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Re: A story I made that I think sucks

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gromlix is not online. gromlix
Joined: 07 Oct 2010
Total Posts: 468
05 Sep 2012 10:54 PM
The smell of the sea was intense. Our Venezian SpitfireVTOLs were nearing the dropzone. I checked my target watch. 05 minutes until transports reached the LZ. I glanced at my combat buddy, TimeLord , who was sitting right next to me in the Spitfire. I asked him, “Are you nervous?”

“Yes…Rumor has it that the Sparrow Corporation has some heavy AA guns on the islands. I hope we don’t just blown out of the sky before reaching the LZ.”

“Trust me, Bodi is a good pilot, I’m sure we’ll reach the LZ without a scratch, the real fight will be on the Borealis islands.”
“Whatever you say, Grimm.”

I looked around, my whole squad was in the Spitfire. We were elite fighters, part of the the Grimm’s Reapers battalion gathered to repel the famed Rangers that were rumored to reinforce the Borealis fort and change the game. 01 minutes to LZ drop. I was a bit nervous, Command didn’t say whether or not Rangers were there. If they were, we would be toast. A beep came from the cockpit, I glanced toward the direction of Bodi. Bodi exclaimed, “Crap! I got radar warning! Heavy flak inbound!” Bodi began evasive maneuvers, as well did the other Spitfires behind us. The anti-aircraft shells launched from Frostarian ground forces shook the Spitfire. Bodi drove us lower. My heart was beating faster. We were only a few hundred meters from the LZ; we were going to make it on the islands, only seconds away from drop. Bodi cursed loudly. I knew something was wrong. Then it went black.

The Sptifire got hit directly head on by an AA shell. The velocity of both objects and the explosives within the shell blew up the Spitfire entirely and my squad and I were blown out of the heli. I looked toward the exploding sky as I fell toward an evitable death in the icy sea.

It was a miracle. I plunged into the sea, and survived the initial force of impact. I swam torward one of the nearby islands, running on training instincts. This was going to be a grueling battle.
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starpilot12 is not online. starpilot12
Joined: 30 Jun 2010
Total Posts: 5758
05 Sep 2012 10:55 PM
And then I come out of nowheres and Shoot an RAT soldier and t-bag him.
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ImAwesomeFoo is not online. ImAwesomeFoo
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Total Posts: 3650
05 Sep 2012 10:56 PM
HALOOOOOOO @ star
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starpilot12 is not online. starpilot12
Joined: 30 Jun 2010
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05 Sep 2012 10:56 PM
Hi. @IAF
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BOSSXD is not online. BOSSXD
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05 Sep 2012 10:56 PM
i


read


nothing.
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JOHNSTER98 is not online. JOHNSTER98
Joined: 07 Nov 2009
Total Posts: 1914
05 Sep 2012 10:57 PM
I'm not in it, this story is invalid.
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starpilot12 is not online. starpilot12
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05 Sep 2012 10:59 PM
One Does Not Simply Name A Story Invalid Johnster.
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Imperatos is not online. Imperatos
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05 Sep 2012 11:00 PM
Then I snipe you
hi grom
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SupremeWarrior1878 is not online. SupremeWarrior1878
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05 Sep 2012 11:00 PM
ogm die
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JOHNSTER98 is not online. JOHNSTER98
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05 Sep 2012 11:01 PM
@star, but didn't I do just that?
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ImAwesomeFoo is not online. ImAwesomeFoo
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05 Sep 2012 11:05 PM
mind blow
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PappyJR99 is not online. PappyJR99
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05 Sep 2012 11:12 PM
Horrible.
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