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| 10 Aug 2012 09:07 PM |
Chapter 1: July 23rd, 2042, The Beginning
Telamon and Builderman were found stabbed in their stomachs in the basement of a brand new ROBLOX HQ. While police were investigating, the entire building was blown up, with the police caught inside, along with the most of the ROBLOX moderators. This started an entire war, with nuclear bombs being dropped on places such as: Sonic's 5 star hotel; The other ROBLOX HQ; and crossroads. The group that dropped these bombs? The Renegades, a group of 500+ members who just wanted one thing: Classic ROBLOX. But, will these renegades kill themselves in the progress?
--- To be continued in Chapter 2 --- |
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| 10 Aug 2012 09:11 PM |
| This will only be continued if I 5 people asking for it to be continued :O |
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| 10 Aug 2012 09:34 PM |
| YOu know what, this is fun to write. I will :) |
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| 10 Aug 2012 09:46 PM |
Chapter 2: In the midst of destruction...
In a small town known as Communauté Happy Place fermée, the renegades home base, ROBLOX troops came swarming in. 200 of the renegades were there, and there were only fifty soldiers, yet the ROBLOX troops main general was there. This was about 3 minutes before the nuclear detonation. 4 troops were suddenly found dead, with knives in their hearts, and then suddenly, renegade troops started killing troops off of their ATVs, then riding them with G18's in their hands. They were killing most of the army. The general was kidnapped in the midst of this destruction, and then taken to a fallout shelter for questioning. His legs were broken, and a gas grenade was set off. He didn't have a gas mask. The 50 renegades that were in the room all did. More and more renegades came into the room, laughing at the general as he wasted away. Finally, the renegades emptied the room, but locked the door. It was a fake fallout shelter! The general thought. The general somehow unlocked the door, but as soon as he did, 4 packs of C4 exploded simultaneously. The general was dead. The ROBLOX Army started to flee, but most of them were killed. The group of renegades, along with the rest of their army spread into 5 fallout shelters. The Renegade leader pressed a button... and 7 nuclear missiles were shot off into the air
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| 10 Aug 2012 10:00 PM |
Chapter 3.0: The Aftermath
*2 weeks later*
*The renegades come out of the shelter*
"I think we're good" Renegade leader, Dust says.
"Keep your gas masks on!!!!" Warns Ghost, a colonel.
"¡Ahí están! Por ellos!" Yells a ROBLOXian leader from Mexico.
"Oh no! They've spotted us! Get your guns out!!!" Says Ghost.
-- To be continued in 3.5, for now I am tired -- |
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| 10 Aug 2012 11:05 PM |
| One tip of improvement, the pace of the story is too fast, try to go slower. |
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| 11 Aug 2012 02:07 AM |
| If they want classic Roblox back then why would they nuke crossroads? |
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| 11 Aug 2012 11:44 AM |
| @MEP, I forgot a small detail, crossroads was turned into a terrain place. |
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| 11 Aug 2012 11:45 AM |
| @Nick, I'll try to go a little slower. |
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| 11 Aug 2012 11:52 AM |
Chapter 3.5: The Aftermath: Pt. 2
*Ghosts hops into a boat* "Get on!" He screams
One of the renegades, Dart, sets up a turret on the boat, which was at one time, a luxury cruise liner.
"They're retreating!" Screams dart.
*BOOM*
"What the &$^% was that?!" Yells ghost from the captains quarter.
*Dart sees them laughing as they hold up a remote control*
"Damn, they have C4 all over the boat!" Yells dart.
"Get the hell off of the boat! Now!!" Screams ghost.
*BOOM*
"The engine's out!" Yells dart.
The renegades then start to retreat from the boat and go to the shore.
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| 11 Aug 2012 12:08 PM |
Chapter 4: World domination
*1 hour later*
"Goodbye, mate" Dust says he slits the throat of the last remaining ROBLOX leader from Mexico.
(ROBLOX has now branched to most countries in the world, such as Japan, spain etc.)
"We have America and Mexico, and Canada has retreated. We also received the St. islands" Says dust, later at their HQ.
"We have their weak spot: California." Says Ghost
"That's not enough" Says Dust.
"This is what has to be done."
Dust picks up a C4 remote control and detonates it. He then shows a video of ROBLOX: Mexican division blowing up. "Now we have Mexico" Says Dust.
He then shows a video of ROBLOX: Canadian division being transformed into a Renegade HQ.
"How's dart doing in the Medical room?" Asks ghost.
"Pretty good, they have him bandaged up. He won't be fighting for a couple of weeks though. They also found a fractured wrist, along with the broken leg from the explosion. He'll be fine, though" Says Dust. "We have to get the rest of the world. For now, we rest"
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| 14 Aug 2012 07:32 PM |
Chapter 5: The New Enemy
"MMPHMPPHMPHPMPH!!!!" Screams Dart, as a ROBLOX leader is gagging him, while a knife is in his chest.
*1 hour later*
"Ghost! I think I found something!" Yells Dust
*Ghosts approaches the body*
"Oh %^$#..." Sighs ghost
*Dust picks up a can of gasoline*
"We'll miss you, mate..." Says dust, with a tear in his eye. He slowly removes the knife and puts it in a glass case. He then locks the case.
"We'll put it in a better place, dart... I promise" Says Ghost, as he pours gasoline over the dead body.
*Dust takes out a match and throws it on to the body and then scoops the ashes into a Paper Mache case*
"WE'LL KILL THAT BAS****!!!!!" Screams ghost. "I PROMISE IT ON MY (&%& LIFE, DART!"
-- To be continued --
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| 19 Aug 2012 04:12 PM |
| I guess no one wants Chapter 6.. |
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