sketch14
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| 21 Aug 2012 01:08 PM |
2300 A.D: A new government was elected in 2250 A.D, they turned the area of Nation totally upside down. People were taken from their homes, then their homes destroyed. Anybody who disobeyed to go, were instantly shot and killed. Those who did go, were enslaved and tortured. This was called the Slavery Mission. After 50 years, there were rumours of a rebellion in the east. These rebels had somehow escaped and formed a group to outsmart the Government. (Read the occupations for more imforation)
OCCUPATIONS:
Controllers: Guards of the slavery mission. Responsible for taking away rule breaking and slacking slaves. There are different branches of controllers including ones that organize the enforcements, control the seurity etc.
Rebels: Leaders of the rebellion, these have secretly, somehow escaped the slavery mission and have the offer of freedom to live their lives. They choose not to and uprise to get past the controllers and finally, try and kill the government. Many rebels have tried and failed, they have been tortured for answers. This caused the uprising plans to leak out to the government, now there is more security enforcements to get past.
Government: Responsible for changing the world of Nation, turning it into the heart of the slavery it is these days. The government is hated by all, some even say the controllers only do their job so they are not swallowed into the world of slavery. The government are a cruel, coldhearted group of people.
Slaves: Ordinary people, taken away from their lives to slave away for the governments benefit. Once they're taken away, they are as good as helpless. Escaping is near impossible. __________________________________________________________________________
CS: NAME: A.GE: APPEARANCE: PERSONALITY: OCCUPATION: BIO: OTHER
RULES: Mild romance, guys you know where to draw the line with this one, Normal Roblox rules, What I say goes and that's final, No saying, "But It wasn't in the rules!" Because I dont care.
Sorry for the long post but these things have to be explained. If I missed anything, just say. No bad comments please unless it's structured critiscm :D
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| 21 Aug 2012 01:22 PM |
CS:
NAME: Vladimir Zhukov
A.GE: 25
APPEARANCE: Wears military officer uniform
PERSONALITY: Cold, ruthless
OCCUPATION: Government
BIO: Barely anything is known about him, other than that he works for the government.
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RagEgnite
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| 21 Aug 2012 01:23 PM |
| Sounds pretty good to me,but I'm just a little curious: What's the point of slavery in this? :S |
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sketch14
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| 21 Aug 2012 01:33 PM |
I forgot to mention the aspect of that, there are many different jobs. The jobs are stereotyped as the government doesnt care.
Men (Over 18's and those that are physically capable):
Diamond mining.
Boys (Under 18's):
Building walls for houses etc.
Girls (Under 18's):
Making duvets and sheets from textile's.
Women (Over 18's):
Making clothes and cooking.
Hope this is a help to you. |
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sketch14
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| 21 Aug 2012 01:34 PM |
| Lord0fnoobs sorry not accepted, try and add more detail. |
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| 21 Aug 2012 01:51 PM |
| is there just 1 nation or is there many nations your just focusing on this one?Because it could be cool in the middle of rebels v government another coutry attacks supporting 1 side. |
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sketch14
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| 21 Aug 2012 02:10 PM |
| (I thought about that, but then I realised it would be too closely related to The Hunger Games..) |
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sketch14
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| 21 Aug 2012 03:54 PM |
| No if there is just 1 nation it is like the third book not the entire series |
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| 21 Aug 2012 03:55 PM |
| but im in ill get a cs up soon as I just finished doing a really long one while playing video games |
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gamer326
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| 21 Aug 2012 03:56 PM |
@sketch
(actually not really, there was only one country in the hunger games but w/e) |
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| 21 Aug 2012 04:06 PM |
CS: NAME:Greg "Hot Shot" Harrison A.GE:23 APPEARANCE:black beret black combat vest black boots black cargo pants and a black shirt rolled up to elbows. Caucasian brown hair buzz cut 6'7. Green eyes small scar on chin going from top left to bottom right on chin. PERSONALITY:has a strong ego but its reasonable as he is one of the best the rebels have. He is optimistic and tries to make a joke out of almost anything now because if he doesn't he remembers what the controllers did the cruelty, the barbarism, and the treating of others as senseless game animals meant to be slaughtered for enjoyment. OCCUPATION:Rebel BIO:Was a great athlete as his first career. He wanted action so he went on to become a soldier. While serving for his country the government changed and he returned home to be forced to join the controllers. Being in the controllers for 10 years was worse then his 5 years of active duty. He never was cruel so his superiors always never liked him. He decided it was enough and he defected. He got a packet of documents regarding projects by the controllers and ran off. He joined the rebels and lives in hiding as if he is discovered he knows he wont become a slave but tortured then killed. Since he joined the rebels he has lead many guerrilla runs on the controllers freeing some slaves. He quickly got his own platoon for special missions assigned by high ranking rebels. OTHER Is this your first thread?
