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| 06 Aug 2012 08:27 PM |
The planets were destroyed. The 10 people who survived were frozen in this cold little dome of air. Several bits of the planets were creating a planet with thousands of creatures and things waiting to be explored. Beautiful grottos, caves full of jewels and gems. The wisps of the planet were the things that kept it alive but there was one thing: lots of creatures roamed in the night. They were the remains of dark matter in shape. The ones who were the leaders of the darkness were the Shadow walkers. The creatures seemed to run on blood. The gods needed a sacrifice to keep them from going crazy. The annual sacrifice wasn't met and the creatures were ravaged. They needed to rebuild and fight off; You, must help them.
N@m3: @g3: Appearance: Clothes: Personality: T@lents: Items: J@b:(if none do: not employed) Bio:
1.Don't complain when you die make a new Cs. 2.If you don't want to build fight away monsters. 3.Don't continuously trolling I will report you. 4.Don't ask for admin I will choose admins. 5.Have fun.
My CS N@m3:Jay Hades
@g3:14
Appearance:blue eyes and white skin
Clothes:black jacket, Dark blue shirt and black jeans
Personality:Good sense of humour, Childish, nice and quirky
T@lents:Running
Items: Just his mothers picture and a lockett with a picture of him holding hands with his mothers picture
J@b:Not employed
Bio:His mother died at the @g3 of 7 and he's been on the run ever since he hitted a police officer when he was upset about him telling him that his mother died
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| 06 Aug 2012 08:30 PM |
| (How is it unoriginal describe it to me?) |
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| 06 Aug 2012 08:31 PM |
| Just the whole blood thirsty monsters attacking a small group of humans who must defend themselves, it seems overdone. |
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| 06 Aug 2012 08:35 PM |
The planets were destroyed. The 10 people who survived were frozen in this cold little dome of air. Several bits of the planets were creating a planet with thousands of creatures and things waiting to be explored. Beautiful grottos, caves full of jewels and gems. The wisps of the planet were the things that kept it alive but there was one thing: lots of creatures roamed in the night. They were the remains of dark matter in shape. The ones who were the leaders of the darkness were the Shadow walkers. The creatures seemed to run on the souls of the people. The gods needed a sacrifice to keep them from going crazy. The annual sacrifice wasn't met and the creatures were ravaged. They needed to rebuild and fight off; You, must help them. Is this better if it isn't can you tell me which part to edit. |
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| 06 Aug 2012 08:46 PM |
| (Anyone gonna join? Guess I'll have to get the lighter and burn it.) |
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| 06 Aug 2012 08:48 PM |
| Grabs lighter and says "Goodbye The monsters" burns thread. |
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| 06 Aug 2012 08:50 PM |
| Then his twin grabs the lighter and throws it away and kicks his twin back to Queensland "good riddance". |
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jcarsonw2
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| 07 Aug 2012 12:52 AM |
| Great! who wants to join!? |
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| 07 Aug 2012 05:37 AM |
| (Wait so you're a girl, dex? O.o) |
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| 07 Aug 2012 08:21 PM |
| Oops my sister went on my account I'll just change it |
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| 07 Aug 2012 08:23 PM |
| (Ok done lets get roleplaying. Who wants to join?) |
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| 10 Aug 2012 10:18 PM |
| (Aww anyone gonna join guess I might have to burn it.) |
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| 10 Aug 2012 10:38 PM |
| (just fly a kite and hope you get shocked. :3) |
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Leodin
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| Joined: 17 May 2010 |
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| 10 Aug 2012 11:13 PM |
Here is how the char sheet should look.
Name: age: Appearance: Clothes: Personality: Talents: Items: Job:(if none do: not employed) Bio: |
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DoomDark
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| 11 Aug 2012 02:09 AM |
| Also bad because The Monsters.I mean....monsters should be capital. You also need to make rules, a bigger plot, etc. |
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