altar30
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:20 PM |
He was the leader of the football team, Living life so relaxed cause he was naturally lean, Then the team made it to the final game, But there leader felt like he was going lame. He needed an up but didn't have time on his clock, Till he met an odd fellow who was selling a rock. He pounded and smashed and sniffed it all, He got a burst and felt real tall, They won the game and he celebrated with more, Partied till dawn and woke up on the floor. He got up and something was wrong, He felt real weak and his face was real long. It didn't take long for him to know he was strung, He wishes he could go back but what's done is done. Lets call him Jimmy and he went into a depression or something like that, Checked into rehab but they didn't do cr@p. Jimmy couldn't take it, he needed his fix, Without being on it he felt real sick. Sunsets were no longer special, Jimmy's parents felt like he was mental, He robbed to pay for the fixes, nothing was sentimental. Jimmy's grades started to slip, And he started to skip, On class entirely cause it was a waste of his time. Jimmy felt embarrassed cause his friends confronted the issue, He told them to leave him alone, Jimmy didn't know what to do. He couldn't take it, no, it was too much stress, Jimmy grabbed a handgun and started to press But you know the rest. He over dosed that night cause he couldn't take the shot, Instead he shot the dealer that sold him the rock. So now there's 2 dead and one 10 word letter that's clear to see, It reads "See you in hell, by the way this from Jimmy" |
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:24 PM |
| The lyrics themselves are good. |
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altar30
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:32 PM |
| @ICE The song depicts Jimmy's use of addiction so i thought it would be cool if i added some sort of repition so that people get the idea its Jimmy did this or Jimmy did that. |
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altar30
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altar30
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:35 PM |
@ICE fair enough @Afraid Maybe i was talking about a magical rock that gives people super powers :P |
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altar30
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:42 PM |
| ^Magic Rocks that make you fly really high..............in the air |
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altar30
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:43 PM |
| @Afraid How would you know? |
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| 09 Aug 2012 03:58 PM |
| Nice story. Keep up it Rad |
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| 09 Aug 2012 04:31 PM |
| @Ducky Tell whats irritating about it |
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| 09 Aug 2012 06:58 PM |
9/10 absolutely horrible
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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