StellaOwl
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| 15 Aug 2012 04:56 PM |
Okay, just rate the lyrics... Some are INTENDED TO BE STUPID, you'll know what I mean when you read it, so don't make comments that act like I'm trying to be serious
Everyone's calling me crazy But summer days are getting hazy And oh so slowly they are passing And my brain is barely lasting
My dog can hate and he will bark it I hate it too and I will snark it Movie theaters, people firin' Nobody is every hirin
Me I know that I am losin it President election, too young to be choosin it Socks and sandals, they all rock now Clocks can tick why can't they tock now
Playin my guitar it's out of tune It's time for dinner it's half past noon Threw my cat straight out the window Pullin' him back, he won't come in though
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Help me I'm stuck in summer - Wake me up from this summer - Break me out of these summer - Dayz
I know I'm losing slumber Summer's never been a bummer And I realize I am clearly Losin' it
I only posted one verse and one chorus, yeah, it's a long verse, but the song is fast-paced so it goes a lot quicker. |
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Jared343
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StellaOwl
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:00 PM |
| Better than nothing for the first song my drummer and I ever wrote together. |
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StellaOwl
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:06 PM |
| Alright i read 5 lines in and its really cheesy |
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StellaOwl
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| 15 Aug 2012 05:08 PM |
I agree, reading the lyrics alone makes it sound really cheesy, it sounds way better with rockin' guitar and this really cool bassline.
It was the only song I could post that wouldn't sound too random without music. |
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