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| 13 Aug 2012 03:25 PM |
Chapter:One~Introducing Kopervich Date:7/1st/2055-10:24PM(EST). Location:Kopervich,Russia,Earth,Sol. Character:UAF Commander John Hevn(1st Person View).
The twisted metal, burning from the Bright, fire filled Lava. I enter a Small cave, about 25 feet by 20 feet. It was perfect for a rally.
"What's happening?",I asked as I reached into the Crate, shifting the Drinks, and food around until I fount the Heaven Falcon.
"Well,Commander sir, TRA invaded 6 in a half hours ago. A spy somehow passed our security codes, and hacked the Gate. Once that happened, we had no control of the Gate, and TRA Soldiers just poured into the...", A large explsion blew near by, pausing Captain Tom.Captain Tom continued.
"As I was saying, they poured into the base. Hundreds of them. They believe they've won, but they don't know of our plan."
"Well, what's the plan?",I asked, while taking ammo from the Crate.
"Speak with Major Zuhayr, He came up with it."
I walked over to Zuhayr, but I tripped, probally becuase of the Explosion startling me.
"Are you okay?John?",Asked Zuhayr after taking a 'shot'.
"Yeah, I am. Thanks for asking.",I told him, he was now sitting on a Plastic chair.
"Well, what's the plan?"
"The plan?Oh, yeah, the plan. Well, I think that we should take out the Artillery first, I already sent a Recon Force to Three of the Artillery dug-ins that TRA has. Once the red light on my Radio turns green, the reason of this is becuase they are looking for our radio signals, so we can't use the radio. Well, once it turns green, we'll know that they have signalled the UAV to send twelve missiles upon the Artillery dug-ins, four for each Dug-in, after that we won't have much of a problem with the Artillery..."
Major Zuhayr took another 'shot', and then set the empty glass on the table.
"After that, we'll be able to cut across the field, and take out the Hacking Station. Once that is done, it'll get their attention, and they'll send soldiers to the Hacking Station. Once those soldiers pass our snipers, they'll be no escape. Once the soldiers are dead, we'll take the TRA Uniforms, and head into the base, and turn on the Dog-Tag Scanner Security System, which if they don't have UAF Dog-Tags, they'll be shot. We'll escape through a secret passage. They won't know what hit them,haha."
"This seems complex, and Challenging. Is it?",I asked after finishing loading the Falcon Heaven.
"It is, but it'll send a message to TRA,and Toni that we can carry through the most Complex, and Challenging plans.hehehe.",Said Major Zuhayr after picking up his Eagle.
Zuhayr picked up his Radio, then the light turned Green. He looked at me, and said,"It's time."
[To be Continued]
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caw454
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:30 PM |
Cool...
~Approved by John C Malakas~ |
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:31 PM |
| It better seem legit. This took a while, especially with my 1st Person turning to a 3rd person. I had to go through the whole thing just to make sure it's all 1st person. Lol. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:46 PM |
| I love how there is some big huge plan being explained. |
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rhinguin
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:50 PM |
kk.
(<->) TRA Major - Elite Squad Leader (<->) |
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| 13 Aug 2012 07:46 PM |
| Why didn't you add the part where after TRA takes the base they all leave and TRA's Air Brigade drops a huge nuclear bomb that says "TRA WINS! PEACE!" And it has the two fingers up. qq |
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| 14 Aug 2012 06:04 AM |
@football,and blaze.
I'm sorry, would you like me to make a picture story to where you can add your own words? |
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| 14 Aug 2012 06:33 AM |
| You copied the idea from me! I made up the first story! copier! |
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| 14 Aug 2012 07:17 AM |
| Lewis, I didn't copy any story. |
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