INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 01:52 PM |
Hello, You're child/children have shown exceptional abilities. We wish to have them join our school. No two kids are alike here they all have their special talents. Please reply ASAP so we know if we should save him/her a room or not. Sincerely, Mr. Caleb --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Character sheet:
Name: Age: Gender: Personality: Dorm number and floor: Appearance: Items: Talent/Ability:
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bigmac40
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| 24 Aug 2012 01:54 PM |
| More plot and backround into this...just please then try again. Right now flame thrower. |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 01:59 PM |
| eh forum closed cuz of comment |
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:00 PM |
| Oh closed...damn so close to getting some advice in there. |
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bigmac40
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:02 PM |
| Creative you would say the same thing. |
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:03 PM |
| She closed it.....because of a single.....negative....comment. |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:04 PM |
| I was going to re-open it :/ its re-opened now i just had to wait |
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:04 PM |
| Re-opened? What...are we back in kindergarten, guys? |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:11 PM |
now, im redoing the plot: Dear parent(s) or guardian, You're child/children has been chosen to perticipate in our school, The Exceptional School of Fine Arts. This school was started by Mr. John Edwards. He started it so that kids who were above the others may perticipate in something that actually related to them. It is a great honor to be chosen. Only the most talented people have gone to this school. No one who came to this school has ever left with better grades. So your child/children may come or refuse. It's their choice. Sincerely, Ms. Clust, the principal ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Character sheet:
Name: Age: Gender: Personality: Appearance: Talent/Ability: Items: |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:16 PM |
| And I can't post my post and you can post THAT? Weird world... |
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:16 PM |
| She is trying though, I respect her, she is new and trying so she is good in my book. |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:21 PM |
Name: Allison Cole A.g.e: 9 Gender: Girl Personality: Is shy if you don't know her, is kind, understands others well Appearance: Is tall with long blonde hair that is curly and bright, determined green eyes Talent/Ability: Music Items: Violen, piano, recorder, trumpet, flute, clarinet, guitar, music sheets, and a stash of notebooks. |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:25 PM |
Schedual: 7:30AM Breakfest 8:30AM Basic learning classes 12:30PM Lunch 1:30PM ability classes 2:30PM Free time 6:30PM Supper 7:30PM More Free Time 10:30PM Lights out |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:27 PM |
| By the way, anyone who thinks I'm new because of title... Anyone could've posted this! If they're new peepz or not! How do you know I AM new without checking my profile? I am new but you can prove it by looking at the title. -_- |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:28 PM |
i meant... cant prove it by looking at the title. -_- |
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bigmac40
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| 24 Aug 2012 02:29 PM |
| It is a.....yeah you are new to roleplaying. |
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| 24 Aug 2012 04:53 PM |
| You have 15 posts. You're new to roleplaying. Please. I say this to almost everyone. Do not make a roleplay until you have PLENTY of experience. I'm talking about joining several roleplays before even attempting to write one. This is unoriginal, but if someone who was a great roleplayer made it, it could easily be good. |
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| 24 Aug 2012 05:07 PM |
| Lol, I said you are new because I can see your post count. |
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vamking12
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| 24 Aug 2012 05:08 PM |
| sad but your new so good job |
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Allyia
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| 24 Aug 2012 09:35 PM |
Come on guys, don't discourage her! She could be the most awesome writer ever and you just discouraged her! I agree, does need a little work and she does need more experiance. But we all did this once, right? Even if you didn't...just don't discourage her! (possibly my last post :P) -Ally |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 09:37 PM |
| Thanks Ally... I don't know you but...thanks. I try. :P |
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faultydex
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| 24 Aug 2012 09:39 PM |
The first time i started roleplaying i started making roleplays People joined. I guess i was good! |
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INL101
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| 24 Aug 2012 09:46 PM |
| I've never actually made a RP but still...I wanted to make 1... I'm better sticking to writing short stories in rl. no comments until i know its good :/ if every1s gonna be like that im -starting now- ignoring this thread. |
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| 24 Aug 2012 09:48 PM |
| You need to learn to take criticism if it's there. Also, join a roleplay. You can't expect to start out roleplaying BY making a roleplay. |
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