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Re: "Off Track" Lil King, (Comment what you think)

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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
Joined: 21 Jul 2010
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15 Aug 2012 01:46 PM
Speed the rap up After fergie, an slow down at Cave

Verse 1
My life is off track
I don't know where its going
or how shets gonna be rolling
but i can tell you one thing, how ill be flowing
Real rapping is my shet
I'm actually good at it
I hate people who say
"Hip-Hop is Dead"
its not dead, ik cause its in my head
they just don't know how to rap, but im not about to start the dissin
Ill change rap, people need to listen
My lryics are good, have you heard me?
They'll make u pee your pants, like fergie
Lets speed it up a little shall we?
Supercalifragilisticespealidouscious
You know when i flow i'm gonna be ferocious
I'm high as a bird so i must be fly
Flyer than a black bat going whack it a dark cave

(Hook)
My life is off track
Things are moving faster than a halfback
Going crazy i'm about to snap
So i let it out in rap
It calms me down an keeps me together
Think ill do this forever
but one thing i hate is people fake as
Imitation Leather
Now me, I'm sicker than a man in bad weather
People say i cant rap, i'm only a kid but i'm not kidding
Take me seriously, i'm about to take over, like Jay-Z

My life is off track
Things are moving faster than a halfback
Going crazy ima bout to snap
So i let it out in rap
It calms me down an keeps me together
Think ill do this forever
but one thing i hate is people fake as
Immatation Leather
Now me, Im sicker than a man in bad weather
People say i cant rap, im only a kid but im not kidding
Take me seriously, im about to take over, like Jay-Z

Verse 2
Rap is such a beauty, On that, can we agree?
Let me kill this song, like chuckie
Can u hear me, clearly? or do u not know what good rap is
Don't hate what you aint its bad for you
But if u hate me i hate you to!
Lil king is my name, i'm kinda new
I'm gonna stay, i think this i can actually do
At least I'm just me, i'm not crazy, or a junkie
If u hate me now, an i get famous don't try an be my buddy
I think i can flow, i think i think i can rhyme
And i'm willing for it to take up almost all my time


My life is off track
Things are moving faster than a halfback
Going crazy ima bout to snap
So i let it out in rap
It calms me down an keeps me together
Think ill do this forever
but one thing i hate is people fake as
Immatation Leather
Now me, Im sicker than a man in bad weather
People say i cant rap, im only a kid but im not kidding
Take me seriously, im about to take over, like Jay-Z

My life is off track
Things are moving faster than a halfback
Going crazy ima bout to snap
So i let it out in rap
It calms me down an keeps me together
Think ill do this forever
but one thing i hate is people fake as
Immatation Leather
Now me, Im sicker than a man in bad weather
People say i cant rap, im only a kid but im not kidding
Take me seriously, im about to take over, like Jay-Z




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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 01:48 PM
"My lryics are good, have you heard me?
They'll make u pee your pants, like fergie
Lets speed it up a little shall we?
Supercalifragilisticespealidousciou"

I stopped there.
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 01:49 PM
Fergie pee'd her pants in public while singing, if u knew that youd understand
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 01:50 PM
No, the fact you claim your "lryics" will make someone pee in their pants is the problem. also the corny made up word below.
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 01:53 PM
its something alot of people make up for who can say it fast, alot of people on roblox aren't DEEP :P enough to understand my lyrics, i keep up in the news and study lyrics just to make my raps better, as soon as i saw ur name i new there was gon be like something bad, but ik i have a lot of improving, this song is about my raps going off track of what i wanted them to, any dissing part was to my self, can u atleast go through the whole song an rate it
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 01:54 PM
I was doubting myself is the diss to myself basically
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 01:57 PM
it's pretty basic and lackluster. Also contradicting like when you said "atleast im not crazy" later you said "im going crazy"

