tobs99
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| 08 Aug 2012 01:11 AM |
The world suffered a series of natural disasters, the few male survivors decided to take responsibilitys for governing the lands.
--Create a name for you and your land, you will be the ruler of that land. Laws and other things req. --You can also choose to be a citizen of one of the current lands(If any) As a citizen you must abibe by all rules and help develope the town
Rules: Godmodding: Not allowed Be nice and the only arguments that should be started must be in the RP Please no critisism.
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| 08 Aug 2012 01:15 AM |
If you don't take criticism then how do you expect to get better?
~Arikai67/robloxunit1 |
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| 08 Aug 2012 01:20 AM |
Male survivors, eh?
WE HAVE A SE.XIST ON AILE 7 |
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tobs99
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| 08 Aug 2012 01:31 AM |
| (2 replys, no RPing unsucessful start..)Lattimer Yasu, a man of high name in Great Britan speaks up with the other survivers "Somthing won't go right with this plan...But I'll go along if I get put in the ol' history books." He smiles in delight. "Aliright I just wanna name my piece of land New Britannia in name of Great Britan. We will also need to repopulate" He says to the group. |
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| 08 Aug 2012 02:36 AM |
| (The whole point of this forum is to take constructive criticism, not whine that you won't take any. This is bad.) |
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sonikku70
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| 08 Aug 2012 02:39 AM |
| You literally make me sick. You NEED criticism, and also, why should it only be male survivors. There should be a very GOOD reason for that. Your plot and post together is all very short, and not submersive. |
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dadudi2
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| 08 Aug 2012 02:56 AM |
i wanted to join (didn't look at the size of the rp x3..)
until i saw male survivors only. |
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tobs99
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| 08 Aug 2012 04:06 AM |
| -_- Ok guess no RP and the male survivor part. I DIDNT SAY ALL WERE MALE I said Male survivors were granted the power to govern the land, Referring to places around the world and old USA where girls did'nt have many rights. |
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tobs99
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| 08 Aug 2012 04:07 AM |
| An I said no crititsism BECAUSE ITS A RP FORUM NOt A CRITISISM FORUM IS YOU WANNA CRITISIZE DO IN IN THE MESSAGING! |
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briar182
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| 08 Aug 2012 07:15 AM |
| What should we expect from a guy in a clan? |
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| 08 Aug 2012 10:24 AM |
Yeah, THIS ISN'T THE 1800 IF YOU HAVN'T NOTICED. OR THE 1900 FOR THAT MATTER. |
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| 08 Aug 2012 10:30 AM |
| I'm in 2 clans, what's your point? I also think war on ROBLOX is pretty stupid, but it's also a social activity and I love chatting. |
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briar182
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| 08 Aug 2012 10:33 AM |
@Terrifying The people on C&G are pretty bad. It's like a worse OT. |
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| 08 Aug 2012 10:41 AM |
| Oh. I've been there sometimes, it's a pretty hectic place indeed. |
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| 08 Aug 2012 12:48 PM |
| Man, I dont even understand where to start. |
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| 08 Aug 2012 01:00 PM |
Was gonna join. Saw male survivors. Rage quitted.
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tobs99
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| 08 Aug 2012 03:11 PM |
| Notice I said 'Places around the world' then I said old USA |
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tobs99
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| 08 Aug 2012 03:17 PM |
| Well, Imma let you guys chat on this post, this did't end out very well -_- Trolls just wanting to ruin RPs just gotta come in. |
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sonikku70
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| 08 Aug 2012 04:27 PM |
| You're pathetic. When will people understand they can't just make a roleplay if they're starting out? JOIN A ROLEPLAY FIRST. ONCE YOU HAVE ENOUGH EXPERIENCE, YOU CAN ATTEMPT TO MAKE ONE. |
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Riku1257
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| 08 Aug 2012 04:41 PM |
| This is why RP is failing, people like the OP who won't take a bit of help. |
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billygod
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| 08 Aug 2012 06:14 PM |
JAHLSFHALFJLADGJ;FAFJASFQASJFKJ;;JAS FA SDF AS FAD A FAD F A I WIN |
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tobs99
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:41 AM |
| I have a large amount of experience, But I noticed that some RP's get ruined with noobs just coming up and saying 'This RP fails because' I was trying to make it clear dont critisize on the RP -_- Critisize in the messaging, if sombody looks at your RP and sees people critisizing, they'll wnat to join in with it and just elminate the good RP. Theres a send message button on the profile, but a ruin RP one here. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 10:21 AM |
Not all roleplays that are criticized are good. Most of them have many flaws and that's why people do what they do. Sometimes it's good criticism that people tend to ignore and in tern that's when their roleplays get flamed. Other times it's the opposite. You screwed up the moment you put "don't criticize". You should of been more specific and told people if they are to criticize to send you a message. Since you didn't this happened.
Long story short this roleplay wouldn't of been successful. You would need to be a lot more descriptive in a ton of sections. Like plot for example. Explaining how the apocalypse ended, how regions are being formed, etc etc. And maybe a more thought out character sheet if needed.
If you want any help I'll be happy to lend a hand. |
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billygod
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| 13 Aug 2012 10:24 AM |
| c: I WIN SO LEAVE DIS FORUM |
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