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| 08 Aug 2012 08:06 PM |
Chapter 1-Black Snow
Frostarias capitol, Solstice City. So locked down that not a single non-frostarian could enter without permission from the Chief of Secruity, Admiral Metrac. But Admiral Metrac was away to the Sparrow Mansion on important buisness.
The snow was falling very gently. A Frostarian convoy had just come back from Fort Fang, as the war was now over. The trucks full of troops had begun to pull into the main gates for security checks.
"T-1, All clear." Reported a secruity agent. The first truck moved forward. "T-2, All clear." The truck began to pull away but came to a short stop.
The agent knit his eyebrows. BOOOOM! The truck exploded, triggering a domino effect on the other convoy behind it. Troops jumped from their transports as fire lit the main gate.
The agent was dazed. Although, he regained consciousness quickly. Heavy fire started rainining down from above. "Tango's, roofside!" He loaded a mag into his cyclone and began to supress while running towards the nearest building.
He kicked in the door and called for the other soldiers that were still alive,"Come on!"
As the troops started for the building the agent walked over to a table and flipped it so the top was facing the door. The troops rushed through the door and ducked behind the table as bullets flew threw.
"Where the hell is Metrac!" One of the troops asked.
"On duty at the Mansion. Radio in for help." Replied the now angered agent, firing a mag out the door.
"Sir!" Another troop got the agents attention,"It's going to be 0200 hours until reinforcments arrive!"
"Then let's get fighting." Smerked the agent. ___________________________________________________________________________ Who is this mysterious force? Stay tuned to find out! |
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| 08 Aug 2012 08:12 PM |
Leave feedback below. -----v |
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Chantroom
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| 08 Aug 2012 08:14 PM |
| Post the next chapter here, or post a link |
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| 08 Aug 2012 08:15 PM |
| I was planning on posting the chapters here. Any comments on the story? Good or bad? |
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Chantroom
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| 08 Aug 2012 08:29 PM |
| Thanks. :) Anything specific? |
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| 08 Aug 2012 08:31 PM |
legitimate
go qq in that other corner, k? |
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| 08 Aug 2012 08:34 PM |
| Chapter two should be up tomorrow afternoon. Approximately no later than 2000 hours from now. |
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tyricul
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| 09 Aug 2012 11:44 AM |
| I'll start writing chapter 2 now. |
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| 09 Aug 2012 12:12 PM |
Chapter 2-Red Skies
"We need to get moving!" Commanded a soldier.
"We will! But for now we need to sit tight and get to know each other a bit. Heh heh." Joked the Agent.
"Get to know each other, eh." Mumble one of the other two. "I'm Luggage, that's hawk," he pointed to the man with short brown hair and dark red eyes. "and this is Ace." Ace was the soldier that commanded them to get moving. He was the shortest but did very well with his Scouter.
"I'm Iceman," said the short black haired agent. He wore a black suit and carried a standard cyclone."Now are we going to play little Kindergarten games or are we going to kick some a-" FWOOOM a rocket whizzed through the door way and over their heads, exploding against the back wall.
Large chuncks of stone-wall flew. "Let's move!" Ordered Iceman, "Through the back wall!"
The group got up and ran, dodging bullets flying through the window. When they emerged from the hole in the wall they ended up in an alley way. "Look!" Hawk pointed to a fire escape. "We can use it to get onto the roof and have a fair chance!"
He trotted over to the fire escape and helped Luggage, Iceman and Ace up on the fire escape. They then helped him up and worked their way to the top.
"Shhhh," Ace pulled out his mauler and whispered. "Tango, 4 feet away." He pulled the enemy troop down, and then threw him to the floor of the alley, He was dead.
Ace laid down and put a supressor on his Scouter. He took out the two other enemies on the rooftop. He checked the other rooftops and spotted a few others, quickly eliminating them."All clear."
Luggage hustled to the edge of the wall and mounted his Supressor. He open fired on the other rooftop that Ace could not see. "Look! Admiral Metrac is here!"
A large aircraft barge came into view above the city. "Pop a flare!" Shouted hawk. A green smoke filled the rooftop. "Wooohoooo!"
BOOOOM! Iceman fell to the floor in shame. "Damn it!" The aircraft exploded and came down on an entire block just across the street. Fire lit the dark skyline. ___________________________________________________________________________ Did Admiral Metrac survive? And who is the attacking force? Stay tuned to find out! |
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| 09 Aug 2012 12:14 PM |
| Can you put me in it, either put TGI in it and I am a centurion, or put me as a conscript who is insanely happy to be in action |
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| 09 Aug 2012 12:17 PM |
| I guess I'll make it so TGI come's in for backup and you're in command. I'll make your codename Chant. But it will have to be in Chapter 4. And this does not mean that everyone can be a character to everyone else. I may decide to let others be a character soon. |
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| 09 Aug 2012 01:07 PM |
mmm sassy me.
swag|something we asians got
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| 09 Aug 2012 01:24 PM |
| i just want to know if im in it am i? |
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| 09 Aug 2012 01:25 PM |
| Hmm. After chapter 4 I will ask everybody why they think they deserve to be in it. If it's good enough then they get it. |
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| 09 Aug 2012 01:28 PM |
Nice.
I'm Kaelan Velox Immortalis, if you would put me in.
I don't mind though. |
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| 09 Aug 2012 01:32 PM |
| I have plans for everyone. But don't be sad if your character dies. |
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