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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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02 Sep 2012 11:46 PM
[Story Board]

Changlings have overrun most towns in Equestria, except for Ponyville, and Canterlot.You, chosen to be a royal Canterlot Guard, is going to fight in the battle field for total glory.But, with Queen Chrysalis defeated, the Changlings have found a new king, instead of queen, his name is King Metamorphasis.You are posted in Manehattan, with Changlings overun every building, and street.That, is where you story begins.

[Character Board]
Name:
Race: (Unicorn, Pegasi,Earth Pony, or Alicorn)
A.ge:
Born:
Bio: (Optional, but recommended)
Look:
Cutie Mark:

[My Character Board]
Name: Night Strike
Race:Pegasi
A.ge:23
Born:Ponyville
Bio:At infancy, was already a great flyer, already doing major tricks, until his father died, and he was very fond of flying.He didnt fly for another 6 years, until his mother told him it was natural for all living things to die, so he just dealt with it.At the age of 18, he was doing speeds of mach 5, trying to break Rainbow Dash's speed of mach 10 (76,000 MPH, doing the Sonic Rainboom), and he beat it,he did a Sonic Moonburst.During the Chanlings first assault on Appleoosa, he enlisted, and 1 year later, he became a Canterlot royal guard.
Look:Black, with a red mane, wearing night guard armor. (Grey colored)
Cutie Mark:Moon in backround, showing a pegasi shilouette (spelled wrong I think) showing on the moon.

[Rules]
1- not going to accept any blood/gore.
2-no innipropriate roblox topics.
3-no haters, I really dont want haters ruining the thread.
4-try to not argue, love and tolerate
5-Have fun!
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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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02 Sep 2012 11:51 PM
Go catch cancer.
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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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02 Sep 2012 11:57 PM
Read the rules, it says no haters.
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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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02 Sep 2012 11:59 PM
Too bad.
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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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03 Sep 2012 12:02 AM
Honestly, haters can't accept what people like.I dont really like you dude, but, I atleast try to make ROBLOX roleplaying fun.
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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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03 Sep 2012 12:04 AM
Rp is fun, it gets ruined by fools like you.
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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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03 Sep 2012 12:06 AM
Give me ONE reason how I ruined it. I gave specific info, character boards, and rules. What else could I have left out!?
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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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03 Sep 2012 12:14 AM
It's not that you left anything out, we don't really like bronies around here.
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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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03 Sep 2012 12:15 AM
Okay, say that to 1.7 million bronies on roblox.
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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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03 Sep 2012 12:17 AM
They know there place, they stay out of here.
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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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03 Sep 2012 12:20 AM
There are a lot of Brony threads in the forums, dude.
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Recesity is not online. Recesity
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03 Sep 2012 12:20 AM
"They know there place"

*THEIR

*THEIR

*THEIR

*THEIR

*THEIR

Okay, civilian, we have found no other problems with that sentence. You are off with a warning.



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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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03 Sep 2012 12:20 AM
Not on rp, my friend, of course there are the ot bronies, the rt bronies, but their are no rp bronies, now piss off.
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Dreadnor is not online. Dreadnor
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03 Sep 2012 12:21 AM
I suppose you could say the story is rather flawed, along with your character and sheet options. Allowing us to be alicorns is rather risky, mainly because that sort of thing is restricted to princesses, such as Celestia, Luna, and Cadance. If everyone could be an alicorn, that sort of thing might get out of hand, with people using godly powers to easily wipe out Changelings.

You also don't give us many options for characters. We can only be part of the Canterlot Guard. It'd be rather enjoyable if we could be something else. What if we're an Earth Pony that despite not having any training, just wants to help out the guard and save their home? How about a unicorn that has a family in Manehattan and is so worried about them, they rush there, inadvertently getting themselves into battle?

Another point is that your character has a few overpowered qualities. Rainbow Dash is one of a kind and canon. Being able to get on level with her Sonic Rainboom is a bit of a stretch, as well as a risky move. You could also try developing your pony a bit more. If his name is Night Strike, why not change him a bit to fit his name? Maybe both of his parents were in the Royal Guard and wanted their colt to follow in their hoofsteps, so they had him train every night and day. Perhaps he earned his cutie mark after doing exceptionally well in training one night, which resulting in him developing a "night strike" move.

But these are just suggestions. You do not have to take them.
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zororoarkmaster3000 is not online. zororoarkmaster3000
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03 Sep 2012 12:24 AM
Ok, ill make another giving out more positions, including changling army, and the rebels that are on neither side.Also, my character night strike was born in ponyville, resulting in that his parents couldnt be Canterlot guards.
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bebithetufflealt is not online. bebithetufflealt
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03 Sep 2012 12:25 AM
Please go away op, we don't wish to choke on your cancer.
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Robloxrocks3376 is not online. Robloxrocks3376
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03 Sep 2012 12:27 AM
@Dread

Your ideas are freaking genius.

@Bebi

Shut up already.
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Dreadnor is not online. Dreadnor
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03 Sep 2012 12:27 AM
Yes, I know it would require for you to change where his parents were born and other details, but it could result in improvement. The first product can always be changed for the better. That is because not everything can be perfect on the first attempt.

But yes, I mainly suggest developing the story more. I am not a brony and have only watched two episodes, so I cannot help much in regards of the pony-mythos, but I can try to advise you in what little I know about canon.
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Robloxrocks3376 is not online. Robloxrocks3376
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03 Sep 2012 12:28 AM
@Dread

For only watching two episodes, you sure know a lot.
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Dreadnor is not online. Dreadnor
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03 Sep 2012 12:32 AM
Read the wiki a bit, and a few informative tutorials on how to make OCs. Rather informative.
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TerrifyingObject is not online. TerrifyingObject
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03 Sep 2012 12:45 AM
Guys, SwedishLemon is also a brony. Guess what. He doesn't go around spamming childish pony RPs everywhere and quite frankly, we like him for that.


WE. ARE. NOT. INTERESTED. IN. PINK. PONIES.
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