LilRac
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| 08 Sep 2012 07:02 AM |
[The truth in Justice]
You want the truth from me, you want me to let you see, the real world I hope you agree, the government is getting greedy, the ways are starting to get seedy.
All I hear is borrow borrow lend, never we are about to mend, what we have done to the economy, it honestly sickens me, it honestly thickens me, can't trust nobody to do a good job, elect them an they do it like a slob, supporting those who rob, letting em free as a favor, but not one for america.
Everywhere you look you see corruption, agrue with it and it's disruption. Get sentenced to years behind, for doing good, like you should, but there is no justice in the system, dont disagree with em, they have friends, that could bring you to an ends.
[The truth in Justice] |
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shonyshon
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| Joined: 23 Feb 2008 |
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| 08 Sep 2012 08:30 AM |
You don't know how much I love reading your songs out loud.
It's like I know exactly how to rap them! ^.^ |
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racsmnoz
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| Joined: 12 Oct 2010 |
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| 08 Sep 2012 09:02 AM |
Thanks shony. I appreciate everyones feedback throughout my raps. I will varry on to do more. But I will do them on the LilRac acc.... To avoid a ban. Lol |
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altar30
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| Joined: 26 Nov 2010 |
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| 08 Sep 2012 10:35 AM |
Nice job Rac :D
You've gotten a lot better from your first song, keep it up man :) |
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racsmnoz
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| 08 Sep 2012 02:07 PM |
| Thanks altar. You guys have stuck by me from the start :) |
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ducky980
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| 08 Sep 2012 03:59 PM |
6/10
needsa lot of improvment |
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racsmnoz
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| 08 Sep 2012 04:03 PM |
| I honestly agree with ducky. It was rushed. I'll try harder next time... Just for all of you MF'ers :) |
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ProJoe12
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| 25 Nov 2012 08:23 PM |
5/10
It's okay, but try to think deeper.
"it honestly thickens me, "
e_e Dirty thoughts. |
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ducky980
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| 25 Nov 2012 08:50 PM |
| no that I read it agin its a 4/10 |
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| 25 Nov 2012 10:07 PM |
| 2/10 because almost all of this is untrue |
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