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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
Joined: 24 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 3387
15 Aug 2012 04:56 PM
Okay, just rate the lyrics...
Some are INTENDED TO BE STUPID, you'll know what I mean when you read it, so don't make comments that act like I'm trying to be serious

Everyone's calling me crazy
But summer days are getting hazy
And oh so slowly they are passing
And my brain is barely lasting

My dog can hate and he will bark it
I hate it too and I will snark it
Movie theaters, people firin'
Nobody is every hirin

Me I know that I am losin it
President election, too young to be choosin it
Socks and sandals, they all rock now
Clocks can tick why can't they tock now

Playin my guitar it's out of tune
It's time for dinner it's half past noon
Threw my cat straight out the window
Pullin' him back, he won't come in though

(Chorus)

Help me I'm stuck in summer -
Wake me up from this summer -
Break me out of these summer -
Dayz

I know I'm losing slumber
Summer's never been a bummer
And I realize I am clearly
Losin' it

I only posted one verse and one chorus, yeah, it's a long verse, but the song is fast-paced so it goes a lot quicker.
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
Joined: 02 Mar 2009
Total Posts: 9030
15 Aug 2012 04:57 PM
3.5/10.
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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
Joined: 24 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 3387
15 Aug 2012 05:00 PM
Better than nothing for the first song my drummer and I ever wrote together.
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bobo123xxx is not online. bobo123xxx
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15 Aug 2012 05:00 PM
2.5/10
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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
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15 Aug 2012 05:02 PM
bumpity :3
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MentalBreakDown is not online. MentalBreakDown
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15 Aug 2012 05:04 PM
I didn't read it
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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
Joined: 24 Jul 2011
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15 Aug 2012 05:05 PM
Um, thanks?
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MentalBreakDown is not online. MentalBreakDown
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15 Aug 2012 05:06 PM
Alright i read 5 lines in and its really cheesy
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StellaOwl is not online. StellaOwl
Joined: 24 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 3387
15 Aug 2012 05:08 PM
I agree, reading the lyrics alone makes it sound really cheesy, it sounds way better with rockin' guitar and this really cool bassline.

It was the only song I could post that wouldn't sound too random without music.
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