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| 31 Aug 2012 09:20 AM |
It's 3010 and it's the middle of summer. All around, slaves push heavy objects, or pull large carts filled with fruit after their masters. Sweat drips down your face as you follow your own master.
Sand blows into your eyes and it stings. Badly. You beg for a break only to recieve a punishment. More tears sting your eyes and you hastily get back to work.
Setting: You are in Ciaro, Egypt. The rich still have their slaves. It feels like it's now 3010, but instead the 1600's. You hope to escape this life... but where? You cannot read, write. Everyone's hopes by now have vanished long ago. Except a few. Some dare to take the challenge of freeing themselves of their masters, to escape to a wonderful place with no sand. Only trees, nice tall trees with shade. And a lifetime supply of wonderous water...
Rules: 1. No godmodding. 2. No trolling. 3. Ignore the trolls. 4. Saying, "It's not in the rules!" doesn't matter. 5. Only up to two or three characters. 6. Put "Shattered" in 'other'. 7. You CAN be ROYAL/RICH, but you have to be one of the FIRST THREE people to join. My friends can automatically be royal if they choose.
CS Sheet: NAME(first and last): A.GE(required): GENDER: PERSONALITY(three descriptive words or a phrase): LIFE STORY(required): OTHER:
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| 31 Aug 2012 09:22 AM |
| Sorry my typos. The Setting starts at the first paragraph. And in the second paragraph, second sentence is suppose to start out 'It doesn't feel'. My apologies. |
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bobpi
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| 31 Aug 2012 10:00 AM |
CS Sheet: NAME(first and last): Jackson Marquist A.GE(required): GENDER: 18 PERSONALITY(three descriptive words or a phrase): a scientific optomistic modest young man. LIFE STORY(required): He was the son of a rich lord, but after the revolution he fled to Cario with nothing but the clothes on his back and a small backpack filled with gold and food. He was bored in his small palace, and decided he wanted some adventure in his life. He wondered what he would do with his slaves. Now it is the present day. OTHER: N/A |
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| 31 Aug 2012 04:43 PM |
Accepted. Forgot my CS.
NAME(first and last): Sky Muldoon A.GE(required): 14 GENDER: F PERSONALITY(three descriptive words or a phrase): Stubborn, crabby, (..sometimes..) nice. LIFE STORY(required): Simple. Father and mother were slaves, but died from their harsh master. I was sold to another rich person to suffer just the same. OTHER: Blind in right eye.
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bobpi
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| 31 Aug 2012 05:05 PM |
| My ag.e is 18 and gen der is male, i messed up. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 05:25 PM |
CS Sheet: NAME(first and last): Eloise Mubarak A.GE(required): 17 GENDER: Female PERSONALITY(three descriptive words or a phrase): Violent, good/bad sense of humor (can laugh when you get hurt), and nice. LIFE STORY(required): She was separated from her parents at a young age, forced to work for other master's. OTHER: She has long black hair pulled into a braid down her back and reaches to the ground with side-swept bangs. She has the Egyptian tan skin, maybe a little lighter with heavily-lashed one electric blue eye and the other red. She has an hour-glass form and underweight from her treatment as a slave. Shattered
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| 31 Aug 2012 05:30 PM |
It's alright. Oh and, I made another mistake.
Add APPEARANCE to your character. Oops.
Appearance: Dark brown hair that goes to shoulders. Blue/gray eyes. Fair skin complexion. Average weight and height. Wears the usual slave clothes; rags that have been sewn together. |
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bobpi
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| 02 Sep 2012 09:54 PM |
| appearence: Short dark brown hair and handsome brown eyes, matched with a tusting smile and light tanned skin. Wears a charming suit with navy blue pants. |
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ksu801
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| 03 Sep 2012 01:51 AM |
CS Sheet: NAME(first and last): William Gradstine A.GE(required):17.5 GENDER:Male PERSONALITY(three descriptive words or a phrase):Hates slaves, and makes their lives terrible. He abhors them. LIFE STORY(required): William was born into a snobbish family, and his family grew in power since he was born, and now have peaked at the top of their power. OTHER:Shattered (If not still able to be royal, change Story and Personality to: P:Submissive and meek, he rarely entertains thoughts of escape LS:He was captured when he was fairly young, and has been a slave ever since.) |
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:14 AM |
| Accepted, all of you. Ksu, not sure if you saw but I forgot to add APPEARANCE in your CS sheet. Thank you. |
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ksu801
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| 03 Sep 2012 10:31 AM |
| Curse my lack of paying attention. Appearance: Long, shaggy brown hair, pale blue eyes, usually just throws on whatever clothes he saw first. |
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| 04 Sep 2012 09:24 AM |
| Let me see if I can get me friends to join, if I can't then start... |
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| 04 Sep 2012 09:04 PM |
| (Let's just start. Seeing as I could get no one to join.) |
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bobpi
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| 05 Sep 2012 06:33 PM |
(Sky is my slave)
Jackson
I sat bored on my balcony, staring out into cario, Then looking back at my book. I was reading a book about greece, and stumbled onto this interesting word called democracy. It apparently means all people are at the same level and there is no king. With that thought still in my head, I stood up, poked me head inside, and said, "Sky, bring me some tea." I then thought how sky was suffering. Hmmm, i thought. |
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| 05 Sep 2012 08:29 PM |
Sky
I nodded quickly. Then I rushed towards the kitchens and brewed fresh tea. It was ready soon and I put it on a tray, along with a cup on a small saucer. I go back to the balcony and hold up the tray, on my knees. Keeping my head down, I don't make eye contact or speak unless spoken to. |
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bobpi
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| 05 Sep 2012 08:48 PM |
Jackson
I took a sip of the ice cold tea. "You may go to your quarters." I said sharply, and then returned to my book. |
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| 05 Sep 2012 08:52 PM |
Sky
I set the tray down then get up. I hurry off to my quarters. Sitting on the blanket, my "bed", on the floor I pull my knees to my chest. |
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bobpi
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| 05 Sep 2012 09:33 PM |
Jackson
I closed my book and reached for my poetry book. It was a compiliation of all of my favorite poet's work. I flipped to a random page and read the poem.
