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| 26 Aug 2012 10:59 AM |
Project Name: King Type of Project: Movie Director: JakeAlstar Produced by: JA Productions
King Is the first project of the JA Productions group. In this movie, we want to create a underworld mafia for roblox. The audience is introduced to the Robloxia's top gang lords, and their fights. During a gang fight, a child, Mike Rexuz, looses his mother to a bullet. In anger, he takes up the fight and soon joins the crime world. Soon, he becomes the biggest crime boss of robloxia, and his name is changed to King. King becomes the true gang lord of the Robloxian underworld. Until, he is betrayed by his own long lost brother, and was killed. But, as a true king, King took everything that was his, down with him...
The movie will take place primarily in the city of "Llumina", and its gang world (CONTACT JAKEALSTAR IF YOU KNOW HOW TO CREATE A HIGH DETAILED CITY!!!)
Major Roles: (List subjected to increase) -Mike Rexuz (King) -Andrew Rexuz (King's long lost brother) -Snake (Rival Gang Lord) -Marcy (King's mother) -Nikki (Girl King falls in love with)
Minor Roles: (List subjected to increase) -Thugs -Pedestrians -Cops
Crew: (list subjected to increase) -Clothing designer -Camera man -Voice over -Special effects specialist -Set designer -Weapons designer -Minor producers (must be bc) (spends money on the movie, and receives 150% back after the movie is released)
***WE ARE NOW HOLDING AUDITIONS*** TO AUDITION, JOIN: "JA PRODUCTIONS" GROUP AND SEND JAKEALSTAR A PM!
TO SIGN UP FOR ANY CREW JOBS, PLEASE JOIN THE GROUP, AND PM JAKEALSTAR FOR INFORMATION!!!
***Disclaimer: King is NOT an actual King, he is just given the name***
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m9bob
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| 26 Aug 2012 03:33 PM |
| Loooolz Nobody Cares.. Loooolz Lololol |
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| 26 Aug 2012 04:01 PM |
This isn't original. The plot actually reminds me of batman. |
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Dayren
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| 26 Aug 2012 04:17 PM |
| Without remarking anything about your approach to video making: could someone explain to me what in the fiery depths of banland is a "Minor producer"??? How possibly "spends money on the movie, and receives 150% back after the movie is released"?? You really poked my curiosity with that one. |
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| 26 Aug 2012 04:23 PM |
@Dayren Lol'd.
But I guess he does have a point. Why would you spend money on it? Other than advertising, but that doesn't really cost that much money, I mean you are BC yourself... |
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| 26 Aug 2012 08:37 PM |
| Sorry, but by force, you neeed to close this project. It's for your own good. It breaks a rule. It involves a gang. Besides, it's kinda dark for a Roblox movie. Besides, it's just a rehash of any Roblox Batman movie. ._. |
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| 28 Aug 2012 08:55 PM |
| first, this was original, i was later informed that batman had a similar plot, but i don't care, second, if your not going to say something good, then shut your mouth and go do something useful with your life. Third, a minor producer, buys a special t-shirt i'll make, and then using that money, i buy sets, which i hire other people to make. then, after the movie is released, i give them 150% back, if it's confusing to u, then you're a sad person.... |
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m9bob
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Dayren
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| 29 Aug 2012 04:15 AM |
@JakeAlstar: I was just asking, no need for hostilities and sad-personing. I have to agree, I struggled a bit with descriptive geometry, but I do have some average knowledge of base 10 math. As such, I was only curious about the 50% interest, which you are going to give away. Because as far as my knowledge goes, Roblox videos are at most uploaded to YouTube, free of any charge. Therefore, getting people to invest into a project, which yields no possible revenue, promising 50% back, is either a scam, or sheer stupidity, as long as you do not intend to impose a charge for watching the video, somehow (which, on the side note, would likely not work quite well). Because of that, it would make much more sense to pay for the sets yourself (on the side note, paying for sets is also not so usual), as if you did, you would not need any "minor producers" and would save one third of the total expenses, if minor producers were to be employed.
In short, two possibilities: - If you are going to release the video free of charge, re-think your "marketing strategy". This is no math, but basic logical thinking. - If you are going to release the video with a fee, it very likely won't work, or atleast not well, especially if this is your first video creation. This is no math, but basic logical thinking.
And also a free tip, about your second point: That is ignorant statement. For one thing, that would supress the right to express own opinion. Second, it is necessary. MoneyBoxMonkey had some decent points and actually wanted to help you, that is called constructive criticism - get acquainted with that.
I apologize for the lenght of the post, but this polite gentleman was deliberately asking for this size.
