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Re: [-The Great War-] A RAT Story.

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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:26 PM
     Before reading this, please note that if you're only going to hate on RAT, don't reply. Constructive criticism is encouraged. Enjoy. (This is the intro, so it's not too long at all.)




[-The Great War-]
[-Chapter 1-]
[-The Fatal Trap-]

[-F.E.A.R. Fort Cryo; 0900 hours-]

    The room was dark and cold. Just how Supreme General Lejam liked it. He was working on his F.E.A.R. issued laptop on an assignment given to him by Commander Sonic. The files were nearly fully injected into the R.A.T. Sparrow Systems. “The beginning of the end for them is drawing near,” he thought to himself with a smile. The words ‘Upload Finished’ appeared on the screen and stayed there for the next 10 seconds. Everything was in order. Lejam sent a message informing the Commander that his mission was complete. A minute later, the Commander replied, “Tell all troops to report to the front gate to stand guard. They’ll be here soon,” it said. After speaking these words into the intercom, Lejam went to his dormitory and awaited the arrival of the enemy.
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AceB190 is not online. AceB190
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21 Aug 2012 04:28 PM
wat
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:29 PM
wat
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Voltorb56 is not online. Voltorb56
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21 Aug 2012 04:29 PM
wat
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:30 PM
omg copier. post helpful stuff.
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Voltorb56 is not online. Voltorb56
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21 Aug 2012 04:30 PM
NO
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XxSoulNexusxX is not online. XxSoulNexusxX
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21 Aug 2012 04:31 PM
wat
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Socialistic is not online. Socialistic
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21 Aug 2012 04:31 PM
You should put in a part where lejam sneezes on his keyboard.
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:31 PM
@Social; genius. o:
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Lizardguts12 is not online. Lizardguts12
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21 Aug 2012 04:32 PM
Social it`s a real roblox war, it`s happening as we speak
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Oddie9900 is not online. Oddie9900
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21 Aug 2012 04:32 PM
Why am I never included in stories?!
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Lizardguts12 is not online. Lizardguts12
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21 Aug 2012 04:33 PM
and that`s also a very good idea
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Darkvboiz12 is not online. Darkvboiz12
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21 Aug 2012 04:34 PM
Great beginning, there is a helpful way you can add to the story, me. I would Supervise most of the troops in RAT in Borealis. :D
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Socialistic is not online. Socialistic
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21 Aug 2012 04:35 PM
An online war* So ye make him sneeze then ruin the war ye ye.
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obiwananand is not online. obiwananand
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21 Aug 2012 04:35 PM
yar.


but then, i attack 'sonic is a cryo' and every1 dies


he shood namechanj the fort
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:37 PM
[-The Great War-]
[-Chapter 1-]
[-The Fatal Trap-]

[-F.E.A.R. Fort Cryo; 0900 hours-]

    The room was dark and cold. Just how Supreme General Lejam liked it. He was working on his F.E.A.R. issued laptop on an assignment given to him by Commander Sonic. The files were nearly fully injected into the R.A.T. Sparrow Systems. “The beginning of the end for them is drawing near,” he thought to himself with a smile. The words ‘Upload Finished’ appeared on the screen and stayed there for the next 10 seconds. Everything was in order. Lejam sent a message informing the Commander that his mission was complete. A minute later, the Commander replied, “Tell all troops to report to the front gate to stand guard. They’ll be here soon,” it said. After speaking these words into the intercom, Lejam went to his dormitory and awaited the arrival of the enemy.

[-Chapter 2-]
[-The Valiant Response-]

[-R.A.T. Fort Borealis; 2200 hours-]

    Night was upon the fort, and the watchmen had been stationed. Everyone reported to the barracks and tried to sleep. The cold air of this new fort and the general lack of knowledge about it had hit everyone hard. Admiral Yellowdude, who had been stationed in the base for the next month or so sat up in his bed, looking through his messages, one new message from Colour:

    ***Admiral Yellow.
         You have been assigned to lead a task force into Fort Cryo. See the attached document for more information regarding your mission.
        -CT***

He clicked the attached document:

    ***[-Mission Roster-]
    Task Force Leader: Admiral Yellowdude9209 “Yelly”
    Support Fire: Stealion “Trigger”
    Assault Force: PointlessChris24 “Pretty Boy Floyd”
             Brunitop “Bruno”
             LevelupRuler101 “Shay”
             Kali12321 “Kali”
    Pilot: Kaelan01 “Kael”
    Issue the following orders to each member of the squad according to their job:
        
        Leader: After the rest of the squad exits the helicopter, snipe any on-looking hostiles and jump with your sniper. Using your handheld, direct your squad to land on the left side mountains (when facing the main gate of the Fort.) Direct your squad to the top of the fort. Take no prisoners. Insert the comm-link on the top of the Fort. Signal the Pilot to return.
        Support Fire: Jump out before everyone else. Snipe when you’re in the air in order to make a safe landing. Land on the right-side mountains (when facing the main gate of the Fort.) Listen to the squad leader for orders on whom to shoot and when.
        Assault Force: Follow your Leader, clear the way for the squad and kill all enemies.
        Pilot: Fly over Fort Cryo (22.56 E, 135.334 N) and allow 20 seconds for the squad to exit the heli. Any longer and the mission must be aborted.***

Yellow printed the document, woke up the dreary soldiers, and lined them up.

    “Listen up. We’ve got a mission. Read your assignment cards and follow them exactly.” After giving them 20 seconds to read their cards he continued,

    “Kaelan. Go start up that helicopter. The rest of you, go retrieve your weapons from the armory.”

    The six men marched to the armory. Yellow handed each man the allotted weapons and amount of ammunition required for them to complete their mission. He gave Stealion a Silenced Nullifier with three extra magazines, along with a Snub Nosed Model .45. To the Assault Force, he gave a Silenced Tempest along with a Silenced Persuader and 3 extra magazines for each weapon.

    “We want to be as stealth-like as possible. Sniper, unless there is a hostile within 30 yards of you, do not draw that magnum.”

    For himself, he grabbed Dual Silenced Model .45’s and sheathed his old Mauler, which he grabbed from a dead body in the Solstice City Warzone Battle. Kaelan reported back, notifying Yellow that the helicopter was ready for takeoff.
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:38 PM
woops. accidentally posted chapter 1 along with it. skip that part.
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Socialistic is not online. Socialistic
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21 Aug 2012 04:38 PM
You never wrote that lejam sneezed on his keyboard.. :(
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:39 PM
@Social; Adding it when he pops up again.
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megapachi47 is not online. megapachi47
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21 Aug 2012 04:40 PM
you should put more pachi in this
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:41 PM
Pachi will be the noob that dies...later...
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SupremeWarrior1878 is not online. SupremeWarrior1878
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21 Aug 2012 04:41 PM
What
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Darkvboiz12 is not online. Darkvboiz12
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21 Aug 2012 04:45 PM
Whenever I ask to be in a story, they don't put me in it. That's it, I'm never reading anymore RAT stories unless I'm in it. My decision is final.
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Deathwarrior1999 is not online. Deathwarrior1999
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21 Aug 2012 04:47 PM
-Hates on RAT-

what you going to do about it?
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yellowdude9209 is not online. yellowdude9209
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21 Aug 2012 04:47 PM
@Dark; I made them both at the same time...it's not like I wrote that in 5 minutes...I'm the type of guy that saves characters for later. I can say with confidence that you, pachi, ace, cj, oddie, and a few others will be in it in the chapters to come...
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