agotart7
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| 04 Aug 2012 10:50 PM |
Chapter 1: Deployment RIC S/SGT Archie Vanduelar TRA OP/Fortress As we came into the fort old and war weary TRA soldiers looked at us. A corporal standing on the ramparts climbed down and looked at the column. The soldiers, desperate to get food, ammo, and equipment started to mingle in with the us a column of fresh troops. A Private who had lost an arm started asking for ammo and cigs. Then a medic started asking the column if they had any bandages, then he ran back to operate on a soldier who was stabbed in the wrist. The column marched on. A private looked back at the small outpost with the TRA flag in tatters and the barracks roof caved in and on fire. He asked, "When's our turn to go in?" A machine gunner, with a bloody bandage over his eye a pillbox on the side of a road replied, "To soon lad".
Chapter 2: The first night We walked through the gates of the old fortress with vigor in our hearts. We set up MGs on the gate and settled in our bunks. At around 1'o hundred we heard a gun shot, a scream, then a thud. Seconds later Sargent Walker burst through the door, "EVERYONE UP!!" We ran on he ramparts we looked over the armory of the OP went off screams of burning soldiers were heard. A soldier vomited over the side. Then a loud roar opened up a FEAR company was in the OP a sniper came up and set down his gun and began to fire. A Captain ran up. "GET EVERYONE UP!!", "We need to hold." LT. Ryan a RIC officer told the men, "I need a platoon to come with me to the OP." Everyone was silent, then a private spoke up. "I'll go", then another. "I'll go if Paige is go'in". Soon they had 70 men.
Chapter 3: Out side the silhouetted monster We moved along the road a man in a slit trench wounded, enough to be sent back, started talking to us, "I'll be eating eggs, steak and drinking fresh milk when I get home", he said. I went to get bandages and food for him from Medic. I came back, he must of dozed off, hands on lap head tilted forward. I shook him, his helmet fell of reviling a little red circle on his forehead; he was dead. The platoon marched forward, we reached the bridge leading to the OP there burnt bodies of the men who jumped into the water floated and bobbed. Hundreds more may in front of us. Some TRA, some FEAR, some RIC.
Chapter 4: Into the fray We came into the burning wreak, the meeting area in the barracks was full of casualties. The too was used as a officers area and a sleeping area if you could spare the time and ignore the fighting outside. As soon as we got there a full scale attack had begun. Flamethrowers engulfed the gate house and burned men alive. Then a loud boom and all went silent. Then screams of men were heard and a sizzle the smell of death and burnt flesh filled the air. A lucky shot incinerated the flamethrower, and burnt the men around. 40+ men lay severely burnt, dead, or dying. FEAR with drew from the area, for now.
Chapter 5: The end of a bloody struggle We regrouped, ate, repaired, and caught sleep. The fire was put out bodies in OP removed and layed to rest. I came to see what became of my friend SGT Baker. I found him he had been killed while holding the bridge, shot point blank and bayoneted. I was sick I stumbled back to the meeting center I came across a room with dead bayoneted soldiers, all had wounds other than a bayonet. One soldier told me that they had broken into the aid station and bayoneted the wounded. Sick I needed fresh air, then a heard cheers it was 4 RIC companies with 3 helicopters we were relieved and sent back to a rest area. I have seen enough of this war, if god keeps me alive, I promise to settle down on a farm and live a peaceful life. S/SGT Archie Vanduelar Was later KIA defending a cross roads. He bleed to death from mortar wounds. |
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Pratttan
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agotart7
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:02 PM |
| Sorry for the word wall, I am doing different people on all sides so I am doing each part as a story from a sides like a bomber crew from RIC, TRA Tanker, FEAR Infantry man, etc |
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Xroth
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agotart7
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:05 PM |
| It's Realistic Fiction I edited real stories to make it have more detail, and be more life like not online. |
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agotart7
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:11 PM |
| Like there aren't trenches at elite nor flame throwers and the max is 20 but I if I stuck the the real stuff it would be boring. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:35 PM |
| OH MY GOD, WHY DIDN'T YOU BECAME A WRITER! |
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agotart7
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:48 PM |
| The barracks* sorry I had to write it on a iPod, I do write military stuff for ROTC. |
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agotart7
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:51 PM |
| Bled/Bleed?* I wrote this on a iPod at 11pm sorry for grammar fails :/ |
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Kiraxs
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| 05 Aug 2012 12:06 AM |
| Dude, your story makes up for the grammar fails, this story is amazing! |
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agotart7
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Redsoxs4
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| 05 Aug 2012 07:40 AM |
| Then FEAR Puts Comet StarFighters And Blows up TRA and RIC's Bases. FEAR Wins and destroys all of the pockets of remaining forces. THE END. : ] |
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Xroth
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| 05 Aug 2012 07:55 AM |
This is pretty much what I visualized: http://www.roblox.com/TRA-FEAR-Skirmish-place?id=81060501 |
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hammer124
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eletrowiz
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| 05 Aug 2012 07:56 AM |
@xroth For a second there I thought it would be a pic trolling. .-. |
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agotart7
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| 05 Aug 2012 09:33 AM |
| @Ham It's realistic fiction so it is Fake and real. |
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DarkVakt
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agotart7
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| 05 Aug 2012 12:24 PM |
| bump, also I am making a new story :D |
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agotart7
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| 10 Aug 2012 03:56 PM |
| Heres PT 2 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=75190249 |
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