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| 14 Aug 2012 09:56 AM |
Ask me to pm it to you (it says it breaks roblox rules but i didnt put swearing or anything in it)
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| 14 Aug 2012 10:01 AM |
| i know! pm me it and i can copy it here for us all to read! |
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| 14 Aug 2012 10:08 AM |
NOOOOOO! i copied and paste it but now its gone :(
but i'll tell the story again
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| 14 Aug 2012 10:37 AM |
Jack was sleeping on night in his room, he was running with his friends when all of a sudden the clouds went black, his friends started crying blood, thunder struck a tree, fire spread everywhere and down to a shack, a man made of black fog stood by the tree, he had scars all across his face, the man ran faster than a cheetha down the rocks, Jack started running but tripped onto a rock, the man stood over him and he heard a chant that went like: Tick Tock....creeping thoughts....you wont survive"
Then the man took out a long black claw and stabbed Jack.
Jack woke up, he was sweating and shivering all over, he took out his laptop and opened a chat:
Jack: anyone there?"
Crepe joined the chat
Jack: hi"
Crepe: hello, did u have a nightmare?"
Jack: How did u know?"
Crepe: i guessed because people go on chats at night when they've had nightmares"
Jack: oh, lucky guess"
Crepe: so what was it about?"
Jack: this man chased me on this beach and i heard a chant saying tick tock creeping thoughts u wont survive"
Crepe: i will tell u the story of creepingthoughts, he was a 20 year old man, he could read peoples minds but people said he could "enter" minds.
His brother got jealous so he waited till the man was a sleep, then the brother stabbed the man and let him bleed for an hour before throwing his body out of the window and onto the street.
That night the brother was having a shower, he was humming in the shower. He thought he heard something fall on the ground and a rasping noise.
The brother put shampoo in his hair and screamed, he looked in the mirror and saw it wasn't shampoo, it was blood. He dried off and got changed really quick and dialled 999.
The police came, the brother stayed out of the house, the brother waited for 10 minutes, then another 10 minutes, then half an hour. The brother walked into the house and into the sitting room, blood was tracked into through the kitchen and upstairs, it led to the brother's bedroom, the curtains had been slashed by claws and their was a pile of policeman bodies. The next morning thousands of people arrived, they were looking for the brother, a girl screamed and pointed upwards, they saw the brother all right, he was hung from the chimney"
Jack: that is scary, how do you know?"
Crepe: how do i know? its a worldwide story, now lets go on cam"
Crepe goes on cam
Jack goes on cam
Jack: why do u have scars?"
Crepe: uh...i got attacked by a rotweiler"
Jack: who's that person on the bed on a laptop?"
Crepe: oh thats.....you"
Connection Lost"
Jack screamed and X'ed out of the internet, no-one was in the room.
"That person was probally just a person trying to scare people" laughed Jack.
All of a sudden heard two screams, he ran into his parents room and saw them hanging from the chandiler, all of a sudden someone grabbed him and he was thrown into a dark room, he looked up, there was a man with scars all over his face, he had long black claws and he was made of black fog.
"Hello Jack, im CrEePiNgThOuGhTs, thanks for joining my army" said the man in a raspy voice.
ORGIN: CrEePiNgThOuGhTs is a ghost, he has long claws for slicing people and can fly, he can also make u have nightmares to track you down, he and hi s army live in Alcatraz, where the undead and some monsters live"
I hope this becomes a creepypasta |
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| 14 Aug 2012 10:52 AM |
no offense but that made my eyes bleed |
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| 14 Aug 2012 11:38 AM |
| how did it make your eyes bleed? |
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| 15 Aug 2012 02:25 PM |
| creepypastas ARE all made up so it is obviously made up, but TOCK is real so it isnt a creepypasta |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:25 PM |
| .......AND THIS IS WHY THE ONLY GOOD CREEPYPASTA IS BEN. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:26 PM |
| that was good but lots of creepypastas are good |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:27 PM |
"he was humming in the shower"
lol girly girl
a winner is you |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:28 PM |
Man hums in shower
Creep comes into bathroom
Creep: 0_o"
Brother: 0_e"
Creep: -_- really? why where u singing my little pony?"
Brother: ITS THE BIG MARATHON >:0" |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:29 PM |
It was good, but if they were in the same room, why didn't Jack hear the man typing? ._.
And if they went on cam and were talking to each other, why didn't Jack hear the man's voice?
Why would Jack even go on cam with the guy? |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:35 PM |
That was terrible, it wasnt scary, had no plot, and lacked grammar.
It made me cry blood. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:39 PM |
| Idiot, doesnt even know what creepy is |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:41 PM |
@wand he couldnt hear him type because he was a ghost he went on cam because it was a kids chat jack couldnt see the person in the room because he was invisible (ghosts can turn from invisible to soild) |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:43 PM |
"We're you singing the mlp theme song?"
Was that really needed? |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:44 PM |
pengo, he is alversion people's navy, he is with fireblast! he is not normal (lol just wanted to add that) NEVER TRUST AN ALVERSION |
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:46 PM |
@ninja for the lulz
@scary XD |
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