This seems like a bunch of songs put together with no clear topic. And please...stop the whole mentioning of "haters" in songs. We have the radio to hear mindless "haters hate" lines.
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 02:02 PM
I dont believe in haters i believe in people who hate other people, an i was just pointing out the fact of fake friends an basdically the atleast im not crazy an im going crazy, i started this alter egothing awhile back, an its basically my alter ego telling me i suck and doubting my self whitch i started to in real life and my normal self realizes it but doesnt want to give in to the alter ego jeez youd have to know half my old songs to know that i made on gigatron. i rap alot like that youd understand, like the people who listened to my gigatron songs would know
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 02:03 PM
that doesn't really improve this
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 02:07 PM
Its the fact that i hate mainstream, when i started rapping i made mainstream songs, when i realized what i was doing i changed an went back to non mainstream, an i have 2 or 3 songs where my old self is basically saying im crazy cuz im changing out of mainstream cuz its more popular an will get me famous faster. everysong tells a story, only some people can read them, you obviously like songs the are more singing raps, than straight out raps i can tell cuz everysong like mine, straight out u say is bad
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 02:08 PM
No, most roblox rappers and by most i mean 99.9% of roblox rappers suck. That's why I say they're bad.
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 02:11 PM
you rap this the way u think it goes, if u heard half the roblox raps being rapped with beats an stuff you'd like them more, thats why songs are more famous then free styles with no beat, you probaly like lil wayne an drake an stuff, they all suck they ruined rap to the point were the will not get it back an what they do isnt hardly even rap lil wayne talks and drake sings, drake is a good siinger
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 02:15 PM
I hate both Wayne and Drake so please quit trying to tell me what music I like because you can't rap.
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 02:20 PM
You know only 3 people think i suck and your one of them 3 different people say im in there top 3-5 and im ones favorite and alot of people say im good plus im signed and have been signed to 5 different labels i think, u can say i suck, but more people think i dont so therefore i do not suck, and who do u like then?
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 02:21 PM
a roblox record label doesn't make you talented. It's a group that pretends to be a real label and probably steals a name from an actual label.
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 02:23 PM
Your going off track, i asked what rappers u like?
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jason8630 is not online. jason8630
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15 Aug 2012 02:25 PM
You still mentioned the label so it's not off subject. But since you're so curious

Ice Cube
Ice-T
Big L
2Pac
Big Pun
N.W.A
Snoop Doggy Dogg
Nate Dogg
Murda Ma$e
Mobb Deep
Hopsin
J. Cole
Lupe Fiasco
DMX
50 Cent
Eminem
Notorious B.I.G
Grandmaster Flash and The Furious Five
Wu-Tang Clan
Nas
Method Man
Redman
and so on
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 02:27 PM
ok were done here just rate the song 1-10 even tho i have an idea what it will be
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icecrafter213 is not online. icecrafter213
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15 Aug 2012 03:26 PM
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KingbrandonG is not online. KingbrandonG
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15 Aug 2012 07:12 PM
you think everything does..
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legojo is not online. legojo
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15 Aug 2012 07:27 PM
Try a bedazzler that'll spruce up your swag juice. No but seriously this needs some work.
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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15 Aug 2012 08:11 PM
I stopped where Jason stopped. That was so stupid I didn't want any more.
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m9bob is not online. m9bob
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17 Dec 2012 07:44 PM
It was good, but you gotta feel your words. Your just putting random words that sound good and put more words that ryhme with them. When you rap you gotta feel it. You gotta feel the pain and what your song is saying. What the message is. I would show u my raps but I'm afraid somebody will steal them. Saying all these cool words dont mean nothing. You gotta hear the words, feel them and live them. And don't be a jerk about it guys. He's done good.
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Skaterboy693 is not online. Skaterboy693
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17 Dec 2012 07:47 PM
" alot of people on roblox aren't DEEP :P"
because rapping about making people urinate themselves is really deep
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17 Nov 2013 03:37 AM
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