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sketch14
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| 22 Aug 2012 05:05 AM |
(No, It's not my first thread. I have many others that died when I quit. My only other active one is The Hunger Games RP that's been reposted after I quit)
CS: NAME: Skye Flint. A.GE: 18 APPEARANCE: Light blue eyes which are mainly assumed as her best feature, above her left eye she has a scarred gash which she gained when she lashed out at a Controller. She has golden, blond hair which is tied in a ponytail. She often has a small quiff pushed up by her silver hairband.White and navy blue pinstripe tank top and denim mini shorts. Wears the dark grey rebel shirt over it and the rebel token necklace. Worn, tanned skin. Also wears, silent white material shoes. Also a black beret bearing the rebel token. PERSONALITY: Brave, trustworthy and kind-hearted. Would immediately jump infront of a bullet heading to a friend. OCCUPATION: Rebel. BIO: Skye was born into slavery, as my mother and brother were once rebels she has a decent role to play in the uprising. She is the only one left in her family. Her family used to be fishermen. OTHER: ~ |
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sildee
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| 22 Aug 2012 05:23 AM |
CS: NAME:Jack Dilibrun
A.GE:25
APPEARANCE: Wears long, dark-brown boots, with ragged pants of the same color. His shirt is plain white. He wears a dark-brown jacket over his shirt, most of the time. His hair is brown and messy. His skin color is very pale. His eye color is green, with a yellow tint. Has a scar on both of his hands, and they look exactly the same, circle-formed and small. He has no signs of being a rebel, altough he recognizes the rebel token. 5'5, you can't tell his weight.
PERSONALITY: Serious, most likely doesn't tell any personal information, besides for his name. He HATES jokes, and he likes to torture people that deserve it. Once you get to know him, he's kind and forgiving. Is prepared to fight for the end for someone else.
OCCUPATION:Rebel
BIO:A son of rebels. He spent most of his childhood in the forest.(I assume there is a forest..) Not much happened in his life, he wasn't told about what the government was doing, and he didn't notice it, until he lost his parents. He assumes they're dead, but he doesn't know. He's roaming around the forest, mostly. (A part of the bio is still to be revealed, if that's okay.) OTHER: N/A |
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Arstemis
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| 22 Aug 2012 06:05 AM |
A place called Nation! Which nation, Turkmenistan, Azerbaijan, Pakistan, United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland?
Think realistically, though. They do that, 3 quaters of the population rebel and throw the government out. And other nations will help them do that. ANd anyway, answers for what?
Also, you can't just say Rebels, the leaders of the Rebellions. No, no and more no. A rebel can be classified as lots of different types, Jacobin, Heretic, Nationalist, Partisan, whatever. But a rebel is mostly NOT the leader, and just part of the rebellion. If they sabotage, however, and don't rise up, they are often classified as Partisans. |
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Arstemis
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| 22 Aug 2012 06:06 AM |
| They wouldn't just uprise after 50 years, think about constant rebellions. CONSTANT. Often winning and such! |
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sketch14
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| 22 Aug 2012 07:03 AM |
(Yes, a place called Nation. I don't really think you understand this thread. Try reading through it again. I also think you forgot this is set in the future)
(Accepted also) |
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Arstemis
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| 22 Aug 2012 07:13 AM |
I read it all and understand, however a country called Nation is stupid.
In the future, people would still rebel instantly and all my points are all valid. |
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sketch14
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| 22 Aug 2012 07:20 AM |
| You don't know that. Der in o you have a time machine sir? However this is MY RP and therefore I will plan this how I want, and name it what I want, thank you. |
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Arstemis
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| 22 Aug 2012 07:34 AM |
I know this.
They would, they have for hundreds of years and won't stop today or in 200 years. |
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| 23 Aug 2012 02:46 PM |
| (What type of weapons do we have. bullets, tesla, laser, or other?) |
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sketch14
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| 23 Aug 2012 03:04 PM |
(ok) Greg
I fiddle with my laser rifle. Man I was itching for a fight. I look around at 1 squad of men around me. They weren't my men but they heard rumors about me and they wanted pointers. |
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sketch14
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| 23 Aug 2012 03:07 PM |
| (Sorry, but I'm not starting yet until we get more joiners :L) |
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