blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:35 PM |
| I am here to ask for a clean slate. I am willing to take advice better and will try to fix my spelling all I want is a new start. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:37 PM |
| You have my respect for doing this. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:37 PM |
Blanchey, if people are being rude to you than don't accept their advice.
They don't deserve your respect.
You never had a bad slate with me.
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:40 PM |
Alright.
I'll give you a few tips, and let everyone else drop in more.
You might want to try something more appealing then creepy-pastas. Maybe a make-your-own nation RP, Magic RPs (True-blood magic), and that sort of thing. Also, when using commas, remember these two rules.
One: When using a name, yes/no, or Also,Before,After, those sort of words, you use a comma. Two: When combining two sentences, put a comma in between them. Like this: Bob when to the store. He got milk, can be combined into: Bob when to the store, and got milk.
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:40 PM |
Slate's clean now on my record. You're actually pretty brave for saying that. You just earned several Maturity Points. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:40 PM |
| But mrgiraffe is a daft twit. I will allow you to have a clean slate. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:40 PM |
Sure bro.
Just try to go through a better RP thought process. |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:43 PM |
| Thanks everybody, I will try to make better roleplays. |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:47 PM |
Can I have everyone's advice on this rp. I need help making it better.
Setting: Renaissance and Medieval times.
Plot: Assassin storyline: The brotherhood has found the location of the last temple and making maps to it. A group of assassins went in the temple to face it's trials. Unluckily they never made it pass the third trial. The next group ran into Templar on the fourth. They had a deadly battle and only one assassin remained. Before he got to his brotherhood he triggered a trap and a huge ax came out of the wall and played pin the tail on the donkey in his head.
Templar storyline: They been watching the assassins for days. They too were looking for the temple but not to protect it but to steal the treasure inside. The rod that can give them the power to control the world. When the first group went in they made it to the fourth but the assassins got there at the same trial. They all fought and the Templar did not win. They sent in a new group.
Admin: Argoniannord(Is my brother and so you know he has better grammar so do not think he is me when I am off and plus since we do not have another internet cord to put in his room and hook it up to his computer we have to share this one and he is the one doing renaissance and I do medieval.#
Rules: 1: No god mod. 2. Make a character for the renaissance and medieval for storyline to go perfectly. 3.Roblox rules.
Tips: 1. It is better if you look up assassins creed music as you play this. It gets you in the mood and that is why I have been so focus making this RP. 2. I will say when we are doing renaissance and medieval. 3. Renaissance will be current time and Medieval is the past and is your ancestor
Medieval Character sheet: N.ame: A.ge: Bio: Gender: Date of death: How you died: Weapons:Hidden blade, sword, fist, and dagger/throwing knifes. Powers: Blend and eagle vision. Fraction:#Templar or assassin)
Renaissance Character sheet: N.ame: A.ge: Gender: Bio: Weapons:Double hidden blade, sword, fist, money bag, dagger/throwing knifes, smoke pellets, hidden gun, hidden poison blade, and bow and arrow. Powers: Blend and eagle vision. Faction: |
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:48 PM |
| Well, you really should scrap it. If you are dead set on it, you would need to collab it with people who like that genre, and even then, the out-come might be doubtful. |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:52 PM |
I guess you're clean... My squirrel wants your organs.
~I have a pet squirrel. He has a chainsaw.~ |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:55 PM |
| Ok. I am baking away from the squirrel and grabbing my 50 cilber chaingun. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:57 PM |
My squirrel is Chuck Norris.
~I have a pet squirrel. He has a chainsaw.~ |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 09:59 PM |
(Sorry creative)
I grab a note book and ran to chuck norris. "Can I have your autograph Chuck? I love your show Walker Texas Ranger." |
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| 04 Aug 2012 10:03 PM |
Walker, Txas Ranger is the most AMAZING SHOW EVER. Except maybe for Doctor Who.. Nah. WTR is still better. |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 10:04 PM |
| XD. Could someone help me on making a rp plesse and thank you. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 10:06 PM |
"I already have." Says Chuck.
~I have a pet squirrel. He has a chainsaw.~ |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:02 PM |
| Oh and say hello to my little freind! Shoots chuck blowing him up with a rocket luancher. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:19 PM |
"You can't kill me. I'm Chuck Norris." Says he.
~I have a pet squirrel. He has a chainsaw.~ |
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blanchey
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| 04 Aug 2012 11:26 PM |
| (Sorry but not even chuck can live from a rocket that hits you directly. His dead.) |
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