krinjhj
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| 17 Mar 2012 05:32 AM |
Herobrine's Attack Introduction
There was 2 minecraftian's living in a big very big mansion it had everything in it, they were rich with diamonds and gold! (Random names 1st minecraftian is Bob , 2nd is Micheal) Well.. that was.. untill one night, they asked some friendly minecraftian to make a wired TV it worked untill they found something important on the Minecraft News
Smallest Part 1 ( Season 1)
Reporter: There was an suspicous man on the loose, the Minecraft community calls it Herobrine some thinks it's Notch's dead brother,Herobrine is a minecraftian that builds pyramides and few things to trap people in some it and steal they're tools that guy was last seen next to a very big mansion building, few minecraftian's are investigating the problem. -1 second later an random news appears on the TV- Bob: Next.. next to our home?! Micheal: Nahh... they're just playing joke's with us, lets just go to bed. Bob:Ok...
Those 2 Minecraftian's went sleeping on 9:00 PM, when the clock reaches 12:00 PM an storm suddenly appears. Bob the minecraftian who was very sensitive, woke up and looked out of the window to see what was happening Bob: Oh.. just some storm woke me up -stares at the big window on top of his bed- -The storm suddenly flashes an thunder and Bob saw Herobrine in the flash for 1 second- Bob: That.. was Herobrine, wait it was just my mind playing with me.. -Bob went back to bed untill he heard a hurt sound- Bob: - wakes up- Its... its HEROBRINE! -Suddenly Herobrine kidnaps with a very big black sack Bob and brings him to a secret lair made out of moss stone bricks-
To Be Continued? P.S: I'll continue the story if i have some free time ok?
Part 2 (Season 1)
-Bob passes out for trying to struggle his way out of the sack- Herobrine:Hehehee..... -5:30 AM- Bob: Where am i... whats this... an lair? Herobrine: Not just any lair, its my lair! Bob: Why do you look like a dead default minecraftian? Herobrine:I'm not dead im Herobrine! Bob: Oh no! Herobrine: And i herobrine, will knock 70% of you're intel with this iron shovel, and send you on an island! -knocks bob's head with a iron shovel and scrambles his brain and sends him on a island- -10:00 AM- Bob: -cough- Where am i.. what am i doing here?! This island looks abonded... -1 Hour later- Bob:Hmm.... i feel a wierd presence... Creeper: SsssssS! -BOOOM- -Bob fly's but survives the explosion- Bob:Owwwww..... Bob:My insticts tell me to chop this tree... with uhh... my bare hands! -Bob chops the tree and has no idea what to do with it but stares at it for 12 hours- -Meanwhile Herobrine at his lair- Herobrine:I'm such a sick man c:< oooohhh its 6:00 PM time for the entertainment! - sends random mobs around the minecraft globe- Bob:Brrr.... its so cold.. im gonna hide in that small cavern... -Bob heard Minecraftian's screaming during that night and he was scared during sleeping- (6:00 AM) Bob: Whats this.. uhh... its blue.. its shiny and has a big point on it.. -picks up diamond sword- -an creeper charges at Bob for no reason- Bob: -accidently destroy's creeper with diamond sword- Ooops, sorry mister what ever you are.. -Bob stares at the wood he cutted yesterday, he picks up the wood and slices it with the diamond sword- Bob: Uhh... is this planks or just some cutted wood... -suddenly his brain pops out an idea- -Meanwhile Bob was busy an 20 aggressive minecraftians with iron swords came to the island to raid all the minecraftian's stranded there- Bob:What is that screaming, im gonna hide behind that boulder.. Aggresive Minecraftian: Raid all these sons of [Censored word] on this island! Other Aggresive Minecraftian:Roger that.. -One of those minecraftians spotted Bob- Aggresive minecraftian: Prepare to meet ya doom lad! Bob:I hear something from my instict...Sorry stranger my instict doesnt uhh... trust you! -an small swordfight apears between those two minecraftian's but Bob wins cause of his diamond sword- Herobrine: Oh look a bunch of people raiding my domain, i'm gonna kill him and steal they're tools they're probaly rich! -Herobrine activates fog- Aggressive Minecraftian: Keep going boys! after we raided this island we're going to capture it! Herobrine: -Stares at one of the aggressive minecraftian- Agg Minecraftian: I feel something is staring at me.. Herobrine: -Strikes at one of the agg minecraftian's and stole all their tools- - seems Herobrine was greedy and striked at every agg minecraftian and stole their tools It was 1:00 PM before the raid went over and Bob made a Crafting Table Bob: Hmm.... I see a bunch of this blue shiny thing (Diamond Ingot) some guy left these tools behind.. -Bob feels 20 sticks next to him he picks it up and try's to make something- Bob:Finaly.. With this i can do anything -Meanwhile at Micheal's Mansion- Micheal: Oh boy.. where did bob went i can't find him hey minecraftian servant! Minecraftian Servant: Yes micheal? Micheal: You keep the mansion guarded with this diamond sword, i'll pay you 20 diamond ingot's if you do it! Minecraftian Servant: Ok micheal. Micheal went investigating and found footprints. Micheal: Heh to find bob i have to pack up my stuff! -sets 64 bread,10 Steaks,10 Cooked Chicken in inventory- Micheal follows the footprints. -Meanwhile at Bob in 8:00 AM- Bob: Hmm... i think i should make protection out of these diamonds... At Herobrine's lair Herobrine: -holds a microphone with a sound of 300% that everyone could hear it- Oh sorry my victims on my domain, i will destroy you all with my new pet, Enderdragon. Bob hears that sound and goes to the source of the sound Bob accidently falls and he finds a Log Book in his pockets and reads
5 Feb 2012 I've learned the secrets of Herobrine Herobrine, is Notch's dead brother. he kidnaps people and send them on a big island ,the remaining survivors on that island we're suffered and plundered by mobs and by Herobrine.
