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| 01 Sep 2012 04:15 PM |
Hi there!
I have just made a trailer for my upcoming game, both to show off what the game will be like, and to enter the Trailer-contest.
However, I'd really love some feedback on the trailer itself, if you could care spending 30 seconds to watch it. All contents are original, the only thing pre-made was the ROBLOX Logo.
URL: http://www.roblox.com/The-Mind-Storyboard-place?id=78309568 -- If you want to see the trailer directly on YouTube: bit (.) ly / NIPW5I (remove spaces and (.))
Audio equipment: Røde K-2 hooked up through an M-Audio Fast Track Pro, up to Cubase 5.1 (Steinberg, Licensed). Recording: Hypercam (Not too great quality of the actual recording, I'm aware of that) Editing: Vegas Pro 11 (Licensed)
Any feedback? Was it good? Did it explain what you want to know about the game? Should I change anything for future trailers? Was it too vague? Please post comments! =) |
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BlabVoid
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| 01 Sep 2012 10:06 PM |
Thanks :}
anyone else? :) Constructive critism? |
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iLimitedU
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| 02 Sep 2012 05:22 AM |
Go on xwater :)
And I really like it |
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| 03 Sep 2012 07:56 AM |
Thanks, mate!
Anyone else have any feedback on the trailer? |
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| 03 Sep 2012 12:35 PM |
if you had morgan freeman voice
i would give it a 1000/10
~MOOOOlah 3:8~ holy ponure!!1 |
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| 03 Sep 2012 01:34 PM |
| And with my own voice, I get.. 2/10? :C I even made the chorus in the background! |
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| 03 Sep 2012 03:29 PM |
| Bumpedy bump! :D I want feedback! |
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| 03 Sep 2012 04:47 PM |
| i think you did a great job with the special effects and editing! keep up the good work! 9/10 |
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| 03 Sep 2012 04:59 PM |
| Thank you, duncan! :) what could I do / change / remove to imorove it even more? |
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| 03 Sep 2012 07:30 PM |
| that was keel i could play that |
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| 03 Sep 2012 09:22 PM |
| I liked it. I hope the game turns up as good. |
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| 04 Sep 2012 01:20 PM |
Bumpety bump! :) Any more feedback? I want to improve my future trailers. |
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| 04 Sep 2012 02:08 PM |
Wow, awesome...I personally can't make my own music lol. Love it!
~[I'm Clock #weirdo]~ |
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| 04 Sep 2012 06:59 PM |
| I liked how it was like a movie, nice job I give it a 75/100! |
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Jtmt88
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| 04 Sep 2012 07:26 PM |
You can improve on your visuals.
7/10 |
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| 05 Sep 2012 12:30 AM |
More specifically, Jtmt? EVERY visual, or a certain part? And thanks for the feedback, guys. |
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Jtmt88
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| 05 Sep 2012 11:34 AM |
| Specifically, the wording. |
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| 05 Sep 2012 11:43 AM |
I get you. I'll keep in mind and try to improve that. The "Collect .. to unlock .. " stuff is what you mean, I assume? That's the thing I regret doing the most in the video as well, so.. :I |
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