Money
Money is the thing that seperates us, Segrates us, Unites us, Corrupts us. It is only worth what we belive it is worth. Masters have lots of it, Slaves don't Why must it seperate us?
I closed the book and looked out into cario. I walked down into the servants quarters, and asked to sky, "If you could go anywhere besides here, where would you go?" |
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| 05 Sep 2012 09:57 PM |
[want join. .3.]
NAME: Melody Waks [Last name pronounced WAKES] A.GE: 19 GENDER: Female PERSONALITY: Melody is hot-headed, paranoid about EVERYTHING, and shy. APPEARENCE: Melody has medium length dirty blond hair. Her skin is tanned, and covered in freckled. Melody is taller than she should be for her a.ge, and a wee bit skinnier as well. Melody has amber eyes, mixed with an oak-brown color. LIFE STORY: Melody was born to a not-so-rich family, but they made do. Melody was an only child, though her mother tried several times for a second child. Every time Melody's mother had a miscarrige. Melody's mother got over it after a while, but she still wanted that second baby. Melody left a while after her mother's last attempt at a second child, which was when Melody was 17. Melody has been a slave since she was captured, and whatnot. OTHER: Shattered.
NAME: Chasilein Waks [Last name pronounced WAKES. First name pronounced CHESELIN] A.GE: 39 GENDER: Female PERSONALITY: Chasilein is kind, friendly, and frantic about everything she does. APPREARENCE: Chasilein has long dirty-blond hair that reaches her mid-back. She has sunburnt skin, and many freckles. She has green eyes, that have dulled. She is a little shorter than she is supposed to be, and a little 'chubbier' as well. LIFE STORY: Chasilein is Melody's mother. She has been frantic since Melody left, which forced Chasilein and Scott's divorce. The two weren't happy without their bright daughter around. Chasilein has tried ten times to get a second child, none of the times has it worked out. Chasilein was captured at 39, and has only been a slave for several months, unlike her daughter who has been a slave for two years. OTHER: Shattered.
NAME: Scott Waks [Last name pronounced WAKES] A.GE: 41 GENDER: Male PERSONALITY: Scott is hot-headed, he tends to put his imput in everything, and he likes alone-time. APPEARENCE: Scott has short blond hair, usually ruffled on account of hair abuse. He has tanned skin, and few freckles. He is of average height and weight for his a.ge. He also has gray eyes. LIFE STORY: Scott married his ex-wife Chasilein when he was 18. The two were very happy together until their daughter Melody left the household. Since then, Chasilein and Scott's relationship went downhill, until they got divorced. Now, a slave, Scott is mostly silent, and grumbles at the sight of Melody or Chasilein. He's been a slave for several months, like his ex-wife. OTHER: Shattered. |
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| 06 Sep 2012 07:28 PM |
(Accepted. Key, since I know you well, you are admin.) Sky
I look at him, surprised he'd asked me a direct question. "I..." My voice fails me. "Paris." I sya, standing shakily. I stepped back, afraid he'd hurt me for giving my opinion. |
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bobpi
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| 06 Sep 2012 07:32 PM |
Jackson
Feeling nice, i said, "Pack up your stuff. Were going to paris!" |
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| 06 Sep 2012 07:39 PM |
Sky
My eyes widen. But, that was an order. I pack up my one extra pair of clothes. |
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bobpi
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| 06 Sep 2012 07:46 PM |
Jackson
"Ok. Lets go to Paris!!!"
TRAVELING MONTAGE!!!
Paris . / / .___/ Cario
TRAVELING MONATAGE!!!
Jackson
"Were here sky. Like it?" I said gently. |
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