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Re: Chapter Three - Confronted and Cornered (FINALE)

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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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16 Aug 2012 05:47 PM
-Behind The Writing-
I first saw the fan film, "The Nightmare Ends on Halloween" back in 2010/2011, and I loved it. The sequel was equally great. Now, I am here to provide a novelization of both the first and the sequel. I will try to make this longer. Next post will be chapter one.
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16 Aug 2012 06:05 PM
-Chapter One: Recruitment-

In limbo, Michael Myers, now a lost soul and finally destroyed has been laying in a crib like thing. He was a killing machine and now he is almost completely calm and tranquil.

Freddy Kreuger's voiceover begins. "They tried to erase me. They tried to treat me like the plague. My name was not spoken. All evidence of my wrath was destroyed. They had thought they had gotten rid of me!" Freddy chuckles.

He continues, "They thought they would never be afraid again! But I proved them wrong, I found someone. Someone who will make them remember. A killing machine that would do my bidding. But, then he turned on me. HE TURNED ON ME. And now I am here. I am in limbo. Trapped between my worlds of dreams and hell. It seems like I could be stuck here forever! But, I think I have found a way out. A way out of this prison and back to Springwood. To finish what I started. All I have to do is convince him. And I'll be home free...."

Through an eerie green fog, Michael was staring at a pumpkin. He was probably remembering all of his killings on Halloween nights. He sat, not moving and barely blinking, seemingly fixated on the pumpkin.

Suddenly, Freddy's loud booming laughter came from in the green fog. "Michael, may I speak with you?" He asked.

"I would like a moment of your valuable time. I know how busy it can get here. I'm just kidding. I need you to schedule an early Halloween this year, Michael. I need you to go to Springwood to punish the children of Elm Street. Would you do that for me, Michael?"

Michael then turned his head to look at Freddy's horrificly burned face, and then looked back at the pumpkin as if he said, "No."

"Understand, they have been VERY bad. And I need someone who can help me. Will you help me?"

Again, Michael turned his head to Freddy then back to the pumpkin he seemed to be fixated on.

"In return, I will give you anything you can dream of! Aww, come on! There has to be something you want!"

Freddy, growing more and more angry by the second then said, "Hey! Who the hell do you think you are?"

With his rage in tact, he clawed the pumpkin and it rolled across the floor. This finally turned Michael's full attention to Freddy Kreuger. He got up and had his infamous kitchen knife in his hand.

"Ohh, I got your attention now!" Freddy then said. Michael then swung at Freddy as he said, "What? It was just a pumpkin!"

"Oh, you wanna play now? Let's go!" Freddy said just before Michael grabbed him by the throat and attempted to choke him. When this didn't work, he threw him backwards and he landed on somewhere different from where they just were.
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16 Aug 2012 06:09 PM
Come up with your own idea! You have decent writing skills, use them for entirely your own work.
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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16 Aug 2012 06:11 PM
Or you could just enjoy the story instead of trying to say I can't write fanfiction.

Writing Chapter 2 now.
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16 Aug 2012 06:13 PM
This isn't exactly fanfiction. It can better be described as a remake. And I'm not saying you can't make that, I'm saying that in my opinion it's unnecessary and just not a good idea.
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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16 Aug 2012 06:15 PM
Don't like it, don't need to post about it. Besides, I'll write what I want to.
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16 Aug 2012 06:16 PM
Keep it up, Olympus.

I'm McLoving it.
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16 Aug 2012 06:23 PM
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16 Aug 2012 06:24 PM
Good writing skills Olympus! Keep it up!
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16 Aug 2012 06:25 PM
-Chapter Two: Battle Beginning-

Freddy, clutching his infamous fedora that rested upon his head, brought himself to his feet. He looked to his left and saw a house, presumably the infamous Myers home.

Michael was standing right outside of the door. Slowly, like he usually does, he walked forward so that he would be facing Freddy head to head. This signified that the battle between two demons would begin.

As Michael continued to stare at Freddy, he said, "Well, looks like someone's dreaming! Can it be?"

A flash later, both Michael Myers and Freddy Krueger were into a red place, which seemed like Freddy's boiler room. Michael walked around and took a few steps forward before Freddy's loud laughter filled the room, making Michael turn around.

