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| 15 Aug 2012 05:14 PM |
Kingdom telling you, you gags are gnarly. You swag hardly. Attempting to get me off my flow?. . You're mad tardy. I'm the start of a new rap party. You're about as hard as some bagged barley. I'm not rough and tough. But I'm mad sorry, That I take place in this maze-like game that leaves your brain charred, See. I'm amazed at the minor-ity's, liking even though the majority is the dead core of thee, problems associated with these outbursts of [F]'ing quarelled beef. Calling out more of these horribly written ,corny, boring stories. I don't do this for you. I just do this for me but to inform these rappers that their [S] isn't adored, I'm not trying to go forward with this. but the more that I spit I realise that I could be more into this. (Intimate) Killing it.
(Ki-Ki-Ki-Ki-Kingdom.) This is my habi-tat. More like my dominion But that's just my opinion. . (Ki-Ki-Ki-Ki-Kingdom.) This is my habitat, more like my dominion. You guys are just puppet-like minions. but that's just my opinion.
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DatFuta
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:15 PM |
Lol, you're the one making fun off horribly written, corny, stories?
Jerry was a race car driver... |
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:19 PM |
1. First off, If I make a rap why would I think in my mind. This is corny stupid and flows horribly. 2. This is not a story. 3. You can't even tell me how to improve other than unnecessary critiquing? |
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DatFuta
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:21 PM |
k Ro-Tard
Jerry was a race car driver... |
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:24 PM |
| Lawl? Name calling? That's not even a good insult. .I have a life outside of this game you're just some loser who has nothing better to do with his free time. Now that I've offended your ego you're either going to argue back and forth with me on a forum for no reason. and I'm just gonna respond or leave it at that. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:25 PM |
Yes... I'm the offended one lol
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:31 PM |
Gonna address your short story for the lols
>Lawl? Name calling? That's not even a good insult.
Really? You wrote a paragraph about it.
>.I have a life outside of this game you're just some loser who has nothing better to do with his free time.
Again... really? You have more forum posts and you have BC, indicating you care more about this game. And I do have an outside life, I have a pretty good social life actually.
>Now that I've offended your ego
lolwut
>you're either going to argue back and forth with me on a forum for no reason. and I'm just gonna respond or leave it at that.
Why are you making fun of foruming/arguing you're doing it more than me, you're paying for and you're getting defensive.
Jerry was a race car driver... |
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| 15 Aug 2012 07:16 PM |
| I got BC because I wanted it and hand my own money. Lol wut c: |
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| 15 Aug 2012 07:18 PM |
| It's not my fault you don't want BC just because I chose to get it doesn't mean I want OBC and I stay on this game constant. I defend myself you just came on here to start problems. :I |
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| 15 Aug 2012 07:19 PM |
| and I have like 11 more forum posts than you so that's kinda hypocritical >_> |
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| 15 Aug 2012 07:23 PM |
| 19* I stay on the music forum because I'm somewhat interested in it. You're just here to wisecrack. The whole song was my opinionate, hence the name "Opinion" if you don't agree with it. Oh well, tough luck, no need to drone on. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 07:25 PM |
"19* I stay on the music forum because I'm somewhat interested in it. You're just here to wisecrack. The whole song was my opinionate, hence the name "Opinion" if you don't agree with it. Oh well, tough luck, no need to drone on."
YEAH GUYS!! RESPECT HIS OPINIONATE |
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| 15 Aug 2012 07:55 PM |
OK... the only point you could muster was "I'm poor because I don't have BC". And what's an opinionate?
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:00 PM |
| I meant to say the song was opinionate, and I didn't say you were poor. I just said if you don't want BC then don't try and make me seem like a loner because I have it. and you're trying to check me on my stuff yet you're also looking very hypocritical. e _ e You guys are pretty stupid. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:05 PM |
| What's bad about it? e _ e. . |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:06 PM |
| It doesn't flow right and the lyrics are stupid. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:07 PM |
| What do you mean flow right? The lyrics aren't really stupid they sound stupid to you because you don't know what half the words mean e _ e |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:08 PM |
| I know what the words mean. I'm in all honors classes at my school. |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:10 PM |
| That really doesn't mean anything. You can be in all honors classes and still not know what an atom is e _ e |
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| 15 Aug 2012 08:15 PM |
| Me too. e _ e I'm prepared for criticism not wisecracking trolls and idiots. |
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