6 Feb 2012 I've been struggling in this big sack were Herobrine putted me in. i think im gonna pass out for a while...
7 Feb 2012 Ugh... were am i.. i'm in someone's lair! The people who have who have seen this log book please save me!
Bob: Be brave... i have to get moving! while bob moves on to the source where he heard that sound he hears screaming minecraftian's who were kidnapped by Herobrine and being killed by Enderdragon
To be continued?
Part 3 (Season 1) (Small Part)
Bob: Hmm.. i think i came to the right place, well its filled with lights and an sign: Herobrine's lair Herobrine: Oh its you,i was just bussy killing this guy. Herobrine:Your next. Bob: Next to die he, lets have an swordfight mate! -Bob and Herobrine wears diamond armor and diamond swords- The swordfight took 2 hours before Herobrine was slain before Bob could take the final slash Herobrine said Herobrine: He, i can't destroy you cause my enderpet is chewing on his little friends,so instead to kill you i will teleport you to the Nether - cough -. Bob: -thinks- What the heck is an nether. Herobrine: You didnt respond he? well, Nether is one of the most dangerous dimensions to explore at and i will teleport you there! Bob:Ehh.. where's the teleporter? Herobrine: your standing in it! Bob: Oh lord noo! - teleports to The Nether - -Bob gets dizzy in the teleporting and teleports in a quiet space in the Nether Fortress- No one could hurt Bob when he was asleep in The Nether they all tough he was dead. -Bob wakes up- Bob: What the.. this place looks uhh.. like h3*l or something.. Bob looks at his logbook and finds a scrapped paper that mapped the entire Nether plus with the Portal -Bob goes outside the Nether Fortress and sees few handmade bridges and few players being ambushed by Ghasts- Bob:I gotta save em! but those enemy's are flying uhh gotta... find an ranged weapon. -One of the player's die but drops nothing but an enchanted bow and zombie flesh- Bob:This'll work. -Bob survives but is heavily wounded- Bob:Oh god this meat would keep me alive somehow -eats zombie flesh but doesnt get poisoned- -Meanwhile at Micheal's location- Micheal: I've finaly found it, Bob must be stuck on Herobrine's island -drinks coffee for 3 seconds and spits it on the ground- Oh god.. Herobrine's island?!
Bob: Oh look there's the portal, but its guarded by an fort and evil looking people! Bob sees an griefer about to die and steals his TNT's and his Pressure plate. Bob: Time to place it! Bob places the 2 TNT's and The pressure plate he activates it but has no idea where to go now but.. BOOOOM!! Bob gets fatality wounded but fly's straight to the Portal to the Normal minecraft dimension but this time Bob got teleported on the side of the island where Enderdragon was feasting again Bob got dizzy and slept again and people tough he was dead (6:00 AM) Bob makes an full recovery and eats an apple when he woke up. Bob finaly knows where to go now but on his way he meets Enderdragon...
