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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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15 Aug 2012 03:34 PM
(Read the whole song kinda slow)

When I walk around the streets...
It's like I'm stuck in a prison and I cannot be released

Ah

I'm chasing for this dream
And for some reason to people, it seems...
Like I can't reach it
And no one gets why I keep trying
They say "What, you need a preacher to preach it?"
"A teacher to teach it?"
"It's a dream that'll never come true, so just leave it!"

Dang

My family always told me...
"You can do whatever you want, just try."
"Never give up...Just fly."
I never really understood, but now I do.
If I want something, don't let anyone stop me.
So not even you.
Your stuck in this fake rap era.
What am I supposed to be, some cocky fool?

No.

This is what I love
Rapping about my life, my problems, and about how I never give up
Never put anything above
And I will never change
Even when push comes to shove

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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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15 Aug 2012 03:34 PM
Btw...I havn't come up with a name yet. xD lol
This was just a little rap I made last night.
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shonyshon is not online. shonyshon
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15 Aug 2012 04:09 PM
8/10
Nice
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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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15 Aug 2012 04:34 PM
Thanks man
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lobstery7 is not online. lobstery7
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15 Aug 2012 04:36 PM
0/10

may raps are wayyyy betr dood


"I'll bring him down, a king with no crown"
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RottingChrist is not online. RottingChrist
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15 Aug 2012 04:42 PM
2/10

I would've given it a three out of ten, but Icecrafter made a rap about burning churches and he and Lobstery made everyone else look terrible by comparison.
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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
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15 Aug 2012 04:46 PM
6/10

Kinda short, your first one was still the best.
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bobo123xxx is not online. bobo123xxx
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15 Aug 2012 05:11 PM
1/10
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Flame6264 is not online. Flame6264
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15 Aug 2012 05:43 PM
10/10 LOVE IT!
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racsmnoz is not online. racsmnoz
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15 Aug 2012 06:18 PM
Like it. Another cool one by you :)
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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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15 Aug 2012 08:19 PM
Thanks to everyone who actually said something good about my song :D lol
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Bodomfan is not online. Bodomfan
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15 Aug 2012 11:12 PM
br00tol
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darkside77 is not online. darkside77
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16 Aug 2012 12:28 AM
It pretty good for rap.... 8/10
Hip hop and rap isnt that bad though...
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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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16 Aug 2012 12:45 AM
Thanks
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BILLYDONUTS102 is not online. BILLYDONUTS102
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16 Aug 2012 12:48 AM
i would make a remix but this one might be a hit
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hardcoremenace667770 is not online. hardcoremenace667770
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16 Aug 2012 01:04 AM
Nice, make this longer, it would be an actual song.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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16 Aug 2012 01:38 AM
I'm going to give my honest opinion so Get ready. Flow was nice and I totally love how you express the saying how rap doesn't need to rhyme but you put it in a stylish angle. You can entertain people with a song that doesn't rhyme so for that I give you:
7.8-ish/10

Lol I was trying to sound like an expert.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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16 Aug 2012 01:39 AM
I'm going to give my honest opinion so Get ready. Flow was nice and I totally love how you express the saying how rap doesn't need to rhyme but you put it in a stylish angle. You can entertain people with a song that doesn't rhyme so for that I give you:
7.8-ish/10
Good-ish great. Somewere in the middle.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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16 Aug 2012 01:41 AM
I'm going to give my honest opinion so Get ready. Flow was nice and I totally love how you express the saying how rap doesn't need to rhyme but you put it in a stylish angle. You can entertain people with a song that doesn't rhyme so for that I give you:
7.8-ish/10
Good-ish great. Somewere in the middle.
P.S. the song really inspired me. The way how even if people don't like my songs to still continue for the very few people who do like my songs.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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16 Aug 2012 01:43 AM
Why the heck did it come out 3 times?!?!? In 3 different ways.... Well the last one is what I really feel about the song. : )
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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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16 Aug 2012 01:48 AM
Thanks bro, and glad I could be an inspiration to you :D
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