"You're dead! I'm back!" Freddy yelled, waving his arms into the air. Michael continued to stare at Freddy until he turned around saying, "Now. Time to get back to work."

Before Freddy could though, he transported himself near Michael and said, "You're still here?" Michael then turned to Freddy and looked at him as he slowly walked towards him.

Freddy then raised his claw which sent Michael flying backwards into a few canisters. As Michael fell, Freddy chuckled maniacally. Michael then rose and cocked his head to look at Freddy.

He got up and began walking towards Freddy again as Freddy said, "Oh? Your pissing me off, Myers!"

Freddy continously threw minor punches at Michael which worked to no avail. Michael, when he got to Freddy, raised his knife to strike but Freddy attempted to intervene. He threw Freddy away.

As Freddy attempted to get up, Michael hit him once more. With Freddy in a corner, Michael walked over to slice and dice him. But before he could, Freddy then jumped out and went past Michael, causing him to turn around.

Michael kept trying to get Freddy but he always got beat out by his running ability. A minor fight in the battle raged as they fought knife to knive glove fingers.

Freddy behind a curtain said, "You're so dead now!" as Michael walked towards him. He left the curtain, and striked down on him with his glove. However, this failed when Michael caught his gloved hand in his hand.

Using his knife and strength, Michael lifted Freddy upwards, and then threw him as he again landed on an unfamiliar surface.
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16 Aug 2012 06:38 PM
or you could watch the 10-20 min short film on yt.
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16 Aug 2012 06:39 PM
8 mins.
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MovieBuff666 is not online. MovieBuff666
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16 Aug 2012 06:40 PM
Even though i LOVE watching movies , i am a big book fan too. Usually i read the book before the movie. So when Olympus is done writing this and i read it all , i'll watch the short film probably.
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17 Aug 2012 03:15 PM
(Just a note, there is a sequel to the fan film made by the same guy, so I will be writing that one too. Enjoy chapter 3.)

-Chapter Three - Confronted and Cornered/Finale-

Freddy landed near a box that had a ton of weird drawings on it that looked like the Lament Configuration. He realized he did not have his fedora on, as it fell off when he landed.

Aside from that, he slowly became aware of his surroundings as he got up from the floor that he was lying upon. He saw a light fixture upon the ceiling that had chains from it which gave him an eerie feeling.

Other than the dim light that the ceiling light gave, he could not see much. The only thing he could see is what was around him, and one of those things was a fedora. His fedora.

As he put it on, a door opened and out came Jason Voorhees, whom Freddy previously battled not only a year earlier. "What the hell?" Freddy asked himself, wondering why Jason is in the same place as him again.

Another door opened and out from the white bright light came Leatherface, whom Freddy had seen in Hell but never battled unlike Jason. He was even more mystified.

Behind Freddy, as he turned around, Michael Myers, who he was just battling came out and Freddy just couldn't grasp what was going on.

The last door opened and out came Pinhead, which explained why the box was on the floor and why three killers were standing around him. "No!" He shouted as Pinhead began to step out.

He began to speak. "Freddy Kreuger. Did you think we would let you get away? Did you think you could hide from us? No. I think not. Your reign of terror is over. You escaped hell once. Now, you must pay Hell's price. We will tear your soul apart."

All of the killers slowly walked towards Freddy and raised their various weapons as they were almost ready to strike. "No!!!!" Freddy yelled.

THE END

-Notes-
I will now novelize the sequel which will reveal the fate of Mr. Krueger. Until then, enjoy!

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17 Aug 2012 04:23 PM
Bump.
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17 Aug 2012 04:26 PM
OMG OLYMPUS I DIDNT KNOW YOU FORUM POSTED!
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dralion is not online. dralion
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17 Aug 2012 05:37 PM
don't mean to be rude but

what's the point of this
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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17 Aug 2012 05:55 PM
It's me writing something I wanted to write. Problem?
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dralion is not online. dralion
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17 Aug 2012 06:06 PM
i just don't get why you need to copy a movie that someone can watch in 9 mins rather than waiting almost a day for another part of the book to be released but it's fine if it's what you want to do.
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Olympus23 is not online. Olympus23
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17 Aug 2012 06:28 PM
No need to post if you don't like it.
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17 Aug 2012 07:08 PM
i didn't say i didn't like it.
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