Last Part (Season 1)
Bob: Gotta move gotta move gotta move! -Meanwhile at Micheal's Mansion- (12:00 PM) Micheal: Guess.. i have to be alone in this mansion, without my roomate well time to go to bed! When Micheal goes to bed an storm apears Micheal wasnt very sensetive and is kind of lazy, so it was easy for Herobrine to kidnap him. Herobrine decided to keep Micheal in his lair for 3 day's locked before hitting him with an iron shovel
Bob enter's Enderdragon's habitat Bob:Hmm... why are you eating those player's? Enderdragon: -growl- Bob:Your probaly that Enderdragon that Herobrine told me. Enderdragon: -opens mouth- Bob: This can't be good, guess another fight for victory! - holds diamond sword- The battle took 2 hours. Bob was almost slain by Enderdragon well.. There was screaming minecraftian's in another city (Different story) Enderdragon got attracted by the sound and was done attacking Bob and he got fainted and kidnapped by crazy wacko's who wanted to kill and steal Bob's tools but.. they decided to spare him untill he wakes up. (6:00 AM) Bob: Ugh.. where am i.. looks like im in an tribe. Bob: Look its Herobrine's lair! -The crazy wacko's wake up- Crazy wacko: Wir sind Menschen, wir werden dich töten und stehlen Ihre Artikel! Bob: I dont understand you but the red thing and red pipes (guts) around your face makes me think your an cannibal! -The Cannibals died cause they had weak weaponry- Bob:Hmm... that was easy.. (12:00 AM) Bob decides to go to Herobrine's lair and kill him but... Bob: Oh god why are those flying enemy's around here? I tough they spawn in Nether! -Bob retreats straight at Herobrine's lair- Herobrine:What are you doing here? I tough you died! Well not actualy died but swimming in lava Bob: Tell me Herobrine, what are those flying enemy's doing here? Herobrine: Those? those are Ghasts my plan worked out and i'm sending Nether creatures around the Globe Mwuhahahaha! Herobrine: I'm not sending those Nether creatures here, your not important to kill, i have an world to capture! Bob: Man, you must be sick, sending creatures around the globe and prisoning that minecraftian (Micheal) Herobrine: Thank you for the compliment , oh and i've prisoned your friend Micheal! -Micheal wakes up- Micheal: Huh. what.. Oh its you Bob! Bob: Do i know you? Micheal: I'm your roommate, lets discuss this later first we gotta kill this psycho! Micheal breaks out of his captors and he finds that the sky is red. Micheal: Why's the sky red? Herobrine: I'm taking this world over by sending Nether creature's around the globe! Herobrine: And i Herobrine, will make sure the Minecraft enxtinct! Micheal: Bob, get your swords ready we'd be ready to fight this psycho man! Herobrine: Two players vs one player oh you guys must be unfair well luckily i made 2 diamond swords! Bob: Uh oh.. Herobrine:Enough i'm ready to kill you both! Herobrine chokes Bob but Bob survives and needs to take an 2 day rest -The fight between Herobrine and Micheal took long but Micheal lost- Herobrine: This world will be mine! Micheal:Your world? your world?! You must be crazy man. Herobrine:Thank you that i'm crazy , heh the sea is drying out.. Micheal: And i've planned the perfect suprise attack! Herobrine: Suprise attack? i like suprises. Micheal: -cough- Heh? i have an suprise buts its an attack. clash my tamed wolfs! Tamed Wolfs: Woof woof! Herobrine: You havnt seen the last of me! - fake dies in the attack of the wolfs- After that Bob and Micheal went back to their daily lifes, exept that the world turned into 20% Nether (8:00 PM)
Herobrine: Hehe.. i'm not dead and this isnt over... heheheheee....
To be continued?
Anyway's i "Made this story" from a different website where the forums are locked and can only enter it if you made a account. There's more but i'm gonna send them later. |
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gellick
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Nitro509
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| 17 Mar 2012 05:58 AM |
| you wasted your time making this |
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| 17 Mar 2012 06:35 AM |
| this is the stupidest thing i've ever seen |
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krinjhj
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| 17 Mar 2012 06:37 AM |
Please , stop insu_lting me, try this, if you can make a better story than in_sult me the other website gave me lots of compliments and my forum was rated 4 stars. You know what, i should have never planned this... |
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| 17 Mar 2012 06:44 AM |
| these are opinions, and not insults. if you don't want them, don't post your story. |
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krinjhj
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| 17 Mar 2012 06:45 AM |
Are you trying to break my heart or something? If you hate this so much, don't read it. |
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| 17 Mar 2012 06:47 AM |
| ... if i didn't read it, how else could i see if it's good or bad? anyways, not my problem if you're oversensitive |
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| 31 Mar 2012 06:53 PM |
| @nitro509 that was kinda a little bit rude. about what you said. |
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koolkid64
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| 22 Apr 2012 08:07 AM |
| hmmm herobrine was probaly born from the nether or the end. i guess the nether. because you know how you summon him? yeah with the netherrack or netherstone or whatever its called again! and anyways he was reborn just turned into an enderman! so he had to be reborn into the end. first he was born from the nether. then came back to earth for revenge! then he died of something at earth then became reborn into the end and became a enderman. |
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| 28 May 2012 05:48 PM |
| Very well written story. I hope the next one will be better. |
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| 12 Jul 2012 01:50 AM |
@trixieisbestpony If you don't have anything nice to say then why don't you go do something else with your life k?
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| 12 Jul 2012 01:57 AM |
cool. now that city with screaming. A different dyory right?
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| 17 Aug 2012 11:44 PM |
| @Nitro509 well he wanted to share a story about Herobrine and I see your wasting your time replying |
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Mjewje
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| 17 Aug 2012 11:47 PM |
| lol only noobs are sticking up for the noob lol |
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RoboFreak
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| 17 Aug 2012 11:50 PM |
| you wasted your time making that clump of words and terrible literature |
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