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altar30
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| 16 Aug 2012 03:58 PM |
Rap/Poem for a girl From the first time I met you I felt the connection and every second since then's been nothing short of perfection I adore every section that comprises you it's like you're an angel just disguised as you mesmerized every time that I can view your undeniable kindness that shines out from inside of you my eyes stay glued with you chance of moving when they glance at your enchanting beauty you've got a smile so soothing and a sweetness like peaches that reaches deep in my soul as my feeling increases i'll try to mend all the pieces of a heart been mistreated i'm not like the others the past won't be repeated I want to erase all the bad, and replace it with good help you escape from the pain, make you feel like you should cause I could never hurt a person so perfect you deserve the world girl any less isnt worth it these words don't do service in fully expressin what a blessing you are, you truly impress me i love caressing you back to help you go to sleep putting you at ease as you drift into your dreams i'm always right there with you no matter how far it may seem being apart isnt easy but it can work if we believe we bring out the best in each other, expect nothing less from each other both sent a message to heaven and requested each other there's no question in me that we were destined to meet now i dont want no one else except for my queen if there's anything you need then that's what i'll do cause i'll always be there for you through and through |
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| 16 Aug 2012 04:01 PM |
| that was copied i just like it .3. |
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swag201
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| 16 Aug 2012 04:39 PM |
RATING 10 OUT OF 10 G-REATNESS A-MAZING S-WAG L-OVE E-NTERTAINING
yall are perfect keep it up just like amazing song you huy's just made RAPPER / SINGERS OF THE YEAR HELLO! ALTAR30,LILLEBRON23
GREAT JOB IMPRESSED KEEP IT UP ;D |
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racsmnoz
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| 16 Aug 2012 05:50 PM |
| aw mane das tight. #swag #oloy |
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| 16 Aug 2012 06:01 PM |
that was the greatest one ive ever seen.. compared to my forum.. im getting alot of hate comments, lol.
Awesome Song!!
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lobstery7
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| 16 Aug 2012 06:02 PM |
"oooh because i know so much about love even though im only 10"
That's pretty much what I got from this song.
"I'll bring him down, a king with no crown" |
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altar30
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| 16 Aug 2012 07:38 PM |
| Thank y'all for the support :D |
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ducky870
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| 16 Aug 2012 07:49 PM |
This is my first love song on Roblox :o and I know he's better. I don't get why you hate on all of us tho...kinda pointless since we're all doing what we love while you waste your time saying bad stuff about it. If that's what you live to do, then nice job. |
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| 16 Aug 2012 07:50 PM |
| If that's what you love to do* |
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altar30
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| 16 Aug 2012 07:54 PM |
| @Lil Exactly, Were just doing what we love |
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ducky870
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| 16 Aug 2012 08:18 PM |
| @Ducky ...this is the only love song I've posted on Roblox, so you have no idea. |
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ducky870
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