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| 04 Aug 2012 06:14 PM |
Don't let me go, Don't let me go. Baby I need you more than anything,Its like Peanut Butter and Jelly. I can't live without you. Even if I bow before you,I can't forget I'm in doubt to see you. Your eyes shined in front of mine,Baby your mine! Your own soul reminds me of your bravery. Baby your Devine. Please let me see your mercy. You disappoint me, But baby you mean more to me. Let Me Shine for you. When I think about you, You make me smile. I look up at the sky, Seeing you ignore me. I look away thinking, "Thats not important", Your ignorant. (Thinking of more,But for now I'm just gonna post little by little until the songs done. :D) |
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Crash6351
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| 04 Aug 2012 06:14 PM |
| This is so bad I expected a laugh track to follow it. |
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| 04 Aug 2012 06:34 PM |
seems kind of forced
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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lila47
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| 04 Aug 2012 08:19 PM |
| Ive been writing songs and rapping ever since I was 6, Im actually pretty good at it. :3 |
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| 05 Aug 2012 09:47 AM |
Don't let me go, Don't let me go. Baby I need you more than anything,Its like Peanut Butter and Jelly. I can't live without you. Even if I bow before you,I can't forget I'm in doubt to see you. Your eyes shined in front of mine,Baby your mine! Your own soul reminds me of your bravery. Baby your Devine. Please let me see your mercy. You disappoint me, But baby you mean more to me. Let Me Shine for you. When I think about you, You make me smile. I look up at the sky, Seeing you ignore me. I look away thinking, "Thats not important", Your ignorant. (Continued) I look you in your eyes. They shimmer like the stars. I open another door. To a good future. Your wondering why you Ignored me. I left you Ignorant. You stay behind. All alone. In the past. Trapped in thoughts. I leave your arms. Leave your trust. Leave you behind. I left you alone. (Rap time! :D) Leave him,Leave him! Leave him alone! Let him feel the shame. Of being in pain. You suffered enough. Let him be. Let him see the pain he caused you. Im done here,Now let her take the lead in this song she sang to you. (End of rap) I see it,I see the future. Her seeing her husband. Having a good life. You realise what you did wrong. You gave up and let her live her life happily. Knowing she will never forget you,But will hate you.... (End of song! :D Thanks guys! Credit to: lila47, She gave me idea's and inspired me to get back into singing/rapping! :D Thank you lila!! <3) |
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