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| 27 Aug 2012 12:00 PM |
TDFall: Pain,Cake,Theeve git oer here please.
Cake,pain,theev: Yes sir.
TDFall: Were going on an adventure.
Cake: Were to TD.
TDFall: Somewhere you'll find out when we git there.
-A few day's later-
pain: Um TD are we going in the cave.
TD: yep
Theev: Lets take out are swords just in case.
-The four then start walking into the cave with there swords-
TD: Let's find that exit on the other side of this cave.
Cake: It's getting darker every step,Theev hand us are flashlights please.
Theev: Ok here.
-the four get there flashlights and turn them on-
TD: Lets rest over here guys.
-So the 4 settle down in there sleeping bag's against the cave wall-
pain: You guys hear that.
-Pain wakes up the others-
Cake,TD,theev: What is it pain?
Pain: Just listen for a minute.
-BOOOOM!-
TD,theev,cake: Oh my gosh.
Pain: IT's coming form the back of the cave.
TD: Guy's pains right it is coming form the back of the cave.
Cake: Let's get up and go check it out.
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Vaulcon
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| 27 Aug 2012 12:06 PM |
| put me in it and i will love it |
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| 27 Aug 2012 12:10 PM |
Vual I will next chapter ok.
~Cobalt Nation Major,Join today.~ |
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zman250
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| 27 Aug 2012 12:12 PM |
CakeTheory's gross. ^Completely ignoring the entire text of thread. |
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| 27 Aug 2012 01:47 PM |
| UM, OK. Try using proper grammar in the future. Other than that, it's good. |
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RJfly
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| 27 Aug 2012 01:48 PM |
Minister of Defense isn't here, Killer6199.
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2unknown2
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