AM |
| Thanks for using my trailer. Great commercial. |
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| 03 Sep 2012 09:21 PM |
I didn't really like it.
I visited the game to see if it looked like what you showed it...it didn't. You added too many visual effects to make it look better.
Also, why did you add that stair scene? That kinda ruined the video. It was so dizzy and confusing.
The video was pretty over edited... |
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| 03 Sep 2012 09:27 PM |
| Actually I only used Chroma Key, and Vignette. I'd argue it was underedited. |
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| 03 Sep 2012 09:30 PM |
I visited your game.
It didn't look like what was shown in the trailer. You put make up on it.
Some camera angles were very shaky like the stair scene.
It could of been better. |
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| 03 Sep 2012 09:52 PM |
The only shaky camera angles WERE only on the stair scene, to make it look like he was running up the stairs.
Plus, as I just stated, I only used two effects on the game. If that's makeup, then most trailers I've seen are over-powdered.
And can you give a suggestion as to how it could've been better?
Every scene I shot was shot on site. |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:00 PM |
1) Replaces scenes like the stair scene, the go to the bathroom scene and the relax scene.
They are pointless and not very funny.
2) I compared the front of your game with the one in the video. You clearly changed a lot to make it look better, but the results were that it looked really edited. You have your opinion, I have mine. You clearly tried to edit it to look different.
You are the one that wanted people to review it. What did you only want people to be like "omg 1000/10" |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:08 PM |
1. Well that's just like your opinion man
2. You compared the front of my game, I assume you mean you went into the game, looked at the front of the building and then left. I didn't change or alter anything, and if you feel so please tell me why because I cannot read your mind.
I don't actually, all I want is reviews that make sense. You are saying I over-powdered the entire video when you give no evidence and then somewhat insult me with "omg 1000/10." I'm more or less confused by your constant negativity. |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:10 PM |
I like it, what software do you use?
"Instead of seeing what they want you to see, you gotta open your brain to the possibilities." - King Bumi |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:12 PM |
1) Don...it isn't really an opinion if I can compare two pictures and they look very different. If I showed you Katy Perry with make up and without you would see a difference correct?
2) I told you what you should change in your trailer....
Whatever, you probably won't win anyways. Good bye. |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:12 PM |
| Sony Vegas for editing and Bandicam for recording |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:16 PM |
So basically you insult me twice and expect me to now take your opinion seriously again. Plus many people would probably argue Katy Perry looks great without the makeup and others the exact opposite opinion. Therefore Yes it is an opinion.
2. You basically said remove three scenes you didn't find funny, therefore again your opinion. You gave no reasoning as to why other than you didn't find them funny while others very well do. Your opinion.
Seriously do I have to constantly have to explain this to you?
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| 05 Sep 2012 01:36 PM |
4.5/10
1) Over edited beginning.
2) The activities were boring.
3) That terrible stair scene...
"Use the restroom?"
"Exercise up the stairs?"
"Relax after a day at work?"
Really? That is what you are advertising?
Plus, "Wait for an EPIC appointment"
Sitting in a waiting room....sounds epic.....*sarcasm* |
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| 05 Sep 2012 02:12 PM |
| 7/10 I thought it looked cool but some of the subtitles were weird...and the stairs part was really to fast and was hard to follow. But other then that it was cool. |
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| 05 Sep 2012 02:56 PM |
9/10
YOU SHOULD'VE USED MIKE HIKE FOR THE GREEN SCREEN
no, I'm joking
10/10 |
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| 05 Sep 2012 03:08 PM |
4.4/10
The Bad
1) It's an HQ. I felt like it was supposed to be a joke or a parody.
2) This is more of a nitpick, but the hues didn't mix in. A Black and White visual hue but the music sounding quite unfitting.
3). Didn't really work. It took me 2 times to sit through it. The first I cancelled because it was so boring. Try using a different game and approach.
The Good
1) Well done with the camera work
2) Great Editting
3) The Place looked nice actually
I think the other users are being ignorant. I hate how someone complained about false advertising. Really? I'd like to see him do better. |
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| 08 Sep 2012 09:04 AM |
1.) Well to be honest, just because it is an HQ doesn't mean it can be somewhat enjoyable to play there. Heck, most Super-Clan forts all you do is sit there, defend and Guard.
2.) I didn't use Hues, no color correction was done.
3.) Well that's just like your opinion man.
Thanks for your review and not being a total degrading person who doesn't know how criticism works. |
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| 08 Sep 2012 09:28 AM |
| What I meant by hues was color theme. |
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| 11 Sep 2012 03:18 AM |
The issue I see here is people took it as a literal commercial. Whereas I see it as more of a self mockery sort of trailer. Which is amusing to me. It's easy to be serious with it but I don't think that was Don's intention here. |
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