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| 13 Aug 2012 12:07 PM |
A boy name thesus was running through the woods one night and ran into a tree because every one picking on him about how he fights and he always would lose to all of them even to the weak. One day he joined a group named "THE ELITE" he got trained and trained they made him a warrior the man he wanted to be in the past. but then the warrior got betrayed and stab right into his chest and every body knew him as their captian but they respected that he was dead. But as the legend escape the under world and killed the beast of all beast, but then the legend thought he would kill the man who killed him and betrayed him. But he would have to get through adventures to kill the man. As he breathes outta his mouth the huge minotaur comes out.The big huge muscle minotaur screams in thesus's face like he was the man but thesus was not afraid to kill him so he took his sword out and sliced the minotaurs head off like it is a pie.after almost reaching the path to robloxia thesus has a vision of that day when the man who killed him kenstone was his name about getting his chest cut into. in anger thesus kicked the door down and looked at kenstone and some voice said you cannot deafeat kenstone without the power of robloxia thesus then thesus heard, he said who are you,then the voice said look at the statue it me your sister luce and he said i never heard of you i never thought I had a sister and she said lets just move on.she pulled the leather to the stormy waters to the power of robloxia and thesus said I have one more question luce how would I get across,then should lead the invisible path to it.after crossing the invisible path thesus was wet and dirty. but then he saw the box and opened it.the bo revealed ultimate legendary powers of robloxia then he felt the power and he screamed luuuuuuuuuuuuuccccccceeeee!. she appeared and said now you can defeat kenstone.as thesus made a big power of sheldetsky's illuiam bolt he shot kenstones head off then king robloxus came down and crowned him the robloxian of fear.
The end. Part two coming soon. |
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dildry
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| 13 Aug 2012 12:18 PM |
| It wasn't a good story way to fast and the legend is a bit undetailed i mean seriously thesus a group named elite then all of the sudden his sister appears i rate it 4/10 hope you improve in lore cause this story was made way too fast. |
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