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Re: My 1st Song "Radical" Written By Me!

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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
Joined: 14 Jun 2011
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13 Aug 2012 02:24 AM
People keep asking me when my new albums gunna drop
That's all I hear non stop
Till they call the cops
And there forced to pops
some obsessed fan in the head 
And I start thinking its my fault that that boys dead 
and it Seems like all the fans that stay quiet
Are the same ones to start the riot
But in there mind it's like why not
I cant be caught
Well I have a fair share of insanity
And I owe the world an apology
For my rude misbehavior
I'm a danger
To the people around me
Gee I might as well just agree

How many times do I need to brake
Before I shader
Step up high, to the top of the ladder
Faster
Undead like Casper
Still the master
Mainly at being a disaster
Forget this, back to the track
(Ok)
Your lyrics are close to broken
Ready to burn start to smoke them
I'm a flammable radical
Ignite the light with flame and gasoline
Share the flare across the nation
Don't get burned better start racing
Now Watch'er feet it's at your feel this won't be neat
Just face defeat when it's over it's over
You talent won't drag
Last years mix like a used up rag
Quit dissing the raps that I'm spitting
I'm just filling the world with knowledge
Taking you to college
Acknowledge what skill really feel like
When your best fans go on strike
Just to see you
And wish they can do everything you do

And it's like design 
Written in my mind every time
I grab a sheep of paper
Maybe I should just write later 
Since writers block
Can turn into a lock
Don't know what to say when I'm on the stage
They expect a song 
But what's blank is my page
And it's an issue
Having to write lyrics on a used up tissue
But those lyrics are the same ones that I use to diss you
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RichBossPunk888 is not online. RichBossPunk888
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13 Aug 2012 02:37 AM
Nice man great song, I could never do that XD
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 02:42 AM
Thanks man I'm really happy your supporting me.
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legojo is not online. legojo
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13 Aug 2012 03:05 AM
Half of it was just rhyming, no flow or style... That and the storyline was mix-matched.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 03:07 AM
Well thats your opinion and you can't tell if there's a flow or not since I typed it. If you hear me preform it you'd think differently. Your opinion and I respect that.
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crushbob7 is not online. crushbob7
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13 Aug 2012 03:14 AM
Nice song dude
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 03:15 AM
Thanks man
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 03:54 AM
I'm hopeing and aiming for 1,000 views within the time of a week.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 03:56 AM
I posted this 12:30 Monday August 13, 2012 so 1,000 views by the 20th
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RichBossPunk888 is not online. RichBossPunk888
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13 Aug 2012 04:15 AM
I think u could make 1000 views in a week that's easy u already have 400. XD
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RichBossPunk888 is not online. RichBossPunk888
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13 Aug 2012 04:16 AM
Ur do famous man, 400 views already. U lucky. :)
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 04:16 AM
I really hope so.
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sacura1234 is not online. sacura1234
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13 Aug 2012 05:12 AM
OMG a good one. i love this song <3
I like the part when you say:

And it's like design
Written in my mind every time
I grab a sheep of paper
Maybe I should just write later
Since writers block
Can turn into a lock
Don't know what to say when I'm on the stage
They expect a song
But what's blank is my page
And it's an issue
Having to write lyrics on a used up tissue
But those lyrics are the same ones that I use to diss you
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 05:29 AM
Thank you thank you! I thought of that rhyme when I had my demo songs being made. I have 5 songs before this that I never puplished. I write all my songs on my iPod notes section. I also have a note page hats called "Lyrics In Storage" which is basicly every rhyme I make but I'm bussy so I can't write at that moment so I jot the rhyme down. Yeah so I had that one for a while.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 05:31 AM
*Thats
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sacura1234 is not online. sacura1234
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13 Aug 2012 05:37 AM
Keep your eyes up your nose And And continue like you always know XD

That seriously rimes.
i will maby wrote a little song
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 05:56 AM
Cool
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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13 Aug 2012 06:20 AM
Nice song but this must've taken a lot refreshing XD You basicly had a convo with with 2 people and then 400 views by 3am. Lol something's wrong with that picture XD
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 06:32 AM
Well I actually do my best lyrical writing when most people are asleep, and I'm way to bussy in the day anyways so I couldn't do it then if I wanted. Oh and about the conversation I guessing im just exited Since this is my first song. I like to reply to people who give me feedback. Still glad you liked it.
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 06:34 AM
You saying in staying up till 3am and that's a problem but it's kinda funny how you reply at 4am. There's not much of a different. XD
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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13 Aug 2012 06:35 AM
That still doesn't explain the whole refreshing thing, you kinda missed the whole point of my post -_-
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 06:40 AM
Topi Ted out like 5 things so 4/5 is enough. One of those things you posted was about having conversations and that's bad we'll then stop posting questions. Your starting the conversation. And I'm not refreshing it to get views. It's an open forum. Anyone can see it.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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13 Aug 2012 06:41 AM
XD Are you having a seizure cause nothing in thy made any sense
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ICESHACK3000 is not online. ICESHACK3000
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13 Aug 2012 06:42 AM
*You posted like 5 things so 4/5 is enough
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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13 Aug 2012 06:43 AM
And no,, my post all was referring to the refreshing thing but I guess you couldn't comprehend that :P
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