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| 09 Aug 2012 05:45 PM |
title:swagg cant lie
Aurthor:shervin987
(hook) 1: swagg cant lie, bust it through the sky, like will never die, through day light,swagg cant lie, bust it through the sky, like will never die, through day light,
(verse) 1: yall no im bleesed, fiiting those jeans, swagging with the long hair, swaggs goin everywhere, bossing wit duh new boss, cuz dis is my first song, all my swagg is goin off, ishyness is blowing soft, swagg swagg.
(hook) 2: swagg cant lie, bust it through the sky, like will never die, through day light, swagg cant lie, bust it through the sky, like will never die, through day light,
(verse) 2: u know im on dhat grey hey, blowing it in every way, acting like i got burned from a trey, shout outs to my nikka blake, so ima ball wit dha miami heats, lebrons lineup got messed up any ways.
(hook) 3: swagg cant lie, bust it through the sky, like will never die, through day light, swagg cant lie, bust it through the sky, like will never die, through day light,
(ending): first of all, im straight,-_- lil b said im drake, i show off my swagg, and reduce the lag, next thing u know the awards in my hand
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AusRotten
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| 09 Aug 2012 05:48 PM |
I think about three words were spelled right, and seeing as I can barely spell in Welsh let alone English, that's saying something. No capital letters apart from "Aurthor" (spelled wrong). "swagg" <--- Self-explanatory. The title was not only a terrible idea but there were no capitals (as mentioned earlier) and no apostrophe in "can't". And it ended with "first of all". Bad, very bad, -78/10
Thank you and please come again/ :) |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:02 PM |
| thank you for hating like u can do better it was just a fast first rap for me and i dont like how u hated i tihnk its mean if u have nuthing positive to say dont say anything at all |
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AusRotten
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:07 PM |
But then you probably would have raged about nobody replying to your thread, so at least you're getting publicity bro. "Rather be hated than ignored," as said by LCB, right? Right. :D |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:08 PM |
| Shervin don't got to cuss in his raps to sell records. WELL I DO. SO F&^% HIM AND F&%& YOU TOO! |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:13 PM |
| Why is the Eminem reference bad? D: |
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AusRotten
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:14 PM |
"Why is the *Eminem* reference bad?" Answered your own question mate. |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:15 PM |
| I actually read this. Or tried to. It made no sense, not just because of the grammar, it's just f**** nonsense. |
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AusRotten
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:17 PM |
But it can be good lol nonsense! As Google Translate, it's so bad it's funny! Although it was not such a bad rap funny. It was bad.
See? GT makes things fun. This rap does not. My ever-flawless logic has, once again, won every award ever invented, ever. |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:19 PM |
| LOL, he invited me to a party! XD |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:20 PM |
Emimen's pretty cachu* in my opinion. And the OP? ?What.
*censors require me to foreign-ise. :'( |
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| 09 Aug 2012 07:13 PM |
I can make better, And you my friend just wrote crap. You can't even spell either. And the reference.
Most Rap is Crap.
~Metal Will Conquer All Minds~ |
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| 09 Aug 2012 09:09 PM |
| Sucked e_e my eyes barfed, you cannot rap e_e |
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| 09 Aug 2012 09:12 PM |
| This was bad. And @OP, if you can't deal with negative criticism, good luck being famous if that ever happens, cause you'll need it. |
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Gary141
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| 09 Aug 2012 09:19 PM |
"ishyness"
what the... What? Is that even a misspelling? |
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| 09 Aug 2012 09:19 PM |
| This idiot really just put a bunch of nonsense words in one place... He could never rap, especially compared to Tupac or Eminem. |
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| 13 Aug 2012 11:28 PM |
| i actually like this song. it's funny |
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| 14 Aug 2012 07:46 PM |
| How can anyone like this song? DAR SOMETHING WRONG WITH YA BRAIN DERPY!!! |
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