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| 13 Aug 2012 02:24 AM |
People keep asking me when my new albums gunna drop That's all I hear non stop Till they call the cops And there forced to pops some obsessed fan in the head And I start thinking its my fault that that boys dead and it Seems like all the fans that stay quiet Are the same ones to start the riot But in there mind it's like why not I cant be caught Well I have a fair share of insanity And I owe the world an apology For my rude misbehavior I'm a danger To the people around me Gee I might as well just agree
How many times do I need to brake Before I shader Step up high, to the top of the ladder Faster Undead like Casper Still the master Mainly at being a disaster Forget this, back to the track (Ok) Your lyrics are close to broken Ready to burn start to smoke them I'm a flammable radical Ignite the light with flame and gasoline Share the flare across the nation Don't get burned better start racing Now Watch'er feet it's at your feel this won't be neat Just face defeat when it's over it's over You talent won't drag Last years mix like a used up rag Quit dissing the raps that I'm spitting I'm just filling the world with knowledge Taking you to college Acknowledge what skill really feel like When your best fans go on strike Just to see you And wish they can do everything you do
And it's like design Written in my mind every time I grab a sheep of paper Maybe I should just write later Since writers block Can turn into a lock Don't know what to say when I'm on the stage They expect a song But what's blank is my page And it's an issue Having to write lyrics on a used up tissue But those lyrics are the same ones that I use to diss you |
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| 13 Aug 2012 02:37 AM |
| Nice man great song, I could never do that XD |
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| 13 Aug 2012 02:42 AM |
| Thanks man I'm really happy your supporting me. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:05 AM |
| Half of it was just rhyming, no flow or style... That and the storyline was mix-matched. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:07 AM |
| Well thats your opinion and you can't tell if there's a flow or not since I typed it. If you hear me preform it you'd think differently. Your opinion and I respect that. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:54 AM |
| I'm hopeing and aiming for 1,000 views within the time of a week. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 03:56 AM |
| I posted this 12:30 Monday August 13, 2012 so 1,000 views by the 20th |
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| 13 Aug 2012 04:15 AM |
| I think u could make 1000 views in a week that's easy u already have 400. XD |
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| 13 Aug 2012 04:16 AM |
| Ur do famous man, 400 views already. U lucky. :) |
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| 13 Aug 2012 05:12 AM |
OMG a good one. i love this song <3 I like the part when you say:
And it's like design Written in my mind every time I grab a sheep of paper Maybe I should just write later Since writers block Can turn into a lock Don't know what to say when I'm on the stage They expect a song But what's blank is my page And it's an issue Having to write lyrics on a used up tissue But those lyrics are the same ones that I use to diss you |
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| 13 Aug 2012 05:29 AM |
| Thank you thank you! I thought of that rhyme when I had my demo songs being made. I have 5 songs before this that I never puplished. I write all my songs on my iPod notes section. I also have a note page hats called "Lyrics In Storage" which is basicly every rhyme I make but I'm bussy so I can't write at that moment so I jot the rhyme down. Yeah so I had that one for a while. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 05:37 AM |
Keep your eyes up your nose And And continue like you always know XD
That seriously rimes. i will maby wrote a little song |
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:20 AM |
| Nice song but this must've taken a lot refreshing XD You basicly had a convo with with 2 people and then 400 views by 3am. Lol something's wrong with that picture XD |
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:32 AM |
| Well I actually do my best lyrical writing when most people are asleep, and I'm way to bussy in the day anyways so I couldn't do it then if I wanted. Oh and about the conversation I guessing im just exited Since this is my first song. I like to reply to people who give me feedback. Still glad you liked it. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:34 AM |
| You saying in staying up till 3am and that's a problem but it's kinda funny how you reply at 4am. There's not much of a different. XD |
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altar30
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:35 AM |
| That still doesn't explain the whole refreshing thing, you kinda missed the whole point of my post -_- |
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:40 AM |
| Topi Ted out like 5 things so 4/5 is enough. One of those things you posted was about having conversations and that's bad we'll then stop posting questions. Your starting the conversation. And I'm not refreshing it to get views. It's an open forum. Anyone can see it. |
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altar30
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:41 AM |
| XD Are you having a seizure cause nothing in thy made any sense |
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:42 AM |
| *You posted like 5 things so 4/5 is enough |
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| 13 Aug 2012 06:43 AM |
| And no,, my post all was referring to the refreshing thing but I guess you couldn't comprehend that :P |
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