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| 29 Aug 2012 10:27 AM |
"first, this was original, i was later informed that batman had a similar plot, but i don't care, second, if your not going to say something good, then shut your mouth and go do something useful with your life. Third, a minor producer, buys a special t-shirt i'll make, and then using that money, i buy sets, which i hire other people to make. then, after the movie is released, i give them 150% back, if it's confusing to u, then you're a sad person...."
you are an idiot people criticizing your idea is is necessary without it, you would never learn how unoriginal this plot is |
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| 29 Aug 2012 10:47 AM |
| Besides, I'm helping you avoid a 1 day ban. Take the gang part out, it is against the rules. Read the rules. |
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| 29 Aug 2012 02:00 PM |
"i was later informed that batman had a similar plot,"
who doesn't know the story of batman |
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Mr44
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| 29 Aug 2012 02:16 PM |
| A millionaire and his youthful ward dress up in odd costumes to fight the crime of Gotham City, which includes such scum like Calendar Man, Crazy Quilt, Iron Hat Ferris, and my favourite, The Rainbow Creature. |
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| 29 Aug 2012 02:18 PM |
@Mr
my favorite is scarecrow even though he isn't very powerful |
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| 29 Aug 2012 09:31 PM |
ok, sorry i wasn't having a good day, and, thank you for your calmness, but the way i will make money out of this movie is that, all the sets for the movie will be on my player, so basically, every time to movie's crew will enter the sets, i will be receiving 2 tix per person, and so in the end, i'll receive a amount that will be enough. Also, it's not like the minor producers will pay 200 robux or sumthin. I just need about 30 tix from each person, so in the end, all I loose is 15 tix for each person, give or take some. plus, at the time i posted the storyline and idea, i wasn't really sure about what i would need in this movie, and please cut me a break, it's my first time doing something like this.... Also, I do realize that this seems similar to batman, but trust me, this movie will be very much different from batman. To those who are giving me constructive criticism, thank you very much. And to those who are just looking for an excuse to insult me and my idea, please, be quiet and only talk if you have something good to say,
Thank u, JA |
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| 29 Aug 2012 09:32 PM |
| also, this movie doesn't truly feature a "hero" liek batman, or a sidekick... jus a master villan, who's not liek joker at all, he's more of a serious role |
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xear50
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| 30 Aug 2012 06:28 PM |
| MonkeyBoxMonkey, It is a violation the rules but it's going to be uploaded on YouTube... Idiot... |
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| 30 Aug 2012 06:32 PM |
"MonkeyBoxMonkey, It is a violation the rules but it's going to be uploaded on YouTube... Idiot..."
The post is against the rules for talking about gangs, idiot. |
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xear50
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| 30 Aug 2012 06:34 PM |
I would like to recall my past comment. It will be uploaded on YouTube on a account with a Partnership so whoever owns the account will get 1 cent each time someone views it.
MonkeyBoxMonkey, I would like to apologize for calling you a idiot, but It's not like we are going to upload it to Roblox, and we aren't making a official gang, it's just for the movie. |
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xear50
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| 30 Aug 2012 06:35 PM |
| Also, why are you guys trying to insult JakeAlastar for this movie... It may be Batman but still, do not insult him. |
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| 30 Aug 2012 06:41 PM |
"I would like to recall my past comment. It will be uploaded on YouTube on a account with a Partnership so whoever owns the account will get 1 cent each time someone views it.
MonkeyBoxMonkey, I would like to apologize for calling you a idiot, but It's not like we are going to upload it to Roblox, and we aren't making a official gang, it's just for the movie."
Let me make this clear for you:
TALKING ABOUT GANGS ON ROBLOX IS AGAINST THE RULES. THE FIRST POST TALKS ABOUT GANGS.
"Also, why are you guys trying to insult JakeAlastar for this movie... It may be Batman but still, do not insult him."
" An original JA Productions movie" |
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| 30 Aug 2012 08:25 PM |
| cap, for yur info, i have already talked to forum moderators and they haven't said anything to me, so i guess you can please buzz off :) |
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| 30 Aug 2012 09:23 PM |
"cap, for yur info, i have already talked to forum moderators and they haven't said anything to me, so i guess you can please buzz off :)"
Lol no, I'm not going to go away just because you talked to 1 moderator about this unoriginal and bad film thread. |
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| 31 Aug 2012 02:40 PM |
| capcom, fine, you're entitled to your opinion, and i'm not going to say anything to you, cuse i respect u, i've seen your work on mike hike, and i hope that you can put away your bitterness and be a mentor or guide for me, but it's your choice |
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