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Re: Trailer Feedback Wanted!

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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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01 Sep 2012 04:15 PM
Hi there!

I have just made a trailer for my upcoming game, both to show off what the game will be like, and to enter the Trailer-contest.

However, I'd really love some feedback on the trailer itself, if you could care spending 30 seconds to watch it.
All contents are original, the only thing pre-made was the ROBLOX Logo.

URL: http://www.roblox.com/The-Mind-Storyboard-place?id=78309568
-- If you want to see the trailer directly on YouTube: bit (.) ly / NIPW5I (remove spaces and (.))

Audio equipment:
Røde K-2 hooked up through an M-Audio Fast Track Pro, up to Cubase 5.1 (Steinberg, Licensed).
Recording: Hypercam (Not too great quality of the actual recording, I'm aware of that)
Editing: Vegas Pro 11 (Licensed)


Any feedback? Was it good? Did it explain what you want to know about the game? Should I change anything for future trailers? Was it too vague?
Please post comments! =)
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BlabVoid is not online. BlabVoid
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01 Sep 2012 04:25 PM
#swag
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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01 Sep 2012 10:06 PM
Thanks :}

anyone else? :) Constructive critism?
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iLimitedU is not online. iLimitedU
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02 Sep 2012 05:22 AM
Go on xwater :)

And I really like it
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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03 Sep 2012 07:56 AM
Thanks, mate!

Anyone else have any feedback on the trailer?
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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03 Sep 2012 12:32 PM
Bump! =]
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SpeedySeat is online. SpeedySeat
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03 Sep 2012 12:35 PM
if you had morgan freeman voice



i would give it a 1000/10

~MOOOOlah 3:8~ holy ponure!!1
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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03 Sep 2012 01:34 PM
And with my own voice, I get.. 2/10? :C I even made the chorus in the background!
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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03 Sep 2012 03:29 PM
Bumpedy bump! :D I want feedback!
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duncanwinstda is not online. duncanwinstda
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03 Sep 2012 04:47 PM
i think you did a great job with the special effects and editing! keep up the good work! 9/10
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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03 Sep 2012 04:59 PM
Thank you, duncan! :) what could I do / change / remove to imorove it even more?
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Sixer4134715 is not online. Sixer4134715
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03 Sep 2012 07:30 PM
that was keel i could play that
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crazyhotrockr911 is not online. crazyhotrockr911
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03 Sep 2012 09:22 PM
I liked it. I hope the game turns up as good.
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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04 Sep 2012 12:38 AM
Thank you, guys! :)
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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04 Sep 2012 01:20 PM
Bumpety bump! :)
Any more feedback? I want to improve my future trailers.
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ClockMaster0 is not online. ClockMaster0
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04 Sep 2012 02:08 PM
Wow, awesome...I personally can't make my own music lol. Love it!

~[I'm Clock #weirdo]~
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loco4coco12 is not online. loco4coco12
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04 Sep 2012 06:59 PM
I liked how it was like a movie, nice job I give it a 75/100!
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Jtmt88 is not online. Jtmt88
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04 Sep 2012 07:26 PM
You can improve on your visuals.

7/10
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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05 Sep 2012 12:30 AM
More specifically, Jtmt? EVERY visual, or a certain part?
And thanks for the feedback, guys.
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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05 Sep 2012 10:47 AM
Bump? : )
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Jtmt88 is not online. Jtmt88
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05 Sep 2012 11:34 AM
Specifically, the wording.
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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05 Sep 2012 11:43 AM
I get you. I'll keep in mind and try to improve that.
The "Collect .. to unlock .. " stuff is what you mean, I assume? That's the thing I regret doing the most in the video as well, so.. :I
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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05 Sep 2012 02:41 PM
Bump! :)
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Ravenshield is not online. Ravenshield
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06 Sep 2012 09:55 AM
Bump :c :)
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cupcakecutie419 is not online. cupcakecutie419
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06 Sep 2012 07:58 PM
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