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| 15 Aug 2012 03:34 PM |
(Read the whole song kinda slow)
When I walk around the streets... It's like I'm stuck in a prison and I cannot be released
Ah
I'm chasing for this dream And for some reason to people, it seems... Like I can't reach it And no one gets why I keep trying They say "What, you need a preacher to preach it?" "A teacher to teach it?" "It's a dream that'll never come true, so just leave it!"
Dang
My family always told me... "You can do whatever you want, just try." "Never give up...Just fly." I never really understood, but now I do. If I want something, don't let anyone stop me. So not even you. Your stuck in this fake rap era. What am I supposed to be, some cocky fool?
No.
This is what I love Rapping about my life, my problems, and about how I never give up Never put anything above And I will never change Even when push comes to shove
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| 15 Aug 2012 03:34 PM |
Btw...I havn't come up with a name yet. xD lol This was just a little rap I made last night. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 04:36 PM |
0/10
may raps are wayyyy betr dood
"I'll bring him down, a king with no crown" |
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| 15 Aug 2012 04:42 PM |
2/10
I would've given it a three out of ten, but Icecrafter made a rap about burning churches and he and Lobstery made everyone else look terrible by comparison. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 04:46 PM |
6/10
Kinda short, your first one was still the best. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 06:18 PM |
| Like it. Another cool one by you :) |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:19 PM |
| Thanks to everyone who actually said something good about my song :D lol |
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| 16 Aug 2012 12:28 AM |
It pretty good for rap.... 8/10 Hip hop and rap isnt that bad though... |
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| 16 Aug 2012 12:48 AM |
| i would make a remix but this one might be a hit |
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| 16 Aug 2012 01:04 AM |
| Nice, make this longer, it would be an actual song. |
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| 16 Aug 2012 01:38 AM |
I'm going to give my honest opinion so Get ready. Flow was nice and I totally love how you express the saying how rap doesn't need to rhyme but you put it in a stylish angle. You can entertain people with a song that doesn't rhyme so for that I give you: 7.8-ish/10
Lol I was trying to sound like an expert. |
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| 16 Aug 2012 01:39 AM |
I'm going to give my honest opinion so Get ready. Flow was nice and I totally love how you express the saying how rap doesn't need to rhyme but you put it in a stylish angle. You can entertain people with a song that doesn't rhyme so for that I give you: 7.8-ish/10 Good-ish great. Somewere in the middle.
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| 16 Aug 2012 01:41 AM |
I'm going to give my honest opinion so Get ready. Flow was nice and I totally love how you express the saying how rap doesn't need to rhyme but you put it in a stylish angle. You can entertain people with a song that doesn't rhyme so for that I give you: 7.8-ish/10 Good-ish great. Somewere in the middle. P.S. the song really inspired me. The way how even if people don't like my songs to still continue for the very few people who do like my songs.
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| 16 Aug 2012 01:43 AM |
| Why the heck did it come out 3 times?!?!? In 3 different ways.... Well the last one is what I really feel about the song. : ) |
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| 16 Aug 2012 01:48 AM |
| Thanks bro, and glad I could be an inspiration to you :D |
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