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| 31 Aug 2012 03:13 PM |
Explosions rang out across the field. Roblox Assault Team troops were being mowed down by heavy Vaktovian machine gun fire. All had seemed lost until ColourTheory made a drastic move. He sent in one of his finest soldiers into battle. KennyKenuchiha (Kenny) arrived on the battle field just in time.
"Men, if we lose here, we lose not only a battle, but more importantly, the war. We must continue on."
Against all odds Kenny led the RAT troopers against the heavy Vaktovian Resistance. Holding out long enough for more RAT top pull in.
Kenny, standing upon a hill of dead Vaktovians simply smiled, with his head held high. CT, walked up to him smiling as well.
"Good job Kenny, I need you to now take these troops and push back the Vaktovians right to there mothership."
"Aye, aye sir" Kenny replied.
With 400 troops behind his back Kenny rushed into the jungle, looking for the Vaktovian mothership. Again, heavy machine gun fire could be heard and a series of hand to hand combat attacks occurred. Kenny sliced down 2 Vaktovians with ease.
"Let us stop the bloodshed. If you defeat me, you win, we leave."
A dark figure merged from behind a tree.
"Greetings Dologan...."
Their swords clashed. Kenny striking, Dologan blocking. Dologan striking, Kenny blocking. The fight went on for hours. Eventually Kenny found a opening, slicing Dologans leg.
"ARGHHH" Dologan scream, falling to his knees.
"Goodnight, Vaktovian scum."
Kenny thrust his blade through Dologans chest. The battle, and possibly the war had been won. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:16 PM |
i'm kenny right?
if not your executed.
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:16 PM |
It's a nice story, but I'm not a fan....
Why?
The premise is overused, and an obvious cliche.
"OMG WE R LOSIN DA FIGHT"
"SEND IN SUPER SOLDIA GUY"
*SUPER SOLDIA GUY CLEARS OUT EVERY1 WITH DUAL MAGNUMS AND GRENADES*
*WAR IS WON*
*EVERY1 CHEERS |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:17 PM |
USAF, I need donations, the guy wanted me to write a story about him.
I said yes, I quickly came up with this. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:18 PM |
lol u wrote a story 4 monny xd
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:19 PM |
| Ya... I need money. I have 12 hours of BC left, and I really want this 350+ group from a friend. All he will except is money, so all I can do is ask for donations. |
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Imitater
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:21 PM |
God, I need to get into the business of "storywriting"...
I could do that, considering that I have around 15 pages of backstory for NGA. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:21 PM |
| Im not the best, but I enjoy it, even if mostly everyone in C&G says im horrible. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:23 PM |
Your not horrible, Your brilliant.
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:24 PM |
LOL
this story is sooo funny |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:25 PM |
@xen,
like ur hat
ha ha ha ha i funny rite.
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:28 PM |
Realizing that Catman and his elite fr00t pwners had arrived, both VAK and RAT armies were destroyed. ded.
the end |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:29 PM |
Now, the guy isnt donating.....
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=77103125
Donations please?! You can get a free fort, ad, or story. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 03:34 PM |
| This story is the reason why Dologan quit. |
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